This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry, Defender of the Peace S6
When the students of Canterlot High go on a trip to Camp Everfree, they are amazed to discover a magical force is causing strange things to happen around the camp. Meanwhile, Twilight Sparkle is still suffering with the mistakes she's made while using magic as the dreaded Midnight Sparkle. With the help of her friends, she must overcome her fears, and now embrace her newfound magical abilities to save the camp.
All the while, Flash is dealing with his own issues, mainly his unclear feelings toward his best friend and her interest if some guy she barely knows. But as he does this, he now finds himself wielding his own magical abilities.
Edited by KingJoltik
Well, Banshee finally adapts his least-favorite Equestria Girls movie for this! Let's hope Flash must prevent Timber from getting together with Twilight.
I don't care what anyone said, Timber deserve to get his heart break by Twilight! He's so lucky that i ain't his boss cause I would fired his ass if he was dating an under-age student... A camp counselor dating an under-age student, what were Hasbro thinking?
It seems her parents are more overprotective in EQG than Equestria.
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Random man: YOU SUCK, TIMBER SPRUCE!!!!!
Season 9 foreshadowing.
Every Flashlight shippers' reaction to Twimber ship in a nutshell..... just wanting to say that nutshell line.
Shut up, Timber!
Ooooohhh..... Human Flash is getting his own power? An electric power? Is he becoming Flash?
Get it, Flash transform into Flash! Ha ha ha ha! Pun intended! Sorry but not sorry.
Well, this is short chapter but this is just the beginning of Flash's greatest challenge... stopping Timber from stealing his beloved Twilight.
I know some of you don't bash on Timber but not for me, on next week and week after that, I will bash Timber everytime he appears in this fic.
Fuck Timber Spruce.
Oh yeah i can't wait for timber to be let down
Oh boy! I have waited patiently for years for you to get to this! Kinda ironic that this terrible movie was what finally convinced you to make your own version of the show, and we get one of the greatest adaptation series thanks to it.
I am just going to come out and say, most of the adaptation fanfics I find of this story are just lazy and disappointing. Off the top of my head I can only think of one fanfic version that is any good and gives Flash justice, maybe two. Most people who adapt this and Friendship Games do a borderline plagiarism of the movies, like they copy and pasted the transcript with little to no changes in dialogue. The biggest “changes” most people make are a) replacing Sci-Twi with a Human Sunset, b) make it so Sci-Twi gets in a relationship with Sunset instead, or c) add a bunch of pointless OCs that don’t contribute anything to the story and just steal lines or feel completely out of place. I know you won’t be doing any of those things though so this is going to be good.
As for the actual story, it seems like it is off to a good start. Nice to see that all the guys in the group are not impressed by Timber, and instantly see through his bullshit. It also looks like Flash is getting some electric based magic. That is interesting, so maybe he’ll be like Static from DC or something. Also, the small explanation of what happened to Cinch after the Friendship Games was entirely satisfying. Much better than just learning Cadance had replaced her from a single line in Dance Magic.
Also, interesting change for Diamond Tiara to be going to Crystal Prep instead of CHS. It might be small, but still interesting and a little fitting considering her attitude before her redemption.
I can’t wait for the next chapter! Thanks for this!
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I'm with you due maybe at the end of this Twi would tell that guy.
Twilight "I'm sorry Timber but there's someone else...."
Timber "It's Flash Sentry isn't it?"
Twilight "Yes."
I was definitely put off with this movie when it came out and I'm really hoping that your iteration will help fix everything that was wrong with it. I'm quite confident and hopeful that you'll do you fine.
A pretty good start already Banshee, I can already feel the tensions start building up between Timber & Flash in this one! Good that we got to know Cinch got hit by the karma stick hard for all the crap she pulled during Friendship Games, not to mention Flash's powers starting to manifest themselves, should be a wild ride in the upcoming chapters!
But wait, what's this over here on the trail???.......Oh just some Highlights! :
Ahhhh sweet, sweet delicious karma......priceless!!!
Bummer, guess the extreme bike-riding's cancelled as well?
Wise choice Flash!
Dun Dun Dunnnnn!!!!
Looking forward to the next installment Banshee!
there's the guy with the most punchable face in the world
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Pal, you just read my mind! I have been looking for years for a story where Flash punches that jerk in the face but have yet to find one. The closest I have found is him punching him in the gut, which I will admit is a great alternative.
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I have no idea what you're talking about. "Sudden Pinocchio nose"
Good grief. Please tell me you're not rehashing that one arc from your Pokemon series. I know conflict and conflict resolution are a healthy part of any relationship, but there's something uncomfortable about the way you write the two of them fighting. I can't explain it. Not that that one arc was bad, it was just really uncomfortable seeing them be jerks to each other. Also, whenever you write about them fighting, it kinda feels like they're only fighting for the sake of dragging out the romantic tension between them. Granted, my discomfort might have more to do with my personality as opposed to your writing ability.
I'll be honest with you. My biggest problem with the movie wasn't even the fact that Flash got shafted although that was terrible. I just found the whole movie except the ending really depressing. I'm hoping that your version turns out better in that regard as well as the shipping aspect.
