Tried to get through this, but the sheer amount of grammar mistakes, which all happen to be easily corrected, makes it difficult to read. The most common one seems to the the constant use of "whit" when it should be "with", don't know how that was messed up literally every time the word was used in the chapter aside from it being deliberate.
Do you not use any form of editing program before posting? It would clear up like 95% of the problems.
11443872 Yea, In the next characters I notice this problem and I had tried to check them, I will read again this and I will try to fix it so you eyes may not bleed.
I use grammarly, but probably I need premium for it to tell me that I "mixed" with with "with", Since I notice it didn't told me that I wrote it wrong.
When he was walking by the marketplace again, he noticed something weird, he felt the indistinguishable feeling of hunger of a griffin, it was really strange since ponys usually didn't take kinds of other species around their towns, so he decided to take a look since it was not that far.
So far I'm liking the story a good first chapter
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Tried to get through this, but the sheer amount of grammar mistakes, which all happen to be easily corrected, makes it difficult to read. The most common one seems to the the constant use of "whit" when it should be "with", don't know how that was messed up literally every time the word was used in the chapter aside from it being deliberate.
Do you not use any form of editing program before posting? It would clear up like 95% of the problems.
11443872
Yea, In the next characters I notice this problem and I had tried to check them, I will read again this and I will try to fix it so you eyes may not bleed.
I use grammarly, but probably I need premium for it to tell me that I "mixed" with with "with", Since I notice it didn't told me that I wrote it wrong.
Thanks for the feedback.
Ponies author, the plural is ponies