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Buck Ugly the fugly pony gets an audience with the Princesses. With their powerful magic, surely they could make his wishes come true, right?



Wrote this on a train on my phone then in the rain. So, yeah.

Yes, I know it's an old joke, but couldn't resist...

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Comments ( 30 )

I apologize in advance for this story.

Sucks for him, BAAAAAAAAD LIFE IS BAAAAAAAAD.

This story is my life in a nutshell.

Critiques:
Watch your grammar.
You tend to repeat information in dialogue and description.

1609694 Oh no!

And thanks for the critiques.

a force (love and tolerance) an immovable object (ugly's ugly). not bad

YOU'RE BACK :pinkiehappy:
Anyway, it was a nice short story, good for quick read.

Sad and sorrowful story. But I liked the ending: if it was not for the last sentence, I'd be in deep depression now.

Oh god, that last sentence! :rainbowlaugh:

Reminds me of the Joke about the genie and the man who wants either a road to Hawaii, with the alternative of understanding women.

Was this by chance a reference to Yin Yang Yo?

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What is that show. I recognise the name and I'm too lazy to look it up. TELL MEEE!

Ah, 'Tap. Still alive, I see (RE4 reference, in case you're wondering).

Glad to see you're still visiting the site.

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My imagination of Luna's expression upon the entrance of Buck:

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Anywho, I like it.:pinkiesmile:

:ajbemused:

:facehoof:
Goddamnit

:moustache:
Good one:twilightsmile:

Mmm, well played Buck well played.

1610883 I do my best.
1611355 Ha! That's excellent.
1610270 :eeyup: Eeuyup...

Ha! Thanks for the quick laugh! That last sentence made my sides hurt. :rainbowlaugh:

All of my duphuqs.

What, no 'Scared Shitless the Pansy Assed Gangster Pony'?

1619588 Haha!

Perhaps next time.

1619623 Fuckin' do it lol, he's a character me an some bronies came up with after playing a board game that I forgot the name of. Arkham I think it was.

HA! This is one of those rare one-shots that can really keep my attention, even if it was short. But hey, that's what makes it adorable, the length just makes it a bite-sized bit of fun.

Anyhoo, I liked it. I thought that the premise was... interesting, and the gag at the end? Priceless! (In the words of a certain master of pranks) For a story that was supposedly written on an iPod, this was amazing.

Have a fave and a thumb, you deserve it man.:pinkiehappy:

1619629 I've got a few other fics in the works. After those, I might return to this...
1619644 Thanks! Also, it wasn't on an iPod, it was on an Android phone.

1619692 Meh, they're still pretty much the same thing. Either way, I've never been patient enough to type up my stuff on a mobile device of ANY kind, so your situation is pretty awesome.

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Ha. Ha ha. HAHAHA!

Beautiful humor, and just the right size - I'm on a word diet.

:pinkiehappy:

This story has gotten around more than me.

1643596 It liked your duphuqs...

"Let's take another look at that love and tolerance wish..."
:rainbowlaugh:I laughed so hard I think I broke a bone or something.
Nice work!:twilightsmile:

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