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Angel of Anarchy
Welcome I am an incarnation of anarchy as my name suggests I bring death and destruction but only to keep balance of the universe.
Angel of Anarchy
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...Different? You sure about that?? I mean timeskips are used quite alot in Displaced stories to avoid showing character growth to the reader.
Love it.
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Well i haven't seen much like the one i'm working on so i didn't know how to word it.
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Thank you :}
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Np
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Well, as of now we don't know how well the MC acted upon being displaced, did he freak out or did he take it calm? What did he do during that time and afterwards? How'd he gain those achievements as shown in the story's description? How long it took him to learn how to use his new powers? Did he struggle? etc. That is alot of character growth you could have shown in chapter one through ten, so now you may need to show it in the form of flashbacks of the MC explaining bits and pieces of its past throughout the story.
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that will be given later as the story progresses right now he is calm since he knows whats going on but later he will en-tale what he did once he first arrived and he troubles he faced this is a mix of third and first person, right now im developing Apple first then I will give some future hints to My MC's
Past.
Oh and one more thing i plan to have a pole of sorts for the rest of the factions of races you know like how i called the unicorn race faction "Mystics Elite." Well i want to include you guys more so the races i need a name or title for are.
Pegasus.
Earth pony.
Griffon.
Great Seedling.
Crystal pony.
Dragon.
Zebra.
Minotuar.
Bat-Pony.
And possibly more seems like a lot but that gives more opportunities.
This is actually getting really good!.. Just would recommend an editor for the smaller Mistakes.
Great work keep it up
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yea i plan to fix those, let me know where you see them and i'll fix that.
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thank you
Great story
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Thank you :}
While I praise you for making this unique and the beginning different, I can't say same on how our guy (MC) is gonna find out his history, while I like this it doesn't really fit with the MC being a former king and all of that (going by the description) but hey I shall read on and see how it goes
This is actually pretty darn great more so when you think about how many displaced stories that actually have the MC ruling a nation and I look forward to next chapter very much
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He's not gonna find out it's the other characters you know like Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Daring Do and the princesses.
He knows his past it's the others that are trying to find out so they're digging deep to the libraries legends myths everything just a figure out who this guy is and what is he truly capable of because Two had already seen what he can do. So they're trying to figure out what he can do in a combat situation they're trying to learn their enemy before diving headfirst cause clearly he ain't afraid to kill someone and to take their life from them so they're trying to know what Can defeat him and what can't.Much like how they tried to figure out Sombra.
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I'm Glad you got it.😂
That was an interesting opening chapter. I love and applaud the concept as set out in the A/N. Though it seems like a story that would only have the MC and other OCs. I look forward to seeing how this story develops and how the characters you tagged are able to come into the story. I have an idea on that last one but I'm not sure if it's right. It'll be fun to see it regardless. Keep up the good work.
Excuse me Discord, Vegeta want his sthich back.
For the faction names:
Pegasus=Aero Warrior
Earth pony=Terra Walker
Griffon=Winged Beast
Great Seedling=Will of Nature
Crystal pony=Emerald Keeper
Dragon=Inferno Born
Zebra=Striped Rhymer
Minotaur=Strong Taurus
Bat-pony=Night Watcher
Maybe add Cat/Abyssinian=Swift Claws
And Fox=Sly Tactician
What do you think?
Usually I don’t read stories until a few chapters came out but I’m glad I waited I really enjoyed the story I’m gonna be keeping an eye on it see how it goes hopefully it doesn’t fall into the other tropes that displaced stories do
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I'll use inferno born, emerald keeper, and night watcher.
Thank you for the input.
As for the line...yes Vegeta would like that back.
I liked this very much, more so the Changeling and discord scenes, really love what you did with them both, a different type/kind of changeling that feeds off of lust, and discord isn't a unstoppable know it all, look forward to next chapter
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DD elites hounds of taurus
umbrum race = the kings shadow
If he's Cain does that mean that the antidiluvians as well as Christianity and The Lord Almighty exist as well, unless the great flood never happened in which case we can rule out antidiluvians.
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uh sorry it's been a while since ive played the game so my history if fuzzy but in this story the other nations in the time he ruled are separate from any religious group more like a hierarchy far before the 'Great formation' of the three main equine races and other races...
So the ponies are at war with each other with the other races are in the mix as well, As for my OC he was 'THE' First ruler to unify any of two races let alone all of them...and the other nations hated him for it due to some speculation that he could send spies and ruin their rule, and he was powerful and very smart so he was a threat...so in a desperate attempt to end the rising power of The Raven Unity...well i'll add that to the story soon enough.
I have to admit this seems verry interesting. I look forward to seeing where you go with this story.
I am usually not a fan of Displaced stories, but I love the whole Legacy of Kain series. So i gave it a try and i was not disappointed. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you for the input.
Hello first off I want to Apologize for not putting up chapters recently.
My word expired and all my progress on the next chapter was set back and the tools are locked atm...And I need to save for a place of my own
I only recently got a job but it's part time so not much hours unfortunately.
I do have a YouTube and Twitch but not much luck on either of them...so that isn't really working
I'm in a very tough spot and need to get my shit together or i may end up homeless.
So I hope you all understand why I haven't been able to post a new chapter right now.
I know it's totally the wrong vampire but I've been reading him with Alucards voice from Hellsing Ultimate Abridged.
where is the human tag?
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Huh funny, but my oc is...more serious tone but i can imagine him sounding like it.
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well he was human and i couldn't add another tag since 3 were already up.
MOOOOOOREEE!!!!! please.
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Soon my child...SOON
Need more the cliff hangers is the worst cringe in any story
Good to see you back. My daly check-ins have payed of.