What happened to the wraith known as Nightmare Moon? Was she destroyed by the Elements of Harmony and dissapeared forever? No, with what remained of her dark powers she transported herself to the human world known as Earth and took control, transforming all who opposed her into her personal guard and her army and plunges the earth into eternal darkness. Five years have passed and her student, a human boy by the name of Chase, has had it with her. Using what she has taught him he transports himself to Equestria in the hopes of aqcuiring the assistance of the elements of harmony and ending her reign of his world forever.
This is my first ever story on this site, so fell free to critique my story and whenever i can i'll bring new chapters. Thnx everypony and long live Nightmare Moon. New cover image provided by HoodwinkeTales on here
MOAR!!!
>>Neon Pegasi
Patience Neon patience
You'll get more soon,by Luna i promise you
Intriguing story, can't wait for more!
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As i told Neon pegasi there will be more to come just need to get through the school week
Thank you for liking my story
MOAR
Good start mate! I am sure more and more people will read this.
Just picking out some flaws
In the first chapter it describes Chase using magic or some form of spells
But here he is described as a Pegasus
can you fix this, at first I thought he was a human, but then he was described as a pony but now I don't know which...
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Well let me ask you this, why would i first say he's an alicorn and that he cast a a spell that made anypony who looked at him a pegasus in the first story?
Maybe you should pay a bit more attention to the story man
Attention everypony, i will start working on chapter four tomorrow and see if i can publish it Friday. If not i'll try publishing it during the weekend, so to those of you demanding more, i'm talking to you Neon Pegasi and hiddenisbeastmo
, you'll be getting more by this weekend.
So thanks to everypony who read, will read, favourited, and liked Earth's Nightmare Era. I appreciate the positive feedback
I'm not really into sad/human fics, but the concept sounds good. I will give this a read-over later.
I wish there was more character dialogue. All this narration makes the whole thing feel more like a summary than an acutal story.
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Well i'm sorry like it says in the descrition, this is my first story. So i'm if the lack of dialouge is not to your interest, give me a break jeez.
1351725 *groan* Ok now I'm annoyed. I understand new writers come in either "full power to shields Mr. Spock" or with their pants down to their ankles, but it gets exasperating when people get offended at the littlest things.
In reference to my last comment, I was just giving a critique.
Next time I'll be sure to sugarcoat it with these: 
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Sorry at the time i was replying to the comment i wasn't in a good mood.
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Working on chapter five and with any luck I should be done by chapter six or seven
Chapter five will be a short chapter because of two things, one: The chapter will be about planning the battle with Nightmare Moon, and Two: I feel a little lazy on this chapter
Man i was so distracted while writing this but i finally got it done
Hope i can get the rest of it done
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oooh, foreshadowing! how ominous
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Had to do it eventually why not in chapter six
Alright almost done with the story. I am beat
I've decided to make Chapter seven the battle that i think everyone's been waiting for and as a bonus i'm going to spend any chance i can on a computer to work on ch seven, so be sure to wait patiently for the epic battle followed by the epilouge.
I'll add both chapters but work mainly on the battle.
Almost done withe 'Nightmare moon Vs the Elements of Harmony Round two'
next tuesday
Honestly not sure sometime next week but hey i'll get done eventually 
With any chance i should be done on
I hope
Liking where this is headed, but you need to proofread all the chapters. I noticed quite a bit of small errors on my way through.
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I know i proofread but errors still get by me which is why before i publish chapter seven i'm going to proofread it multiple times
Finally Done With The Chapter
expect it Published this weekend
After much typing, headaches, proofreading, editing, and actually working on this, I finally got this chapter done. Buck You Nightmare Moon!
I'll get started on the epilouge immediately.
AWESOME! Well worth the wait, mate! And I agree, Buck You Nightmare Moon!
Nice Chapter, but just one thing. The indentations are a little long. Try making them shorter.
1462373 Wait till you see the epilouge, when i write it of course
1462896 I know i know
Amazing, just purely amazing… ENCORE!!!!
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Wow thank you
Ok strike the 'starting and finishing the epilouge' statement, i just remembered that i'll be busy this weekend at Anime Bonzai
So i'll try starting it on Sunday evening at the earliest
And that is the end of the nightmare.
Thank Celestia i got it done and finally got Earth's Nightmare Era done, been working like a dog to get it done.
Well hope it's worth it.
Epic, just epic!
Purely amazing :D
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Why thank you
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This well get intesting
How come I've havn't seen any commentss lately on this story ( not counting mine)
3555085 maybe because no one reads this or any of my other stories anymore
Is it bad to read just because my name is chase
5038695 Nope its perfectly ok since hey its actually the author (aka me) who is the main protagonist
3629559 I smell a possible sequel! This story is off the Awesometer!!!!!!!
I liked this story, though it did seem a bit rushed.
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I agree!
Some grammar issues, (mainly capitalization of I's) but otherwise enjoyable. I would suggest re-writing/editing with an editor.
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He put an illusion spell on himself to make him look like a Pegasus.
Funny, they said the same thing about the holocaust.