10113831 Well, as of now we don't know how well the MC acted upon being displaced, did he freak out or did he take it calm? What did he do during that time and afterwards? How'd he gain those achievements as shown in the story's description? How long it took him to learn how to use his new powers? Did he struggle? etc. That is alot of character growth you could have shown in chapter one through ten, so now you may need to show it in the form of flashbacks of the MC explaining bits and pieces of its past throughout the story.
10113880 that will be given later as the story progresses right now he is calm since he knows whats going on but later he will en-tale what he did once he first arrived and he troubles he faced this is a mix of third and first person, right now im developing Apple first then I will give some future hints to My MC's Past.
Oh and one more thing i plan to have a pole of sorts for the rest of the factions of races you know like how i called the unicorn race faction "Mystics Elite." Well i want to include you guys more so the races i need a name or title for are.
Pegasus.
Earth pony.
Griffon.
Great Seedling.
Crystal pony.
Dragon.
Zebra.
Minotuar.
Bat-Pony.
And possibly more seems like a lot but that gives more opportunities.
...Different? You sure about that?? I mean timeskips are used quite alot in Displaced stories to avoid showing character growth to the reader.
Love it.
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Well i haven't seen much like the one i'm working on so i didn't know how to word it.
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Thank you :}
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Np
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Well, as of now we don't know how well the MC acted upon being displaced, did he freak out or did he take it calm? What did he do during that time and afterwards? How'd he gain those achievements as shown in the story's description? How long it took him to learn how to use his new powers? Did he struggle? etc. That is alot of character growth you could have shown in chapter one through ten, so now you may need to show it in the form of flashbacks of the MC explaining bits and pieces of its past throughout the story.
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that will be given later as the story progresses right now he is calm since he knows whats going on but later he will en-tale what he did once he first arrived and he troubles he faced this is a mix of third and first person, right now im developing Apple first then I will give some future hints to My MC's
Past.
Oh and one more thing i plan to have a pole of sorts for the rest of the factions of races you know like how i called the unicorn race faction "Mystics Elite." Well i want to include you guys more so the races i need a name or title for are.
Pegasus.
Earth pony.
Griffon.
Great Seedling.
Crystal pony.
Dragon.
Zebra.
Minotuar.
Bat-Pony.
And possibly more seems like a lot but that gives more opportunities.