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Joseph Raszagal


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*reads description*

Prepare yourself. Pony intervention incoming.

EDIT: For the record I mean IRL. DRUGZ IZ BAD.

Heroin, huh? Well, it's a "go big or go home" world out there, I guess. Hope he gets better.

I like your writing style. It's definitely going to ship up to be an interesting piece.

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Thanks, that made my morning :pinkiehappy: . My Captain Morgan's and I hope we don't disappoint! :yay:

This is gonna be awesome. I look forward to the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

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Well, judging by my bottle, I'd say you've got a couple more hours then :twilightsmile: . After that though, I think I'll take a break from writing and play some pinball :rainbowdetermined2: .

Love it. Nice development you have here.

I Like it but i wana see more drama. Have him do something brash in his hopeless attitude towards life, like having him jump off the edge of the balcony, you know something along those lines. MOAR DRAMA!!!

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With they way I've set the story up, I kind of feel like it would be out of character if Jeremy just jumped in front of the first passing bus or something :unsuresweetie: .

He had his death all planned out, down to the music playing and everything, but was interrupted before he could get the job done. Oh, and I think it bares repeating what interrupted him too! :pinkiehappy:

If I was going to commit suicide and a bunch of talking, Crayola-colored ponies tried to stop me, heck, I'd probably listen out of pure curiosity at first :twilightsheepish: . Then, afterward, who knows? Maybe a bit of comfort and the power of friendship could start to heal what had been broken :twilightsmile: .

Just feels like it would flow better that way :twistnerd: .

Thanks for the comment though! :pinkiehappy:

You've got good writing, but I don't think you properly portray a guy high on pills and heroin. Other than that, great job. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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You do have me there, I've never tried heroin and don't really want to :pinkiesick: . Still, I've messed with other opiates in general (opium, morphine, and oxycodone) and I have to assume that the results are similar.

Vicodin, on the other hoof, is a whole different bowl of fruit. Hazy, drowsiness-inducing fruit that makes bad TV more enjoyable. Don't drink on it though, your liver will kindly ask you to step outside and pummel you with a broken rake handle if you do :eeyup: .

Only if it was that easy to get back what you once had. Great work! Enjoying the character and your writing style keep it up!:pinkiehappy:

If I didn't know better, I'd say he is in Hell now.

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Nah, he's just reinacting Trainspotting :pinkiehappy: .

Also, no new chapter tonight, I caught a cold after a late night of drinking and watching Rush DVDs, so focusing is a little hard right now :pinkiesick: .

The cold I mentioned turned out to be a pretty mean flu, which was followed by an equally mean bout of depression, but hey, we all get depressed sometimes, right? As a result, here's more of the story, and I don't care a bit about spoilers. Jeremy's getting better :pinkiehappy: . Let's see how much better he gets :twilightsmile: .

500! This is getting so many more views than I ever imagined :pinkiehappy: . I was just kind of writing out my frustrations and it turned out this nicely. Thank you, to everypony who has read. Imma keep on churning out Jeremy's adventures! :raritystarry:

Btw, more pinball at my buddy's place, so judging by my mood things can only get happier from here... OR CAN THEY?

Also, MULTI-BALL ROUND! :pinkiecrazy:

I think I somewhat understand how this guy feels, ya see about a year and a half ago I was diagnosed with a nasty Cancerous Bone tumor. (I'm all good now) I was pretty depressed, A few times I would think about Suicide, course I never did though, and then the chemo... God fucking damnit that chemotherapy was hell, I was getting up to throw up every 4 hours or so without any pain killers or anti nausia stuff (whatever the fuck it was called)
and then I got addicted to Morphine pills, those where a pain tn the ass to get off of, and there's more too, but it would take a very long time to write all of it. so basically.

Whatever the fuck you do, DON'T EVER GET CANCER!

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Sorry you went through all of that :fluttercry: . I'm happy to hear that you're healthy and well now though :pinkiehappy: . Also, deal, I hereby promise not to get cancer! :moustache:

Heh, I forgot that you can "like" and favorite your own stories. I liked it, but it would take a pair of brass balls bigger than mine to favorite it :eeyup: . I'm just having a great, productive night :twilightsmile: .

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Enjoy your prowling, ye rainbow in the dark :trollestia: . Glad I'm making you smile :twilightblush: .

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Well said, prismatic shinobi, well said :yay: .

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Ah, yes, the inexplicably orange ninja. You know, the writing's gone all over the place in that series, but one thing still remains. Shikamaru is a complete badass.

