• Published 9th Oct 2022
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The sentence of Hunger - Anonymous 1234321

Comments ( 6 )

Yay! Nice to see this back.

man havent read it yet but the summary is a jumbled mess and kinda makes my head hurt due to its abhorrent use of English to describe the summary, there are some people saying this story good so im still reading it..... just not right now

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Sorry! my English is better now since I have been writing for a while, but I also don't know If I have enough will power to go fix the mistakes in this story

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no problems bro, no beef here your fine

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This probably was a flash of the moment idea but it's been centuries and he hasn't tried to correct it and he's now pissed at her that she acts irrational around him even though because of what he did her irrationality is perfectly justified.

I like this, alot. The Pacing, the story, the steady world building. In the end the fact that your English is a work in progress, was to me inconsequential to the story itself. Thank you for this!

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