Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash have been lifelong friends since Junior Speedsters Flight School. One day Twilight Sparkle gains the assistance of Fluttershy to help her explore an ancient ruin in the Everfree Forest. After Twilight returns, panicked from what happened; Rainbow Dash saves Fluttershy from the ruin. After that, things change between the two
Page generated in 0.066 seconds
Total duration
658 users online
815,844 hits today, 2,782,760 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
okay start
I'll track i guess...
Interesting... go on..
Sorry for the long wait i was in Vegas over the week to watch a boxing match. I'm back and the new chapter should be up now. The 3rd Chapter shouldn't take more than a week at the most
12987199 Im form vegas good story the suspence is giving me a heat attack
Well that escalated quickly....
I look forward to more since I get the story your telling and its Flutterash so I'll follow and its been upvoted. Your pacing is a bit wow, slow down there.. at points. They kind of went ultra passionate very quickly... very... but oh well. It'll make whats coming up even more... interesting...
FTW!
I'm more worried about what AJ will do cause that farm pony seems to be a straight and narrow type to me. But pinkie is a great choice to have staring
...
anyway, you have my support.
1330270
Yeah the pacing has been a pain in the neck since i started writing this. On the bright side, no school work tonight which will hopefully get me back on track for writing this
new chapter out everypony
its good to see everypony is in character. I'm interested to see what new angle you take on the whole friends disliking them because they are gay side. (Or not, if AJ turns up and is okay with them… but her reaction wasn't exactly nice…)
As long as Fluttershy has her Dashie, everything will be okay.
... does not equal a new sentence.
You need a comma after 'and'
Lowercase the 'Y,' add a comma after 'laugh.'
FINALLY!
NEW CHAPTER :D
i.imgur.com/j4Nnv.png ~Wolf
diu vivere in lupus imperium!
Cant decide whether I prefer this or magnetism.
Watch your pace, however, is something I struggle with too.