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A Fox in Equestria


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After the events of "Dragonshy" Rainbow Dash starts developing feelings Fluttershy. Rainbow however, is not sure about her crush and starts taking on a new (more reserved) personality.

But while the usually boastful pegasus is working up the nerve to tell Fluttershy about her uncertain feelings, the shy pegasus gains a crush on Pinkie!
In order to make Pinkie notice her Fluttershy tries to become more... - let's just say - Reckless.

All the while the happy-go-lucky earth pony hasn't the slightest idea what is happening between two of her closest friends, but she intends to make the most of it.


I hope you know where i'm going with this story...


This story will be seen through the eyes of - Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash( I will appropriately label the chapters as such)

Criticism wanted!
I am not an amazing writer and will need all kinds of help!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 66 )

I can't wait for the next chapter :yay:

Looks good, gotta read this.

Fluttershy! Your beautiful mane, WHY! :raritycry:

You're making it up as you go along?

Well, that makes it more interesting.

This is a good finfic

I read the dreaded word in pony fanfiction and my mind snapped, cupcakes...:twilightoops:

Do we get some good Flutterdash shipping please?

I really do hope this becomes a FlutterDash fic. . .

It got posted to the Flutterdash page. :pinkiehappy:

Fluttershy sensed the awkward-ness building up and decided to make a joke "I didn't I was THAT irresistible."
there should be a know after didn't

A three way ship of Pinkie, Rainbow, AND Fluttershy?
THIS DAY, WILL BE GLORIOUS!!!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::yay:

So far... This story.. Is AWESOME!!!!!!!! :rainbowkiss:

No everyone, this is no simple Flutterdash...
This is Pinkieshy Dash/Flutterdash Pie!!!! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::yay:

And one truly awesome story at that! :pinkiehappy:
Yes, I actually do like the idea of this three-way ship, AND AIN'T NO-PONY TELLING ME DIFFERENT!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

"That's cute, now the real reason."
My Reaction: ...
BWAHAHHAHHHAHAHAHAHAAAHAHAAAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:
I'm so sorry, but I just cracked up right there :rainbowlaugh: I think it was the 'Now I should've guessed, of all ponies, Applejack can read minds (With Pinkie an exception of course)!

Anyways, this chapter was very interesting! And my my, of all ponies, I think AJ kind of like RD :rainbowlaugh:

Oh wait... Then this story would be...
Pinkappleshy Dash/ Rainflutterjack Pie?! Whoa, that would make a couple heads spin... AND THAT'S WHY IT MUST BE DONE!!!! :pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh:

Yes... I will finish reading these chapters written so far... Favorite this story, and watch it... Then begin writing a Pinkappleshy Dash story... It's the perfect plan! :pinkiecrazy:

Already, everypony in town has read SOME kind of Flutterdash story... Dear god this is good!! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::yay:
Pinkie Pie: Continue, continue, continue!!!! :pinkiehappy:
Rainbow: Y-Y-Yeah...
Fluttershy: -Silence-

Great start! I will read more soon! I have become a fan of your story like you've become a fan of mine. :yay:

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I am glad you like it, your comments were very... Enthusiastic. To say the least:pinkiehappy:

If you have any suggestions as to where the story should go, send me a message as in...

this:yay::rainbowwild:

this:rainbowkiss::fluttershbad::pinkiegasp:

or maybe even this :yay::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild: with a little this :pinkiehappy:---------:ajsmug:

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or just send me a private message with moar details:pinkiehappy:

I hope you enjoyed my first reference. If you didn't get it, too bad. I'm not gonna explain it.

But you get one hint where it is: :pinkiecrazy:

1124948 Darlecks much? (not sure how to spell thier names)
Wow Rarity... kinda makes people wonder...:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

1124948 i nhate pinkie had to ruin the moment and you can't deny AJ was enjoying herself

1125223 to this chapter i mean and you we know who Apple Jack likes now

1125259 who's POV will next chapter be form

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There will be intermissions every so often, but the main points of view will only be RD and FS

Ohhh, there better be some rarijack intermissions here. Also, I couldn't stop giggling at the part when pinkie pie just barged in the door, still smiling as I'm typing this comment right now.

1126667 love you too bro. Love you too :)

Great job on the new chapter keep this story going strong! :pinkiehappy::yay::heart:

Pinkie Pie has gone exterminator mode, and Applejack broke another Pinkie Promise. Just goes to show,
Everypony in this town, is crazy :pinkiecrazy:

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I read it wrong, somepony is trying to get AJ to brake another Pinkie Promise

I love this story! I can't wait for the next update. I love how you show the story from both perspectives. It's cute. :pinkiehappy:

Alright everypony! I will not be able to post Fluttershys chapter at the same time as this one!

Why?

Because this one was quite simply - A pain in the ass to write.

As you all know... School is starting and your beloved author (me) just happens to be a very stressed out freshman football player. So for the time being I hope you are all nice and cozy with a slow update story.

You all have been a wonderful audience, and I would like to think you are patient because this story is so amazing you will wait until the end of the universe for the next chapter.

But the most likely reason you have never once asked me when the next chapter is coming is quite simple: You have better things to do.

Thank you for waiting on my lazy ass to update! Goodnight!

Another note.

Tell me about any errors I have made, for this chapter was done while under the influence of sleep medication.

Thank you!:scootangel:

I feel like I'm the only one who has school the lastest. I have school on the 6th so I'm reading so as manyfics as I can because I know that I won't be reading as much. Anyways, I can't wait for the next fluttershy chapter and the rarijack intermissions.

Great chapter although I must say I do in fact lamment that there is no Fluttershy or RariJack chapter to go with it. I know though school is tough. You will get through it though. Great song great chapter. Can't wait for more!

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