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In a world full of badasses, what's a sarcastic guy with some good smarts to do, eh? :rainbowdetermined2: I do think he's the best, but you're right, it's just an opinion. Naruto himself has some serious power and I wouldn't remotely ever bet against him in a fight. I mean, c'mon, the guy can make the equivalent of a small star and then throw it at you. I wouldn't mess with that lol.

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Not a Dragonball Z fan myself, but it would be a pretty interesting match. Strictly speaking, I think Goku would still have it, what with him being able to explode planets with his index finger and all that. Still, watching the orange jumpsuit chuck a supernova at his face would be priceless :rainbowlaugh: .

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Haha, but until that happens, the fireworks on both sides are bound to be splendid :pinkiehappy: . Maybe Sasuke and him can tag-team Goku and pull some ridiculous Sharingan shit. Let's see how powerful you are when you're fighting a battle only happening in your head! :rainbowwild:

A quick message to everypony else who's reading my inane shit, no worries, I won't fanboy about anime all the time, I just happened to make a new friend around here and it just so happened to make for a great night.

Hey, Rainbow Ninja, how about we be sporting about this and keep the rest of the Naruto and Dragonball Z stuff to ourselves in private messages. Not everypony enjoys anime and I think it would be cool of us to keep these comments relevant to the story :twilightblush: . We have been kind of going on and on about this for a while now lol.

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Heh, we were up pretty late, weren't we?

In other news, Mr. Morgan and I are currently working on Chapter 6 :pinkiesmile: .

Ended up passing out in front of the computer, so posting the chapter last night just didn't happen :derpytongue2: . Imma try for later tonight :twilightsmile: .

Medical problems abound, but my body cannot stop me!

Which is to say, I've been having some medical issues lately, but I've finished the newest chapter and am in the process of uploading it right now anyway! :pinkiehappy:

I have a bonus, Halloween-themed chapter planned for tomorrow. It's near completion now. And Hell or high water, it's getting posted by tomorrow :rainbowdetermined2: .

This story seems to be getting better and better every time I read the updates:pinkiehappy:
Adding pinkie to this heart warming setting was brilliant:yay:
Good work and hope you keep a nice pace!
Meeeeep!:rainbowkiss:

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Many thanks and glad you're enjoying it :pinkiehappy: . Still working on that bonus chapter, trying to get permission from a number of the musicians featured so I can, well, feature them :twilightsmile: .

Edit: Well, balancing permission and timing is a funny thing. I guess I'll find out if I have permission or not the hard way :rainbowderp: .

Colonel Sassacre?!

Homestuck?!

*squee* :pinkiehappy:

It's just too bad I'm not as in to it as I used to be. I kind of lost track of what the shit was happening around when the trolls came in to play :twilightsheepish:

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Yeah, I'm a pretty big Homestuck fan :pinkiesmile: . I like the human kids and the trolls just about equally, actually. A bunch of really interesting stuff get's introduced in the troll chapters that really fucks up time and space, it's pretty cool.

Anyway, I fell in love with the book Colonel Sassacre's Daunting Text of Magical Frivolity and Practical Japery the moment it was introduced, and pretty quickly made up my own headcanon which had the Colonel as a master prankster who plays by the book and just tries to help spread around a few good laughs. It didn't take long for me to throw Pinkie Pie in there (for obvious reasons), then the Doctor (The Trickster Brigade being a group of mischievous time travelers from Doctor Who), the Master too (with them as rivals of sorts), and eventually a backstory with Discord as their former leader.

Then I started writing this and it just kind of wormed its way in :twilightblush: .

I really hope I'm not asked to take this chapter down lol, I had the time of my life writing it :raritystarry: .

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If it isn't already extremely evident, Pinkie's one of my top-rated ponies :pinkiehappy: . With her, you never know what the fuck is going to happen :pinkiegasp: . I always love imagining unexplainable shit for her to do in a story, especially if I can make it so cheesy that you just have to hate it as well :pinkiecrazy: .

I like the chemistry you keep building between Jeremy and Twilight, as well as between him and her friends. He seems a bit rough around the edges, but a generally nice guy.

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Well, he is a druggie and kind of a jackass, so rough is more or less what I was going for :twilightblush: . And thanks, I hope he becomes great friends with Applejack in the next chapter :yay: .

Okay, I'll admit, judging by this most recent chapter it's pretty obvious that I'm on a big MandoPony kick :twilightblush: . Personally, I blame him for having such an awesome voice and writing such catchy lyrics :pinkiehappy: . I'd give my right lung if it meant I'd get to hear Spike sing We Make a Perfect Team at some point in the show :yay: .

blewablysiurnpgiurgn NEWCHAPTERYES! :pinkiehappy:

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Working on the next one right now even :derpytongue2: .

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