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Ruxify


Preoccupied with making colorful equines kiss and stuff.

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Bold and interesting I am wondering where this goes:unsuresweetie:

I love silly clopfics like that, very funny to see what author can do with weird plot like this

I have never read anything like this. :rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh: Hilarious!

“I… I guess so. If Scootaloo says its okay, and if it’s really as pleasurable as she says it is, I suppose I can lend you a hoof.” Sweetie smiled after finally coming to terms with what kind of effects her special new ability had on others.

Sweetie says Scootaloo's name here, and Scootaloo definately heard it, but the spell didn't react. Just saying.

6151294 Yeah... that's one of the many challenges that comes with writing a story like this, especially when I don't have an editor. I'll make sure to get it fixed right away.

6150908 Don't worry. New chapters will be uploaded every so often when I get around to it. :)

Loving it, looking forward to more.

“No wonder adults don’t want us touching ourselves there,”

:twilightoops::rainbowlaugh:

Suddenly a ghostly voice bellowed "What about my fetish" and then all the students started feeling shame. :unsuresweetie:

has she gotten Spike yet? I don't think so, that would funny as hell, the one person she's embarrassed to see orgasm in front of her as he lets out loads of love and moans her name... *sigh* CTRL+SHIFT+N *unzips*

"Big Mac ought to be out in our barn right now, makin’ gold ol’ Apple Family Apple Sauce!”
....or at least he will be soon!

Oh man, Rarity is going to give Twilight quite the lecture methinks, poor Twilight. And poor Fluttershy, The crusaders are going to get punished bad for that one.

HMMMMMM? Does the effects Change or intensify due to the Way the name is spoken, say
whiney: RAAAAAAAARity
ANGRY: SILVER SPOON
SingSong: Scoot-Scoot- a-loo
Worried sucsession: Applebloom, Applebloom can you hear me, Applebloom, come on get up applebloom.
Do any of these efect the outcome of the spell

6222381 Hmm... only one of those may or may not be the case... ;)

That was ridiculously good. One can only hope new chapters will come out soon...

6228805 Don't worry, they will be. I'm just trying to get out of my inspiration dry spell right now. I have an idea where I want the next chapter to go though, and I just have to sit down and write it.

Interesting story has me interested! :pinkiehappy:

Did someone just watch Orgazmo? Sweetie belle is now the proud owner of trey parker's orgasmerator!!!

or catch Sweetie saying somepony's name without anything happening, please let me know so I can fix it.

My first thought was "fix which part of that, her saying the name or the result of it?" Haha.

Anyway this sure is interesting. Incredibly funny and strangely quite hot. Curious to see how you flesh this out.

She should totally do Tiara and Spoon next

“Ohhhh… ungggg…. Scootaloo, that felt so good. Please keep going,”

Did Scoots get any orgasm at this point?

This was so cute! Poor Sweetie though, things just keep getting worse for her. She finds love and now can't even look at her lover.:fluttershysad:

6308682 I noticed this too, I don't think she did, so yeah that needs correcting.

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Nice catch! I would have fixed it sooner, but I was stuck at work and I only had access to my phone which doesn't like this site for some reason.

Should be fixed now.

Wow. This certainly deserves a continuation.

So each conquest makes her (Or at least her condition.) more powerful...wasn't there a rpg that did something like that?

6261398 I just read the wiki page on that, and my mind is now so full of wat.

“Sweetie Belle, you don’t need to know any of the details until you’re older, but please know that causing other ponies to act and feel this way without their permission is very disrespectful, and it most certainly never should be done out in public!”

No bitch, since your darling sister has the ability to make others Cum on command, drop any pretense of innocence and give her some damn answers! She deserves to know why it is indecent and inappropriate!

Wonderful story, really like how this is going, I can hardly wait to see what kind of new power she will get from Rarity. This is going to be very intersting! :pinkiehappy:

6261398 ~/o What makes a unicorn? Is it the power in her horn, or is it her quest for glory? ~/o :rainbowlaugh:

I hope Sweetie and Scoots get together after everything is sorted out. :scootangel::heart::unsuresweetie: awww.

What!? Is Sweetie going to try and seduce her sister!? Without even knowing what sex is? Yeah, that's going to end badly.

Also, Twilight should have said something like, oh I don't know maybe, TRY SLEEPING IN A DIFFERENT ROOM! But no, no problem there, just keep sleeping in the infested room. Everything will be fine.:facehoof:

6341640 You may have missed it, but Twilight actually removed the source of the problem from her room, which was previously unknown. So it'd be pointless to switch rooms now. :twilightblush:

6341852 No I didn't miss that, it seemed heavily implied that Twilight only removed some of the mushrooms.

6341909 I suppose that's logical, but for the sake of the story, there are no more mushrooms. :moustache:

I'm gonna say it, if there's gonna be any incest next chapter..... I'm blaming you for any boners I get:trixieshiftleft:

6341926 Oh, okay, I guess it's too late anyhow as Sweetie has already become a host to this thing.

Honey, you've got a long way to go before you can match my procrastination powers...

"shudder in pleasure" not "shutter in pleasure" . Also how in the hell would two fillies who a couple of days ago didn't know what an orgasm was know about scissoring or paying attention to a clitoris?

Good story otherwise.

6345569 Thanks for the edit, fixed.

Also how in the hell would two fillies who a couple of days ago didn't know what an orgasm was know about scissoring or paying attention to a clitoris?

There is actually a very logical explanation for such.

From Chapter I:

As if instinct had taken over her body, she began to move her hoof all around her vaginal areas at random, as if testing the waters to find the area where the best sensations could be brought out. Finally she found that the little nub at the top was especially sensitive and she began her best effort in triggering these amazing new sensations.

Thus, it became obvious it her to "pay attention to the clitoris". Like most people (or in this case human-like ponies) this knowledge tends to come from experimentation.

Once that piece of information is known, it doesn't take much logistical power to put two and two together to get: Clit + Clit = Pleasure for all, plus the added benefit of being able to make out with your partner. Also note that it was Sweetie Belle who initiated, not Scootaloo who probably would not have thought of such a thing.

It's important to note that they do not have a name or explanation for these things, simply feelings. As for if and when they do learn the specifics... well we haven't gotten there yet. :twilightblush:

Hmm, at first I wasn't sure I could see Twilight as someone who would be interested in foals, but it kind of works. I mean, she knows Sweetie well, she knows how mature and intelligent she is. Twilight obviously wouldn't do this sort of thing with any random innocent foal, so I guess this is okay. The part near the end where Sweetie describes Rarity's flavor, that was priceless. I kind of expected Twilight to laugh at that more though.

Aww I was hoping Sweetie's power would overwhelm Rarity for some incest action. Yeah I know I'm sick:ajsleepy:

Aww...everypony forget Spike...again...I don't know how much he confuse right now...

And dear writer..

“It’s not what it looks like, Spike!” cried out Sweetie in an effort to alleviate any misunderstandings.

Sweetie belle said Spike's name here. Why he don't get orgasm because of it?

“From all the evidence I’ve gathered, it seems to me that whatever’s inside her is trying to escape. It doesn’t WANT to be in her body, but it has to in order to survive. My plan is to continue feeding this thing until it escapes, where we then beat the shit out of it!”

Any plan that ends with beating the shit out of problems is a good plan.

Looking forward to the next chapter. ^-^

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