Hmm, at first I wasn't sure I could see Twilight as someone who would be interested in foals, but it kind of works. I mean, she knows Sweetie well, she knows how mature and intelligent she is. Twilight obviously wouldn't do this sort of thing with any random innocent foal, so I guess this is okay. The part near the end where Sweetie describes Rarity's flavor, that was priceless. I kind of expected Twilight to laugh at that more though.
“From all the evidence I’ve gathered, it seems to me that whatever’s inside her is trying to escape. It doesn’t WANT to be in her body, but it has to in order to survive. My plan is to continue feeding this thing until it escapes, where we then beat the shit out of it!”
Any plan that ends with beating the shit out of problems is a good plan.
6596060 I'm not sure I understand your reasoning? That sounds more like Fluttershy to me.
As Twilight is a pony of science and what would be considered "intelligent" it only makes sense that she'd have comprehensive/liberal views on sexuality as opposed to conservative views.
Also, Twilight isn't as much of a "shut-in" as she once was.
This story is very interesting! I haven't read another like it! My only true issue is how you write Twilight, but I guess we technically have no idea how she reacts to sex since the show is a kid's show.
I do have to wonder if having sex with foals is illegal in your story, because if it was illegal Twilight wouldn't have told Rarity.
6599087 I haven't decided if it is illegal or not, but it definitely isn't "socially acceptable" in this universe (hence Rarity's reaction). So with that logic it might be.
I agree with Everfree Sparkle, this is a rather unique story. Is it still being written? I only ask because every chapter was written in under 2 months and just kinda stops for 2 months.
6614160 Technically it's currently on hiatus. I already have the rest of the story planned out, I just need to find the drive and some time to finish it. Each chapter takes me many hours to write, and are thus quite draining to do.
6616032 And do you mind if I ask, how many chapters you'll write, or is there an estimated time of finishing this story? Or that you've actually made some progress? However, don't lose control of this(don't write abour her like she's becoming a... You know that).... It's still about a filly...
Good news! Next chapter comes out at 11am pacific time today! I'm still unsure about how many chapters are left, but I do know that the quantity will only be a single digit number.
However, don't lose control of this(don't write abour her like she's becoming a... You know that).... It's still about a filly...
You don't have to censor yourself here; this is a mature story page. I'm going to assume you meant a slut or a whore.
It's not that Sweetie herself wanted to have sex with Rarity or Twilight; her sexuality was essentially altered by the thing inside her, thus causing her to believe such.
6795552 Well, as much as you think it's easy for you to Say, it's a part of me that I don't like to use such foul Words. Maybe it's surprising, but I'm feeling uncomfortable talking about such topics and use those kind of words. (not that I don't know they exists)
6361542 Count me in that boat too. I was hoping for some Sweetie/Rarity lovemaking. If you're into that sort of thing, then you'd probably love The Sweetie Clop Chronicles, one of the hottest pieces of fan fiction I've ever read! Highly recommended! But maybe we'll get some incest stuff in the next chapter. Seeing as how it involves blinking Sweetie's brains, I'm hoping we'll get even-way with the CMC, Spike, Twilight, and Rarity. Or Sweetie could have sex with all of them one at a time. That would be hot too. Or we could get both. That would be even hotter.
“Here’s the good thing about what I did, Rarity. I learned exactly what we need to do to alleviate her of this problem once and for all.” “It doesn’t have anything to do with bucking her brains out, does it?” asked Rarity with intense sarcasm in her voice. “Actually… yes it does.” Rarity groaned. She should have known. “From all the evidence I’ve gathered, it seems to me that whatever’s inside her is trying to escape. It doesn’t WANT to be in her body, but it has to in order to survive. My plan is to continue feeding this thing until it escapes, where we then beat the shit out of it!”
Oh, my God! That was hilarious! I wasn't expecting that! Now I'm really eager to read the rest of the story!
Hmm, at first I wasn't sure I could see Twilight as someone who would be interested in foals, but it kind of works. I mean, she knows Sweetie well, she knows how mature and intelligent she is. Twilight obviously wouldn't do this sort of thing with any random innocent foal, so I guess this is okay. The part near the end where Sweetie describes Rarity's flavor, that was priceless. I kind of expected Twilight to laugh at that more though.
Aww I was hoping Sweetie's power would overwhelm Rarity for some incest action. Yeah I know I'm sick
Aww...everypony forget Spike...again...I don't know how much he confuse right now...
And dear writer..
Sweetie belle said Spike's name here. Why he don't get orgasm because of it?
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Fixed.
Any plan that ends with beating the shit out of problems is a good plan.
6361542 I'm sure it will.
Looking forward to the next chapter. ^-^
One of these days I'll find the inspiration/enthusiasm to write the next chapter, but these recent days are not those days.
6596060 I'm not sure I understand your reasoning? That sounds more like Fluttershy to me.
As Twilight is a pony of science and what would be considered "intelligent" it only makes sense that she'd have comprehensive/liberal views on sexuality as opposed to conservative views.
Also, Twilight isn't as much of a "shut-in" as she once was.
This story is very interesting! I haven't read another like it! My only true issue is how you write Twilight, but I guess we technically have no idea how she reacts to sex since the show is a kid's show.
I do have to wonder if having sex with foals is illegal in your story, because if it was illegal Twilight wouldn't have told Rarity.
6599087 I haven't decided if it is illegal or not, but it definitely isn't "socially acceptable" in this universe (hence Rarity's reaction). So with that logic it might be.
I agree with Everfree Sparkle, this is a rather unique story. Is it still being written?
I only ask because every chapter was written in under 2 months and just kinda stops for 2 months.
6614160 Technically it's currently on hiatus. I already have the rest of the story planned out, I just need to find the drive and some time to finish it. Each chapter takes me many hours to write, and are thus quite draining to do.
6616032
And do you mind if I ask, how many chapters you'll write, or is there an estimated time of finishing this story?
Or that you've actually made some progress?
However, don't lose control of this(don't write abour her like she's becoming a... You know that).... It's still about a filly...
6795390
Good news!
Next chapter comes out at 11am pacific time today!
I'm still unsure about how many chapters are left, but I do know that the quantity will only be a single digit number.
You don't have to censor yourself here; this is a mature story page. I'm going to assume you meant a slut or a whore.
It's not that Sweetie herself wanted to have sex with Rarity or Twilight; her sexuality was essentially altered by the thing inside her, thus causing her to believe such.
6795552
Well, as much as you think it's easy for you to Say, it's a part of me that I don't like to use such foul Words. Maybe it's surprising, but I'm feeling uncomfortable talking about such topics and use those kind of words. (not that I don't know they exists)
6361542 Count me in that boat too. I was hoping for some Sweetie/Rarity lovemaking. If you're into that sort of thing, then you'd probably love The Sweetie Clop Chronicles, one of the hottest pieces of fan fiction I've ever read! Highly recommended! But maybe we'll get some incest stuff in the next chapter. Seeing as how it involves blinking Sweetie's brains, I'm hoping we'll get even-way with the CMC, Spike, Twilight, and Rarity. Or Sweetie could have sex with all of them one at a time. That would be hot too. Or we could get both. That would be even hotter.
Oh, my God! That was hilarious! I wasn't expecting that! Now I'm really eager to read the rest of the story!
That dang quote is everywhere!
Did Twilight have an orgasm here?
So for seems to need unique sexual energies?
Poor Sweetie needs to be in an orgy by the end of this, huh...