OH GOD!

hmmm, watched. ill read later

Please... Please...

FTW!

Oooh boy, this looks fun! Tracking this. Shenanigans are bound to be plenty :D

edit: and if we're voting, I vote Rarishy! So Dash can go into AJ's waiting arms!

what~

i like this

way to put fluttershy in a tough situation. just try to laugh it off? "oh I love you two girls as well *awkward laughter* umm let's just eat this yummy jam and, umm, not talk"

Oh a lovely beginning a nice quick burn. Let the fighting commence. I vote for Rarity!

Is it weird I want the three of them to work it out to be in a trinogamous relationship? Nah!

Wow... that got approved fast (and took off to a wonderfully quick start). Sadly, we are not voting for which pairing will work out between the three of them.

I'm very happy everyone is enjoying it so far. Back to work on chapter two!

>>12600741260074 Is trinogamous even a word? *runs a quick Google search* Well, what do you know... I had no idea that was what you called it.

I've always had trouble deciding whether I like FlutterDash Rarishy better, then, lo and behold! A love triangle story! This seems very interesting... I look forward to future chapters.                     

you have made my night. I'll definitely be keeping up with this.

My vote is for Rainbow Dash.

But besides that, this is a very interesting fic and I look forward to seeing more from it!

!

It's even better than I was expecting, and the change in tone from Walls is nice.  After an almost week-long tragedy binge, it's nice to not be holding my breath with every paragraph.

Although with the way this fic is going, I'm not so sure I can say that.  Keep up the good work!

Now I'm going to be completely honest. Flutterdash and Rarishy are far from my favorite pairings (I'm more of a Rarijack, Rainbowpie, and Fluttermac fan), however your writing style is fantastic and your execution of the situation superb. And as such I will definitely be watching this.

shit's about to go down who will win or =?

... oh shit... I'm guessing now they'll be fighting over who gets to use Fluttershy's unconcious body first?... maybe they'll decide to share the spoils jk!! But i can see them beating the crap out of each other though.

Rarity or Rainbow Dash, I can't wait to see the ensuing shenanigans. The first chapter is enticing darling, I don't believe you could've ended it any better way

I don't care for rarishy at all.

FLUTTERDASH FTW

>>12598131259813 Agreed

>>12598291259829 Normally, I'd second that, but I love Flutterdash almost as much as Appledash. I would want to see Rainbow and Fluttershy end up together in this.

Adding this to my read later list. Looks quite interesting.

My interest has been slapped into consciousness.

Holy crap... 75 favorites and almost 200 views in 4 hours? I never imagined the story would take off like this.

Thank you so much for your support everyone, now I just have to live up to your expectations...

Can we have Flutterdash and RarJack in this It looks kinda promising.

Maybe Twilight has a cloning spell?

Although given that the author has joined the FlutterDash group, Rainbow will probably win.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

I'd personally go with Rarishy. We don't get enough of it. And maybe it's because the only person I feel comfortable seeing Rainbow Dash shipped with is Pinkie Pie. But that's just me.

Impressive. Loved this. Characters are portrayed well, it has good exposition and doesn't get bogged down. It's following some classic romantic comedy cliches, but is still entertaining and amusing to read. There are times I want more, but really three story gives us just enough.

So, gotta say I find one thing curious. RD's daydream sequence is prefaced as being what she imagines and has planned on for so long, and yet, even in her own plans she's too nervous to say what's on her mind and slip up. Seems odd for RD to imagine herself acting uncool . Still it was an amusing comedy trope.

It's not often I get to read a story that is grammatically sound, so big thanks for not triggering my inner grammar nazi.

Eager to see what you have in store. Good luck!

Edit: also, congrats on the feature.

if we're voting, I vote for TomxBloomberg because they just need to be in this story then the rest get shocked out of the love triangle and it becomes a hit on fimficion and you make millions... or something like that...

nice story btw

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NEIN! NEIN! NEIN! NEIN!!!

I was gonna do a story SO similar it's not funny.

You know what, fuck you and fuck the system, I'm doing it anyways.

Polygamy, GO!

