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A human known only as 'Kid' finds himself sent to another world after a malfunction with The Bastion goes horribly wrong. As he explores this new world as a pony, he learns the Bastion didn't send him here by mistake and takes it upon himself to find out why. With the help of several others, can they help him learn of his mistakes? Or will the events of the Calamity continue to repeat in his world forever?

(Bastion x MLP crossover)

[Image courtesy of White-Pwny on Deviantart.com

Sequal to this story:: Return of the Ura

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 199 )

The very first story I created a long long time ago. (not in a galaxy far away.) Feedback is always appreciated! If something doesn't seem right, let me know ASAP. :twilightsmile:

Is it wrong that I read all that in Rucks voice?

393347 *This is so awesome! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Now, for the feedback: Grammar is fine, vocabulary is fine, capturing the atmosphere of Bastion is amazing... I only have good things to say about this! :pinkiehappy:

397870 Rucks is probably my favorite character Bastion. The people at Supergiant games really did a fine job in choosing him as a voice actor. :pinkiehappy:

Life changing.

Stay frosty!
~Hazard~

397928 THEIR EVERYWHERE! Wait until they invade Skyrim! OH SHIT! THEY ALREADY HAVE!
(Points to a chicken on the ground in Skyrim)
THERE!

Stay frosty!
~Hazard~

A few spelling errors here and there, but a good start. also, not to nit-pick, but the 'mace' is actually a hammer. It says that in the game.

397974 Thank you for catching that. :twilightoops:

edit: Fix'd

Well chap, bugger me sideways. I liked that. It was different and wonderful, and I am curious as to what you will name him.

If you think his pony name is strange, by all means let me know. :twilightblush:

The moment I saw this I instantly clicked on the thumbs up button and added to favorites.

Hammer Whirl seems fine, wonder what's with the ponies though...can't be the mane since they live in a technicolor society, maybe its the lack of color...

Pinkie be stalkin'? Giggity giggity goo! - Glassed :pinkiesick:

Stay frosty!
~Hazard~

Its funny because i chose the exact opposite choices in the game to those in the fic, really enjoying this though and cannot wait for the next chapter.

I wanna play this game...
BUT GODAMN STEAM WANTS TO FUCK EVERYTHING UP BY DESTROYING THE DEMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::twilightangry2:

Should I have Pinkie Pie talk more? She seems too... tame in this story? >_>

UnintentionalMishap is enjoying your story!

also Pinkie can never talk enough, but it seems fine

485650
Na, she seemed fine by me.
By the way every time I read this I play the Bastion OST, get me in the zone so to speak

Great chapter, i had pictured Zia as a zebra though

485823 Yeah I was hoping for a response like this. I was torn between her being a zebra or a unicorn, so I might change her before the next chapter.

I knew Pinkie knew this was going to happen. Still awesome. Now if you excuse me I have to go listen to Zia's song again.

Well considering the Ura were sort of Oriental looking, I would have thought she'd have been a Mongolian pony.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Rucks surely is going to drink apple cider under a tree with AJ :ajsmug:

I'M MOTHERFUDGING SLAGAR THE CRUEL!
LORD OF CAPS LOCKS!
SORROW OF WATERSHIP DOWN!
KING OF TOURS!
EATER OF FRIED ICECREAM AND ARCH DUKE OF SOME KNOWN COUNTRY IN AFRICA!
AND I CLAIM....
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547400
only the most epic thing to eat.
hard as hell to pull off but im sure u can manage.

You are now my favorite author.
3 reasons:

1. Bastion
2. Bastion.
3. Spelling Gryphon properly :D

Ah yes, this story is progressing rather well!

I'm eager to see where you go with this.:twilightsmile:

584160 I speak the famous quote from the medic in TF2...
"I HAVE NO IDEA!!!"

Disregard video games acquire MOAR ponies.

Wait, I though his name was Hammer Whirl?

584678 Oops, did I derp somewhere in the fanfic? :twilightoops:

YOU!!!
YES YOU!!!
YOU ARE AWESOME!!!
AND YOU SHOULD FEEL AWESOME!!!

I so called that one. Still, shit is about to get real

397870 I read everything in rucks voice nowadays.

547400
What it sounds like, they somehow put ice cream in a deep frier without melting it. It tastes wonderful. Of course, it has the secret incrediant of Pinkie Pie to make the ice cream stay cold :pinkiecrazy:

Pew Pew KILL ALL THE THIEFS

I thougt the kid would have at lest shot one in leg or cause some more damage than he did, but I still really enjoyed it.
Awesome work as always, looking foward to the next chapter

Holy Bat-Nuggets Seananners! Fantastic!

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