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hyperiumon


i forget a lot, hopefully i remember

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  • 26 weeks
    papers,ponies and attitude review (up to chap 21ish )

    first off welcome back I've been taking a break for almost a year to catch up on fanfiction stories and only recently came back to read some more stories and catch up with those that were updated (the few that did) .

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  • 78 weeks
    the tale of lord barley corn short review (everything before chap 44)

    honestly i love this sotry really likes to flesh of the character and really give personality to jack? i think that was his name i forgot and the harvest family (?) i even like how carrot and the harvest family is secretly apart of the apple family and how they want to get outta its shadow really helps the story give depth and the added drama of that plus the town becoming a desolate ghost town make it a great read.

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  • 78 weeks
    the stereotypical necromancer review ?

    sn is a mixed bag id say of great ideas and excellent story but the whole purple prose to 11 really kill interest and makes me just skim around chapters putting together story beats and then going onto the next chapter not really reading 80% of what's written. i wont say its every chapter just feel around half are fluff to the max id say the worse chapter I've recently read is chapter 44 honestly you could condense it from its 14.6k words to maybe 3-4k words roughly and not lose really

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  • 84 weeks
    mordane stronghoof review as of chapter 40

    so just starting things out being super brutal id give this story a 2-3.5/10 as a whole without its milestones for now im currently on the last 3 chapters and this story from start to finish just astounds me with how it can basically be a gold nugget surrounded by dogshit, il just get it outta the way this story has many flaws but the goods parts about it somehow turn it from some trash you read for dumb fun or toss to the side after the first 3 chapters not even remembering its name after the

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  • 86 weeks
    Blank page series review books 1-3

    New beginning

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Oct
28th
2023

papers,ponies and attitude review (up to chap 21ish ) · 12:27am Oct 28th, 2023

first off welcome back I've been taking a break for almost a year to catch up on fanfiction stories and only recently came back to read some more stories and catch up with those that were updated (the few that did) .

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I Prob should just rename it

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Whoops my bad, I usually put stories into three tiers on how much I like them, didn't mean to disrespect your story it's pretty funny but I'm not a real comedy person.

E"What's Yours is Mine!" or "Why Work When You Can Steal?!"
Two crafty robbers from the big city of Manehatten learn about the "easy pickings" to be had in a sleepy little town called "Ponyville." Fortunately for them, it also has a top-notch hospital...
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Umm...thanks?

Nice one for the fav, bud! Tell your friends about it and feedback is much appreciated. Have a good one, lad.👍

I am watched O_O

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