Like winter skies

Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo went on a flight in the mountains, and when Scootaloo gets lost, Rainbow Dash has to look for the little filly ...

This is just a short one, I thought I should give it a shot to write something nice for once.

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WinterTwister

WinterTwister #1 · Dec 19th, 2011 · · ·

pretty good, the dialogue was a little confusing because you didn't separate it.
When I saw the title i was like wtf, because one of my stories is called Winter Skies

ReapersSprint

ReapersSprint #2 · Dec 19th, 2011 · · ·

Not bad, it was a good story. I feel like you should have spaced it out a little bit between at least 2 chapters, but that does seem like it could be a little difficult.

I still don't get why everyone makes Scootaloo an orphan, is it because we haven't seen her parents and she has no known siblings?

Mr Tinkertrain

Mr Tinkertrain #3 · Dec 19th, 2011 · · ·

75643 The Idea popped into my mind when I saw the picture, I just had to name it Like Winter Skies
First name was Winter Skies, though, but I changed it in the end.

Mr Tinkertrain

Mr Tinkertrain #4 · Dec 19th, 2011 · · ·

75795 Guess so. Atleast you have to admit that nothing is known about her parents, if she has siblings or even where she lives at all.

Primordial Deomontus

Primordial Deomontus #5 · Dec 22nd, 2011 · · ·

just one question: when it said there relationship changed did you mean they fell in love or they love each other like family if it was fell in love that would be odd

Mr Tinkertrain