Hey guys, I'll be posting a new April Fools chapter tomorrow! If I can find the time, I'll start working on the next chapter. It's only 10% done, so I'll see what I can do.
Thank you for reading my story!
Hey guys, I'll be posting a new April Fools chapter tomorrow! If I can find the time, I'll start working on the next chapter. It's only 10% done, so I'll see what I can do.
Thank you for reading my story!
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Thanks a lot for the fav!
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Thanks for adding “Kingdom of Predators” as favorite!
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It has, I’ve been a lot more cynical with my writing. Like anytime I write a main character they’ll usually see in shades of grey.
Also this helped me improve on writing the royal guard and night guard. Fucking love the night guard in that fic. Also made shining armor more competent and level headed. Overall I gave the royal guard more personality.
I also made Cozy Glow slightly sympathetic, she isn’t over the top evil, just a child with LOTS of issues. Example:
Cozy walked closer with a dangerous look in her eyes; she stopped when the both of them were muzzle to muzzle. "And this 'snake' is the reason why we're so well off! All the bits, the food, supplies, and information we got were thanks to me!" The filly yelled in Moon Charm's face, tired of keeping her temper in check. "I'm the reason why we haven't starved to death yet!"
The thestral kept her face neutral throughout Cozy's little rant; when she was finished, Moon spoke. "I won't deny your methods are effective, but that doesn't make you a leader." Her expression suddenly became one of sorrow. "Cozy, before I found you, you would pretend to cry and make ponies feel bad for you; once they had their backs turned, you would strike and rob them blind." The bat pony placed a hoof on the other filly's chest. "I saw what you did to that stallion, and it was downright evil what you did." Her voice held disappointment.