A pony who used to be the Princess of Friendship`s personal guard himself and being banished to a completely different world and turned, being cursed by a group of creature friends who are trying to save Equestria. He later learns that they have no choice but to make that curse. They forgive each other flaws and together, they go on a tragic and unforgettable journey to save their beloved kingdom.
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"Gundam" owned by Sotsu, Sunrise
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The first thing I want to say is: I'm sorry for the false illustration that the novel cover have shown. The suit I describe, the RX 0A Alicorn Gundam, has some huge difference compare to the Unicorn Gundam that I show in the cover, as you can read in this chapter. Another thing I want to say is, in case you don't know what a base jabber or a Jesta is, here is some picture for you:
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This is a base jabber.
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This is the Jesta, but the one I describe in this are customize version Jestas: the antenna was larger and was placed on top of it's head, not on the left side like the regular one. It also build with 4 thruster on the back pack instead of 2.
Anyway, thanks for reading :)
got to get around to reading it
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Nice to meet you again :)
Some explanation for this chapter can be found here: https://www.reddit.com/r/Gquestria/
In the small description:
judged
In the large description:
Remove
Additionally you have extremly long sentences with convoluted construction, you should try and rewrite them to be more streamlined.
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Thank you for your help :)
Note: I have edited this chapter a little bit to make it more detailling. Feel free to leave a comment :)
Can i use the title and the gundam unit? But I'm not copy entire things because im creating my own story line and lore, based on U.C, Post Disaster, Cosmic Era, and After War.
this story seems to be the victim of a very rough translation, I think having an English proofreader or even using a program like Grammarly would help a lot. Especially in the story description, it is pretty much unreadable in its current state.
Grammarly's full package requires payment, but there is a lite version you can install in Extensions using the Google Chrome Store. I don't know if it works in Windows 11 because I refuse to update.
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Finally someone say this. Thank you!
Yes, English is not my mother language and I still have some problem speaking English irl. However, I did use Grammarly and also several types of proofreader (including GoogleDocs). I my opinion I think why this happened it is mostly because I haven't really mastered in this language to properly write a novel like this.
Once again, thank you for your feedback.
it happened a shit ton in Victory Gundam as well, I swear in the early part of the show half the mobile suit kills were just them getting their heads punted off, probably a 'fuck you' from the overworked and depressive writer that also made 4 episodes in a row where we're introduced to a female pilot character just for her to die in dramatic fashion later in the episode. the most memorable was when a pilot and her GunEZ, instead of being shot at and blown up, got melted into the structure of a space launch-rail trestle they were supporting
are we supposed to be even more confused than Flash?