This is actually getting really good!.. Just would recommend an editor for the smaller Mistakes.

Great work keep it up

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yea i plan to fix those, let me know where you see them and i'll fix that.

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thank you

Great story

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Thank you :}

This is actually pretty darn great more so when you think about how many displaced stories that actually have the MC ruling a nation and I look forward to next chapter very much

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He's not gonna find out it's the other characters you know like Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Daring Do and the princesses.
He knows his past it's the others that are trying to find out so they're digging deep to the libraries legends myths everything just a figure out who this guy is and what is he truly capable of because Two had already seen what he can do. So they're trying to figure out what he can do in a combat situation they're trying to learn their enemy before diving headfirst cause clearly he ain't afraid to kill someone and to take their life from them so they're trying to know what Can defeat him and what can't.Much like how they tried to figure out Sombra.