Oh gosh! I want to like this SO BAD! But I'm kinda terrified that I won't. I mean, I want to like it because I think highly of you as a writer and a Flashlight shipper, but I'm worried that I won't because our interpretations of the characters don't always line up and because our tastes in fiction don't always mesh.
Okay, okay. I'm just going to calm down and keep reading. I'll attempt to enjoy this, but please don't take it personally if I don't.
This chapter looks good. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
I think Timber should get a punch in the face near at the end of this book
At least, Flash has Royal Knights and lesser extent to Sunset backing him up when it come to Twilight and Timber situation.
Human Flash is one insecure dude! He better make a move or else, Twilight will be taken by Timber! Stop be so insecure!
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There, there, Flash. I can understand that too, I don't trust Timber too.
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Thank you! So glad someone brought that one up! I means why would someone ship a camp counselor with a minor?! Come on!
Hahahaha! I knew they would do that Kissing song!
I didn't think about that, but sorry to disappoint you, Heather but Human Lightning and Wild are in different school and they are not in relationship with Human Rarity or Pinkie. Oh! Not to mention Human Rainbow is not dating Human Soarin or where is the ship tease for Human Applejack with Human Rogue? Hell! Would we even get to see Human Rogue appear in EQG world?!
Sorry, just pointing it out.
My apologies.
Presses a BOO button again
Random man: YOUR PICK-UP LINE SUCK TOO, TIMBER SPRUCE!!!!!
Yup, even Patrick doesn't like that line too.
Excuse me for one moment...
Timber is definitely one lazy slacker bum!
SHUT UP! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP, TIMBER SPRUCE!!!!!
First The Flash and now, The Hulk? Damn? What kind of power you having, Flash?!
I hope Flash grow some spines and just confessed to Twilight about her feelings or else, he will let Timber win!
Come on, Flash!
Oh Flash....
That ending is gonna make things interesting for the next chapter.
Another good chapter. You already managed to fix one of the biggest problems with Legend of Everfree, Sunset’s advice to Flash. She gives entire friendship speeches to everyone else, but the most she could spare him was a “get over it” in canon, I call that borderline relationship sabotage. But here she actually gives him good advice, and is onboard with the Royal Knights plan to help him and Sci-Twi hook up.
I’m curious to see what Flash’s powers exactly are, or maybe he has multiple powers since he currently seems to have Lightning and strength based magic.
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On one hand, I see your point, I really do. But on the other hand, High School romance does not always instantly equal future partners. It is possible any of them could hookup sometime after they graduate or something.
can not wait to see what you got planned te end part got me hype high long time reader just made a account and figuring things out and hope to start posting soon.
But I really want to see how this will go.
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Fair enough.
I could see some of them hooking up after graduating from school.
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Alright, I tend to get carried away with bashing Timber everytime he's appeared.
I will tone it down but still.
He's lucky that I ain't his boss or otherwise, I would fired him or even worse, call police on him for dating a minor like Sci-Twi.
Just saying.
I'll admit I'm not a fan of EQG and Timber but I'm liking where this is going and you have been doing a really good job on the Flash Sentry Chronicles. Makes me Wished you were a writer for Flash Sentry in the cannon show.
Yeah, no offense, but this story is even more big saddening than the source material so far, and the only thing I've been able to look forward to is Twilight and Timber not being a thing. Also, please tell me Flash is going to do more than notice that Twilight is having problems. I get that he's feeling inadequate, but at least have him TRY to show her that he cares about her problems, even if it's something small.
Like I said last time, our interpretations of who these characters are sometimes don't agree, so don't take everything I just wrote personally.
Glad that the Royal Knights & Sunset are on Flash's side regarding his feelings for Twilight, especially Sunset's brutal honest advice! Also Flash's powers are starting to get stronger, hopefully that dock won't get destroyed too much like in canon!
And lo & behold......some Highlights! :
De Nile Flash......more than just a river!
Gotta love her brutal honesty!
Just think, that could've been your head Timber!
He he yeah, a total idiot indeed..........oh boy!
Better reign in those emotions Flash, before you blow up something bigger!
Sweet 2nd chapter Banshee, till the next one!!!
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Nothing will ever make SciTimber okay for me. I'd prefer her staying single over that.
Banshee, as a woman, I have no way of knowing what it's like for a man to be crippled by inadequacy, but I am of the opinion that a real man wouldn't let inadequacy stop him from giving a woman what she needs, and right now, Twilight needs someone to talk to, someone who will listen, and someone who will show her that he cares. If Flash doesn't find a way to at least TRY to give that to Twilight, then maybe his love for her is purely imaginary. He doesn't have to tell her how he feels. He just has to let her know he's there for her. That's it.
poor Flash going through so much
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Well Timber Spruce is a jerk.
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How so?
This story is getting interesting so far! I am just shocked that there are so many people who hate Timber Spruce. He seems like a good person. While I still ship Flash with Twilight in both Equestria and the human world, I don't want to see Timber getting mistreated. I think that would be unfair. I just have to agree with Foxhelm about this.
