How does magic really work?
Traditionally, a unicorn would learn most of his or her magic through study and experimentation. But what is the limit of a unicorns power?
What if this limit could be exceeded. What if the magic every unicorn is accustomed to using is only the first stage. The first path.
There is another path. The second path.
this is a much more suspenceful chapter than the original...and very well written.
the old one was awsome so this one will hopefully be better...
Cant wait for more
Oh, I did enjoy this story originally. I'll have to put some time aside later to fall in love with it all over again
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Here's hoping. I've got a lot of new ideas I can implement now that I've cleared the slate and reworked the story and timeline. The new canon added in at the end of season three gave me a great deal to work with. Hope I can get it all in order and not mess too much up.
I like what I'm seeing in this rewrite. Please continue.