"shudder in pleasure" not "shutter in pleasure" . Also how in the hell would two fillies who a couple of days ago didn't know what an orgasm was know about scissoring or paying attention to a clitoris?
Right, all I can say is this: adequate is most definitely not the word I would use. This. Chapter. Was. AMAZING!. This is truly the holy grail of all romantic fanfics I have read. It's funny, adorable, and the sex was that good that I could not physically fap to it, which a fanfic has never been able to do to me before. I think I died of happiness and content this chapter, you have my greatest respect.
Did Scoots get any orgasm at this point?
This was so cute! Poor Sweetie though, things just keep getting worse for her. She finds love and now can't even look at her lover.
6308682 I noticed this too, I don't think she did, so yeah that needs correcting.
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Nice catch! I would have fixed it sooner, but I was stuck at work and I only had access to my phone which doesn't like this site for some reason.
Should be fixed now.
Wow. This certainly deserves a continuation.
"shudder in pleasure" not "shutter in pleasure" . Also how in the hell would two fillies who a couple of days ago didn't know what an orgasm was know about scissoring or paying attention to a clitoris?
Good story otherwise.
6345569 I was just about to say that.
Right, all I can say is this: adequate is most definitely not the word I would use. This. Chapter. Was. AMAZING!. This is truly the holy grail of all romantic fanfics I have read. It's funny, adorable, and the sex was that good that I could not physically fap to it, which a fanfic has never been able to do to me before. I think I died of happiness and content this chapter, you have my greatest respect.
Fear her gaze!