I would be fine if SciTwi got together with Timber and Flash would be content with them. Those boys could even settle peace between each other. Not that I think it will happen anyway. I just want to read a good story.
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Well he brags alot, and he kept flirting at Applejack, and he's only like Twilight's body, and let not forget that one time he use Twilight as a human shield when they were at the beach and should I keep going on or you get what I'm mean?
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When did those things even happen?
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In the EQG shorts the beach episodes.
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I'm afraid I have to disagree with you. That was simply odd, friendly banter between Timber and AJ. Also, I thought Timber hiding behind SciTwi because they thought Pinkie's floatie was a sea monster was pretty funny. It's kind of the joke that the ordinary boy would hide behind the powerful girl in fear. It may seem a little cliche but that all it is, a joke. The guy isn't perfect of course.
I still don't see Timber Spruce as a bad guy in any way. Sorry😐🤷🏿♂️.
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Timber: Sees possible danger and hides behind a girl.
Flash: Sees actual danger but runs towards it because his friends need help.
Flash vs Timber, obvious winner in this situation.
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That's fair. However, I still won't start disliking the guy because of that. I don't want to cause any trouble. I still love your series so far.
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You have your opinions and I have my opinions.
I like Flash comfort Twilight over Midnight Sparkle incident but damn! That ending!
Not only Flash finally confesses about his true feelings toward Twilight (FINALLY!) but his powers causing him to run away from her as he doesn't want to hurt her like how Twilight doesn't want hurt to her friends.
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Okay, I definitely playing both songs right now!
Ship tease! ❤️❤️❤️
Way to go, Timber for ruined the moment.
Rude. 😡
Get used to it, Flash. You will be seeing a lot of weird stuffs but unfortunately, unlike your pony counterpart, you along with Sci-Twi, Rainbooms and Royal Knights of this world sadly won't get a proper closure due to Equestria Girls got cancelled.
Damn it, Hasbro.
Definitely The Flash.
Spits drink
WHAT?!?! You can't be serious! I like you're not acting possessive but really?!
Poor Flash.
P.S.
Here's a lesson.
Don't bottle yourself so much cause the more you bottle yourself, you ends up hurting yourself.
It's better to talk with someone about the issues or else, you will hurt yourself like what happens with Twilight and especially, Flash.
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To be fair, at least Flash didn't came across as possessive about Twilight.
He was willing to let her to be with Timber if it make her happy.
I know a certain author (whom I refuses to name) tend to write a lot of fiction where all of his character came across as possessive about girls and get butt hurt when the girls doesn't love them back.
Okay, this was worth the price of admission.
Loving this looking forward what the last three are going to be about.
Yikes, quite the cliffhanger at the end there for Flash & Twilight, hoping they can bounce back from this next chapter! On the light side it was interesting seeing the main cast finding out their powers!
*flicks on a flashlight* Now where are those pesky Highlights? :
Ok if a pig/human hybrid shows up to pollute the camp's lake I'm out of here!
Whoa, Flash just went Neo for a sec there!
Welp.....that was a buzzkill!
No no no FLASH!!!!!!!!
Doggone it my heart, why?????
Things sure went pear-shaped at the end there, hoping things are looking better next chapter Banshee!
Wow, so Flash's powers are "Energy" which can be used for speed, strength, or lightning. That sounds useful.
Flash confronting Timber was a great part. Even if I absolutely do not support the idea of Twi and Timber together, I will admit that Flash saying all he wants is for Twilight to be happy, even if she doesn't end up with him, was very mature of him. Though what happens afterwards with him running away from Twilight hurt a bit. I hope he'll be okay.
Asshole! I've seen stuff like that elsewhere. Most commonly a version where someone holds a door open for someone then purposely closes it in someone else's face. It is one of the easiest ways to show someone is a jerk.
Ah, so close to zapping him. Oh well, maybe we'll get lucky in one of the chapters we have left.
Poor flash hope he will be alright.
also while he might have liked Sci twi he was willing to let her go
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I kind of agree with you. Not wanting to antagonize anyone. You made some valid points. While I ship Flashlight, I can't help but think of the pony versions in this AU. The SciTwi and EQG Flash don't seem to have the same romantic spark as those two do, in my eyes.
Well, at least Flash finally control his power... ish.
Look like this chapter has officially sunk the ship between Sci-Twi and Timber... I think.
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Geez, Twilight! Don't be so angsty about yourself! We get it! Who do you think you are?! Wanda?!
I watched WandaVision... awesome show.
Jumping to a conclusion too soon, Timber?
Press the button
Sorry, I just couldn't resist.
Busted!!!
You just jinxed yourselves, Royal Knights.
Flash to the rescue!
Or not.
Can Flash, Twilight and Sunset make it back to Camp Everfree before it's too late?!
Will Gaia Everfree succeed on trapping everyone in her camp forever?!
When will Twilight get over her angsty-ness?!
Find out on the next exciting chapter of The Flash Sentry Chronicles!
Kyle Hebert will be proud of me!
Kamina: WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?!