Alternate Short Description: Let us follow the journey of an ANGERY mama’s boy from multi legged Earth pony colt to eventual Alicorn King!
The Sex tag is (for now) innuendo. However this may change in the future.
I'm using the Alicorn King cyoa by Akumakami64, not sure if he's on here but he's definately over on Questionable Questing.
I won’t be following the CYOA to the letter however.
And seeing as I already showed off what Shifting has here's a partial Alicorn King build!:
- Physical alterations (3)- Extra Hooves, Titan Strength, Elemental Mane
- Powers (7)- War (Primary Affinity), Destruction (Secondary Affinity), Darkness, Shadow, Blood, Sound and Gravity (Tertiary Affinities)
- Location- Canterlot
- Changes- Uncapped Magic (Free), Early Drop
- Consequences- Eldritch (partially nullified)
- Setting- Neutral
- Drawback- Tugging your Alicorn Out
Finding myself in the magical land of Equestria as a six legged Earth pony colt honestly made me think I was in some sort of generic Human-turned-Pony piece of fanfiction in all honesty. But yeah… this certainly isn’t the Kid-Friendly Equestria from the My Little Pony cartoon! For one… well… cults (and Eldritch by proxy) are a thing and ponies are pretty human-like as a random pony is just as likely to help you as to fend for themselves.
God… why couldn’t my time in Equestria be the canon verse instead of… whatever this one is!?
Well... at least I got my hot mom, aunt, and cousins (technically I guess?) to help me figure all this shit out...
I would recommend removing the url from the short description since it is very messy in the short description box. I'll take my leave, leaving a like as I go. Ciao!
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Hmm okay, sounds reasonable.
Interesting concept, this CYOA. I wonder where this one will end up.
I am still waiting for out boys in yellow to pop up
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"Boys in yellow"
I... think I know what you're referring too... but I'm not sure...
Interesting story so far, I wonder where this story will lead to. I wonder why he has 6 leg and why the history of this world is different.
Also, if you need to commission a cover art you know who to call.
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I do!
And actually I'm considering that too... hmm...
Very nice start to the story. Can't wait to see what becomes of this.
I've been trying to figure that out how the six legs would work structurally. In the picture that the CYOA link had it looked like the middle set would interfere with the front set. Is the middle set set back a bit from the front and Shifting Space's body is simply slightly longer to accommodate them?
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Yeah he's a bit longer let's go with that.
I honestly didn't give it much thought honestly and though it'd be interesting.
Interesting chapter, I wonder what discord's paw will be in this
Another fun chapter keep it up.
Why not change it now?
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I wanna see how long I can keep is SFW in all honesty.
to in theory if he was convinced enought would his mane be able to shift into napalm or smell like it?
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... You know? Until you mentioned it I never really considered that before... hmmm...
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i imagine that NSFW can also be due to violence
most think NSFW means lewd stuff but i think gore can also make something Not Safe For Work.
I just found this and I already find it amazing
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Thanks!
Why no comments? This is an intresting twist on Celestia and Luna relation to Daybreaker and Nightmare.
Huh, didn't expect Screwball. But I'm not complaining, I've always liked Screwball.
I'm really liking this.
I just speed read through all of it and I want more!
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Heh, thanks.
Honestly... I'm not sure if I'm going to rewrite this or what.
Though if I do I'll shoot you a link.
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I'd say keep going. I like what you did with Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker, the affinity mechanic is intresting. Would love to see what would develop between Shift, Luna and Celestia.
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Glad you like it.