After Ponyville, nothing good comes of Trixie's career. The life of a showmare is hardly easy, and at the smallest mistake they can be thrown aside. This is what has happened to her, the mistake being one that could have cost plenty of ponies their lives. Now that she has been cast aside as well, as casualty of her own problems, it is time for her to find a way to change the thing that she has referred to as a minor setback.
She can do it, right?
[I would like to thank the writer of Inner Demons for allowing me to use this wonderful idea. This story takes place shortly before it, and are inter-twined with it. I would suggest you read it, before or after is your prerogative.
Chapters (6)
Huh... I like it so far. Definitely keep going. I'm curious how you show Trixie's transformation into a somewhat honorable pony.
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Remember, I'm totally open to any and all criticism.
:D
Odd jobs in Canterlot,eh? Good job. I'm actually feeling Trixie's feelings in the story. I know what happens to her and I'm still scared for her.
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I decided it'd probably be for the best if I just publish what I have and go for a chapter a week. Maybe the actual pressure will get me to do something.
If anyone gives you grief for this, let them know we're working together, alright?
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I planned on liberally throwing your name around if people give me grief.
Also, these comments will likely remain here. :D
1446943 Perfect. And as always, please message me with any questions.
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Thank ye.
Let's hope it turns out alright.
Prologue story to one of my favorite fimfics? Instant favorite!
1451393 It'll be great. Trust me.
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Hope you like it
Okay... what's going on here? I'm getting scared now...
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Is this a bad scared or a good scared?
I have to say, I like the fact that there's 12 favorites. I think it's my most liked story yet. >_>
Alright, I've not read this yet. But SapphireLibra3 has endorsed this story... So I will be reading this in the very, very near future... If he/she liked it, that means you can do no evil (heh) and I'm liking/faving now.
...Must. Go. Sleep.
1488852 Good scared. I'm worried about Trixie. I get the feeling that this job is something horribly twisted. Prostitution or hitmare or something. Either way it's illegal, I know it.
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Those would have been brilliant ideas.
Sadly, it isn't so brilliant.
Don't worry. I'm sure it'll be good either way.
Good read, aside from a few small typos (mostly missing letters or switching negative and positive words) its well written.
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Huh?
I'll read over it again, but any help would be appreciated.
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If you want I could probably go over it and point out the things I saw later on tonight.
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That would be most appreciated.
ok que text wall:
should be pony
I'm assuming dot here
her
this? fine grammar is a grey area for me
sometimes
missing a word or two here
get the tank to break?
think?
feels off, maybe clarify a bit
nopony?
lost
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Thank you muchly (I know that isn't a word).
I will fix those... right after dinner. Don't ask me what I'm having, I have no idea either.
Forgot to close your italics somewhere near the beginning, but good read regardless
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I can't believe I made such a rookie mistake.
x_x
Since I know where Trixie ends up, and the pony she becomes, it's really interesting to see her suffering so much. I'm anxious to see how you envision her full journey, going into her 2 year pilgrimage to the moment she's preparing to face Twilight.
Once again, if you have any questions concerning my head canon, or just want to know more about the Trixie I made, let me know. I'd love to help in the production of this.
Good chapter, but I was a wondering why a majority of the chapter was bolded. I can see where this is leading, and I like the direction it's going.
And for some reason so are the comments... weird...
ok, where to even start... first off you forgot to close off bold about half-way through and second of all... well text walls serve a purpose sometimes
something was
everypony
without
idea
needs space
idea (again
)
erm... what?
mare? or some other word
umm... ya feels off
was
drinking
stallion
thought
uhh... come again?
so it appears
don't hate me please
Damn it.
This is what I get when I rush it. I was trying to get it out today because I promised a chapter a week. I'm editing it right meow.a>>1588541
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I have to apologize for the bolding thing.
Turns out writing is not an art best done tired and rushed.
Take it from me, NEVER RUSH!
I have people getting really impatient for the next part of 10 Years. It's gonna take as long as it takes. If you need ta take a little more time, then take it.
As my girl AJ would say: Haste makes Waste!
At least, I think she'd say that...1588737
I promised weekly updates, though, 1588930 .
I'm just going to have to spread out the work over the week a little more.
1588970 That's a good idea. Last minute work isn't as good as work done over the week. Still, keep up the good work.