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Way to drop the bomb on the shy Pegasus, you two.

I, for one, have seen too many of these stories where Rainbow Dash comes out the winner. Instead, how about doing something bang out of order, if you know what I mean?

FLUTTERDASH, FLUTTERDASH, FLUTTERDASH!!!

(continues chanting forever)

Good story. However, you did make a mistake at one point. Could you please fix it?

You said "Rarity wracked her brain for some excuse to walk her friend home, but came up with nothing."

The line is good, but "wracked" is incorrect. What you probably meant is "Racked."

Could you please fix it?

We may not be voting, but I vote Flutterdash anyway. As you could probably tell from my chanting.

Its not gay in a 3 way

screw you two! She's all mine!

>>12598291259829

What are these "arms" of which you speak?

found this via reddit. Will read when I get the chance, probably.

Unfortunately, I can't read it tonight, as much as I'd like to.

If my vote counts, I say they stay friends, or if not an option, then RariShy.  I personally preferred FlutterTwi, but hey, it's your story.

=

I made it as far as the title page before realizing how this chapter would end. You did not disappoint.

Can't wait to see how this one goes.

Oh this is gonna be good

*favorited

This seems like a promising setup. Love triangle type situations are surprisingly uncommon in this fandom, considering the amount of shipping that goes on.

Assuming this ends up flat-out one or the other, I'll be very much hoping for Rarishy here. Flutterdash is the one pairing that really bugs me, because everything we've seen of how those two interact tells me that they'd make a terrible couple. Plus we need more Rarishy stories anyway; that pairing is so much less common, even though those two would work really well together.

I half expect this to turn out Raridash in the end somehow, though, which would be entertaining. Whatever the outcome, though, seems like this should be an amusing ride.

I'd go for an ironic myself. They both try and woo her, and end up wooing each other. That's just me, though.

>>12622181262218

then shy gets pissed and tries to win either of them back,classic

Shenanigan will be made after that fateful confession

Love it

It would kind of be ironic if fluttershy was straight XD

Nuuuu!

Why cliffhanger...

WHY!?!

*grabs a mic, standing in a boxing ring with RD on one corner, Rarity in the opposite*

Llllll-ET'S GET READY TO RUMBLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

This fic is going to be full of absolute WIN.

>>12619471261947

"waiting arms" sounds better than "waiting forelegs"

>>12628591262859

Perhaps "waiting hooves"?

>>12597701259770 *LUNA

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>>12628651262865

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>>12628651262865

That might work! As long as it's Appledash

>>12628511262851

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Rariflutterdash?  Yeah... I'll keep an eye on this.

Well. Now I know how my readers feel when I put down a cliffhanger.

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Brilliant story though

  This, is going into my read later...and I'll see you in 8hrs

Wow... I am at a complete loss for words. I never in a million years imagined that the story would be this successful. I mean, featured? Seriously? Wow.

I'm almost scared to keep writing because I'm afraid that I can only mess it up now. Don't worry, I am going to keep working on it... there's just a lot of pressure now.

Why stop with just two friends? It would be hilarious if they were ALL in love with Fluttershy.

Next Chapter: and

Then:

Flutterdash! I dislike Rarity hugely so...

3way would be fun, if not then i hope Flutterdash

Now we just need Pinkie Pie pop up and extol the merits of caring and sharing in a song to veer this sharply into moresome.

And then Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy banged.

I am going to be a bit creative and vote for it ending with a

can't wait to get the ending. Give it to me now

LOL I request Flutterdash.  

So good, so far.

But...First I have to say: In Rainbow's fantasy, and I understand it's a fantasy, but bear with me on this, when she tells Flutters how she feels, with "I love you."  An appropriate response from Fluttershy would probably be: "I love you too Rainbow Dash, you're a really great friend."  Instead she mounts the mare.  Bit odd.

So Fluttershy pushes the appointment to 4:00, and Rarity waits until 4:45 to leave?  In case you didn't know, that's 45 minutes after 4:00.

So Mister Badger broke his paw and can't dig his family out, so why can't Missus Badger dig herself out?  What the hell kinda shit is that?  Also, are there no other Badgers in the area?

