Is it worth is to be reformed?
Is friendship worth it?
When I look out to the crowd, when I listen in, I hear and see things that make me wonder about that. I shouldn't care what they think, how they think, what they say, and yet I do. There's something to this whole friendship thing that has changed me, and part of me has to wonder if it's worth it in the end.
Ahhhh, this is so sad...Poor Discord! You had a few typos, but it didn't ruin the story at all for me. It was very well-written and made me feel so sad for Discord. I think it would be amazing to expand on this, write about him trying to gain trust back, with the help of dear Fluttershy. I think you'd do it well! And I'd read it! The only thing you need to do is add Discord to your list of characters. I think you had the stamp for OC instead.
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That seems like an interesting idea. If I get more ideas, then I'll definitely do that.
Also, the icon is for "other".
OHMYGOD I LOVE IT!!
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Is there anything specific you really like about it? I'd like to know what I did right, what I did wrong, and what I did meh.
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THERE IS NOTHING WRONG!! I FRICKEN LOVE IT!!
At one point, I thought that he was going to commit suicide
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Was he?
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I KNOW!!! (SORRY ABOUT THE CAPITALS), DO A SEQUEL. OR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!
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No, no, there wasn't going to be any suicide.
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It's possible, it all depends on whether or not I get ideas. After all, a sandwich needs both good read (premise) and good meat (pretty much everything else).
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AH LOVE SANDWICHES!!!
Sorry
This one makes me feel lonley... and I'm only reading it...
You did a great job on this on as well!
This is certainly an interesting work! I love this kind of inner monologues This one fulfills its purpose, showing exactly what Discord is feeling and relating it with true actions. His ideas really resemble to his canon counterpart, and I feel it to be absolutely natural. This story do is a fascinating read . Well done!