As promised, chapter 2 of my version of FilthyLee / CheeriRich, whatever you like to call it

As stated in the description, the first chapter has been revised, but no story-changing alterations have been made.

I really appreciate all the likes and favorites. But some comments would be nice, too . Same goes for dislikes: you have your reasons for them, but please drop me a line as to why you voted as such. I can't improve if I'm not aware of what to improve on. If it just isn't your cup of tea, that's fine; just please let me know.

I'm a terrible terrible person for saying this, but.... :3 I think Diamond needs a half-sibling. *evil cackle!*

I'm really glad to see this get a continuation. You do a really great job of building both characters. I like how both of them realized that the reason they came together was the wrong one but that they both really needed to relieve themselves. I like how much character Filthy Rich has but I would like to see some more from Cheeilee's point of view if possible. The actual 'action' was really well written and kept the blood pumping. The descriptions were clear and the whole experience really worked. The final scene was really funny. As is I could see you ending it here, but I would love see some more, because of the characters and plot...not that 'plot', but it is pretty good 'plot'

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1384123 Thanks, man. I really appreciate your, well, appreciation

Nevertheless, as far as I'm concerned, this fic is wrapped up. I might write another one in the future, depending on how much I can fight off the sense of procrastination (I'm a master at that). I'm also planning to turn a fews fics here into a graphic novel, so I probably won't be writing for a long time. Then again, maybe I might write something to mix things up a bit. Only time will tell.

"Filthy's mind went to DEFCON 5-mode"
Erm... Don't you mean Defcon 1? o-o ( This story was Amazing btw )

Really good, and the first fic that I've read with Filthy and Cherilee in a pairing.

1458317 why dident you just edit the old mesage insted of posting a new one?

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Because I didn't know I could do that.
Thank you for pointing it out.

awesome

He, that was a good read. I liked your interpretation of Filthy, and Cherilee of course too.

1381945 i can't aggre more

that was a great read but i want her to have a half sibling, or i can do it myself

"That was... I mean... Wow..."

Couldn't agree more, Filthy! that was delicious, and it wound up really well: both main characters got what they wanted, the relationship has progressed to something beneficial to both parties, there was no mood-killing, Diamond will get her grades the right way and had her nostrils assaulted by the result of her teacher's parents' meeting.

I did like that the possible outpouring of grief was stopped dead in its tracks. That sort of thing might be to be encouraged in romantic/saga-length clop but not in something like this. Much better paced than the first chapter too