King of the streets

DeathWolf06

DeathWolf06 #1 · Mar 29th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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Ah so this is up huh? Well nice to see it up and good pic for Miss Harshwhinny here

DeathWolf06

DeathWolf06 #2 · Mar 29th, 2021 · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·

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Well he didnt waist any time and did put up a good show and left a good message. Now just need to see how he does as the new boss and what business he'll do next and how he would expand and take more territory if he dose. As well see how his partnership with Chrysalis goes later on

Darth_krayt

Darth_krayt #3 · Mar 29th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Mr. Junior we've been expecting you

Ryshinki

Ryshinki #4 · Mar 30th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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This is real good.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #5 · Apr 5th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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I smiled as I leaned back into the sofa and pulled out the small stack of hundreds, then set it on the coffee table. “Yep, and he’s offered to make me part of the new information chain, and he’s looking for info brokers. You two got dirt on a lot of people from your old lives. He’s willing to pay for what we all know. I got a feeling sticking with his is a safe bet, so I’ll be sticking by him. Betraying him seems like a death sentence, so I’d keep my mouth shut.” After I finished, the door opened, and Rainbow walked back in with a smile on her face. I quickly grabbed the cash and stuffed it back into my jacket.

This is a bit unsettling. I mean, WHY mention the concept of betrayal?! Leonardo Jr. is very SENSITIVE with Traitors and Betrayal. And it's a very bad idea to do that. So like you said Sunset, don't do anything stupid.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #6 · Apr 6th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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I laughed as we walked up to the car. “I’m not going to threaten anyone if this falls through. Rainbow has no part in this, and I won’t try and catch her in the blast radius if something happens.” She nodded, and we got in and started to talk once we were in the car.
“So, what are you really after? What do you want to gain from everything?”
I looked at her for a second, then nodded as I started the car and backed out. “You don’t need to know that Sunset. Your job is just to gather information.” She looked at me, and I sighed as I put the car into drive. “You’ll be safer if you don’t know what I’m planning. I don’t want you to get caught in the blast zone when I drop the nuke.” She nodded, and I turned us back onto the main road.

Sunset. You should STOP trying to be Nosy, okay. You live longer.

And was the "Blast Radius", and the "Nuke" is just a expression?

“So, can you at least tell me if you’re from Equestria?”
I looked at her confused, and she seemed to be relieved. I looked forward again as she laughed a little.
“Yeah, I guess I shouldn’t have asked you about it. Seeing as I don’t think you know what I’m talking about.”

Sunset, you idiot! You talk too much! And news flash. NOT everyone you have met comes from Equestria or have a Pony Counterpart even.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #7 · Apr 6th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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I smiled as I walked through my new place of business and smiled as I watched my people moving around. Jr had given us a chance for a real power base. I smiled then walked into the VIP room. I looked over at the desk and saw the map Jr had lent me. I walked over and looked down at it and stopped when I saw that the image had changed. It showed that my area had grown and Jr’s area had turned black. “What the hell?”

What's the problem here?

Pete100

Pete100 #8 · Apr 6th, 2021 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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I huffed then aimed at his back and fired four more times finishing him off. I waited a second then looked at the scared woman as she cowered beside a dumpster. She had hair like fire but was even younger than me. I was only seventeen for god’s sake.

Seventeen? Damn.

I smiled then pulled my bag around then pulled the zipper down. I reached in then pulled out a few hundred dollar bills. I held them out to her and she looked down at them shocked. "Take this and get something to protect yourself with. I was worried you may get in trouble again after I left." She took the cash as I zipped the bag close. I rested my hand on the bag as I walked over to an open office door. I knocked on the door even though it was open.

Sign up for some classes.

I smiled up at her then nodded as I stood up. She smiled as she set the key down on the dresser before she walked out of the apartment. Her wide hips swayed as she walked and I was grateful for that man giving me the knowledge of this era.

What kind of knowledge?

Pete100

Pete100 #9 · Apr 6th, 2021 · · 2 · Chapter 2 ·

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Well, apparently he didn’t learn his lesson from his last life. And what message was he giving to sunset?

Pete100

Pete100 #10 · Apr 6th, 2021 · 2 · 1 · Chapter 3 ·

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So it seems like everyone in this story is corrupt.

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Moonking

Moonking #12 · Apr 6th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

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I know your friends faces, now keep your mouth shut

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Pete100

Pete100 #14 · Apr 6th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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Is this before or after the legend of everfree?

Moonking

Moonking #15 · Apr 6th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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That will be explained in the next chapter

Pete100

Pete100 #16 · Apr 6th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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Oh ok

Ryshinki

Ryshinki #17 · Apr 7th, 2021 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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nice chapter.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #18 · Apr 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 4 ·

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I smiled as my people came out armed with new rifles and pistols. “Ya, their hold up in the hotel you shot up. About fifty of them were there and have reinforced the doors.” Jr nodded then walked up and jumped into the van with my guys. I knew he was on my side but now that I’d seen that map I trust in him has faded some. ‘Let’s see how well all this plays out.’

Well, that's sounds dumb of her? I mean, HOW is it Jr's fault that the Map has a "mind" of it's own?! Heck, he said it himself that he DOESN'T know what's happening with the Map. You should blame the stranger that give Jr the Map in the first place.

Pete100

Pete100 #19 · Apr 13th, 2021 · · 1 · Chapter 4 ·

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I raised an eyebrow as I looked at him. “Oh no, she's nice, but I don’t mix pleasure and business. Nothing but trouble no matter what you do.” Chrysalis nodded, and the blonde girl laughed into her hand as she looked at me. I rolled my eyes and flipped her off, making her laugh more. I smirked and looked at Chrysalis, who smirked as she looked at me.

When did chrysalis get there?