>>12639991263999 Thank you for bringing that whole 4:00/4:45 thing to my attention... I can't believe I missed that.

I'll just leave this here.

Oh most glorious glorious conflict! >insert Luna pic here<  We are most eager to see how this will play out!    Furthers ideas I have had on a poem to throw out there!  If I use any reference of this I will be sure to give proper credit for the inspiration.

Hmmmm.....Plot twist........ Rarity and Dashie have big fight...then realize they are in fact in love with each other!      or not....

Cant wait for moar chapters.......  

  another plot twist?  or not.

eheh.... Love this idea. =3

I totally agree with Peruvianamerican. This should be a 3 way. I'm not sure how that makes it in any way not gay, but I really don't care. That would be hilarious

>>12631991263199 Just keep writing exactly as if you didn't get featured... After all, that's how you got featured in the first place right?

Good work on this story (awesome pic) and I hope to see more. =3

As a twist ending, Fluttershy should hook up with Applejack. DUN DUN DUUUUNNNNNN.

Anyways, amazing first chapter!

>>12603431260343

what do you mean or?

This story can only go downhill from here. I can't wait.

>>12642881264288 I was saying who's gonna win Fluttershy's love Rainbow dash or Rarity

Can't wait for more!  Well done so far, I can buy everything they've done and said as far as the characterizations go.

Now, Fluttershy has to decide how to tell RD and Rarity that she loves them as friends, while really she pursues her own secret crush on:

A. The Mayor

B. Angel Bunny

C. Crackle

Threesome?

Very well done. While I personally prefer Flutterdash, I think Flarity is a fairly realistic pairing.

Of course, you should have RD and Rarity hook up at the end, just to confuse everypony.

Meanwhile, at the Ponyville library, Twilight's Awkwardness Meter has just exploded.

>>12618491261849 YES, YES, A THOUSAND TIMES YES!

Why not? Threesomes are fun.

A love triangle with Fluttershy right in the middle of it?

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Either they go for a threesome or somehow in their unending hate of each other,

somehow Rarity and Rainbow Dash pair up unexpectedly....

I honestly don't know how that'll happen, but I'll be waiting for the day that happens.

>>12631991263199

DoN't WoRrY, jUsT kEeP wRiTiNg LiKe A gOoD aUtHoR/sLaVe

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............................................I vote for Flutterdash, but I havent seen enough Flarity.... I am so torn!

>>12649921264992 I see your Jim Carrey and raise you one Ian McKellen

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Oh dear. I feel extremely sorry for Fluttershy.

As for the pair, I can see three options: Fluttershy x Rainbow, Rarity x Fluttershy, or none of them. And I'd be fine either way

>>12631991263199 PEER PRESSURE! or just regular pressure. Usually don't like this type of story gratz on drawing me in.

Watch fluttershy be straight.

THIS ENDED SO SOON! AND, that ending.

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This won't end well.

DIS GON BE GUD!

VS

>>12600741260074

'cuz that's totally not where my mind went.

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>>12660111266011

Straight?  In a pony shipping fic?  What is this "straight" you speak of???  

>>12600991260099

Hm...so I saw some hints at Fluttershy feelings towards Rarity at the spa...or at least that could go there...

but Rainbow Dash hasn't had a scene with Fluttershy yet, except for the simultaneous confession.  So I haven't seen any of that, yet/haven't had an OPPORTUNITY to see any of that.  Hmm... and now Fluttershy KNOWS.

In any case, my interest is hooked.  Good show.  

Hm, Rainbow Dash or Rarity, which one?

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>>12613611261361... And unfollow... Oh wait, wasn't follow ing in the first place... Follow, unfollow, there!

I dont normally like MLP shipping but when I do I like Rarishy.

>>12600991260099

Like Kail, I vote for tri-ing it out, at least.  

Only one chapter!? Get back to work!

>>12644321264432

And i'm saying, why pick one?

>>12598291259829

Must... resist... shipping war.

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thar beith a shitstrom off the dosackes ... keep reading my freinds