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hyperiumon


i forget a lot, hopefully i remember

Oct
28th
2023

papers,ponies and attitude review (up to chap 21ish ) · 12:27am Oct 28th, 2023

first off welcome back I've been taking a break for almost a year to catch up on fanfiction stories and only recently came back to read some more stories and catch up with those that were updated (the few that did) .

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Oct
31st
2022

the tale of lord barley corn short review (everything before chap 44) · 5:19pm Oct 31st, 2022

honestly i love this sotry really likes to flesh of the character and really give personality to jack? i think that was his name i forgot and the harvest family (?) i even like how carrot and the harvest family is secretly apart of the apple family and how they want to get outta its shadow really helps the story give depth and the added drama of that plus the town becoming a desolate ghost town make it a great read.

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Oct
31st
2022

the stereotypical necromancer review ? · 4:47pm Oct 31st, 2022

sn is a mixed bag id say of great ideas and excellent story but the whole purple prose to 11 really kill interest and makes me just skim around chapters putting together story beats and then going onto the next chapter not really reading 80% of what's written. i wont say its every chapter just feel around half are fluff to the max id say the worse chapter I've recently read is chapter 44 honestly you could condense it from its 14.6k words to maybe 3-4k words roughly and not lose really

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Sep
13th
2022

mordane stronghoof review as of chapter 40 · 12:08pm Sep 13th, 2022

so just starting things out being super brutal id give this story a 2-3.5/10 as a whole without its milestones for now im currently on the last 3 chapters and this story from start to finish just astounds me with how it can basically be a gold nugget surrounded by dogshit, il just get it outta the way this story has many flaws but the goods parts about it somehow turn it from some trash you read for dumb fun or toss to the side after the first 3 chapters not even remembering its name after the

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Sep
3rd
2022

Blank page series review books 1-3 · 7:35pm Sep 3rd, 2022

New beginning

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Sep
1st
2022

questions about the "convention" trope · 6:09pm Sep 1st, 2022

so i was wondering if theirs any good stories where the mc goes to a convention, see a "sick deal" on fan merch that looks a little too realistic from that dude from resident evil then gets sucked into the mlp universe with the powers of whatever anime they got a item from that's actually good? or at least a fun read ive heard more groaning about how trash they are than actuality seen stories about it looks like the trend died years ago and most stories left unfinished, i mean the trope its

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Aug
23rd
2022

vacation 1st arc review · 12:19pm Aug 23rd, 2022

ok so to start this review i found vacation in the recently updated on the main page and kind of had it sitting in my read later pile for awhile cause i though oh just some generic story harem maybe zombie but I wasn't sure, then after it got its 17th chapter i deiced hey why the hell not might as well dive into to it and what you you know its actually a dead island and "anthro" mlp crossover but with a pretty good twist, which i will say i haven't really ever seen before the twist

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Aug
23rd
2022

whelp here i am remembering · 12:17pm Aug 23rd, 2022

so I said I was gonna due reviews and I am but...…. kind of takes the wind outta my sails when almost every story i read is 250k+, i mean im only 1/5 the way through prey and lamb and i could already make a 10 page college essay on why i like it, that said i will try to post some reviews as there are some newer stories coming out that have caught my eyes that are..... less harry potter like

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Mar
2nd
2022

welcome to my profile · 9:05am Mar 2nd, 2022

what's up I'm hyper and I'm just here to read stories, and in the future review them as one thing I love to do is rant for hours on end in my head about what I liked and what I think coulda been better in the various stories I read or have read I usually like 100k plus stories as slow burns are my favorite but more normal stories that aren't 5 harry potter books long are good too and I especially love hie stories even though most are terrible or cheesy but certain not human stories are pretty

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