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Personally, the MLP series is awesome and the mane 6 and everypony else are the best characters. Seriously. The world just got 20% cooler in 10 seconds flat.
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Hi there! I hope you're doing absolutely fantastic today. ^_^x
I really liked it. The concept was small, and the story was managed to transform into something beautiful in just minutes. It must be quite sad for Scootalo, though. It was quite unexpected and shocking for her. Also, I loved these lines:
I loved it.
Tata. Take care, and be safe. Bye.
This is so great and really heartfelt, i loved it.
you even managed to get me to shed a few tears
Well done
A well written story. Although I'm wondering how someone is able to tell a pony isn't able to get a cutie mark. Also, Snowflake (aka Roid Rage) has tiny wings and is able to fly just fine. Still, it was a very sweet story. MUSTACHES!
2575554 I'm so glad you liked it! I've tried to write many fics but they all turn out badly. At least this one seems to have some good feedback. Thank you!
Well done...my feels...just take them all!
same here
I like this in a story. Short, sweet, and cute. On a side note, that is an interesting concept that I've never seen done before. I might use it.
Awwww!
Poor Scoots will never get her cutie mark. That must be terrifying in a world where a Cutie Mark is the most important thing a pony has. Well it was a cute story. Sad but cute.
Sad, sweet, and just the right amount of feels and fluff.
Poor Scootaloo indeed though. I'm quite surprised she took it as well as she did.
Nice job!
I don't know it didn't feel real sad to me because she is just sitting there waiting for the bad news (climax) to come. Pretty good writing for being bored and it did have a powerful feeling. All I can say as small suggestion is have a little build up/rising action, and then the climax would be more powerful. I mean there could be tests or reason for them to be at the hospital, I wanted to know the why/how. The characters came across well and an interesting premise.
2580037 I'll take that into consideration next time I want to write a fanfic
Just take my feels and go!
This gives me major feels
D'awww... so sweet :) is i really this hard to make me cry!? Oh brother....
that's really make me cry...
my best friend tol me "why are you cry??? what the hell are you reading???let me see" and me "oh...i ust read an awesome and sad story" and she says let me see and i close my computer 
i wan't see her sad but i really love this story...in my fav 
