11432603 true, I will probably take the time to read it again and correct what I notice, but unless an editor magically appears out of nowhere and offers me their services for free, I doubt I'll get one anytime soon.
(I'm not saying editors don't deserve to be paid, I'm just poor.)
Sorry for the strokes that my half baked English may cause you.
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I personally like long chapters, since in other stories at least it bothers me to "turn" the page.
That and writing an interlude every 3 chapters at the end I would run out of ideas... probably.
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I seriously doubt that.
Story is good so far but, badly needs an editor. There are times he/she are flipped, missing letters, or its difficult to understand some sentences.
11432603
true, I will probably take the time to read it again and correct what I notice, but unless an editor magically appears out of nowhere and offers me their services for free, I doubt I'll get one anytime soon.
(I'm not saying editors don't deserve to be paid, I'm just poor.)
Sorry for the strokes that my half baked English may cause you.