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This is very interesting and a good start. I look forward to more and this chapter with the information given gives me Horizon Zero Dawn vibes.

Hmmm, was EQG a thing, since it would have given Twi some ideas (with Sunset and Sci-Twi background knowledge) unless this setting is a bit mote Jetsonian ...

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That is a tool that she has the ability to use if she needs it.

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Thank you

I'm liking the story so far maybe a few more reference images? But anyway I am very interested to see where this goes and remember good night and good luck and Adventure is out there!.

Imagine that they come across a highly organized, heavily armed and armored pack of diamond dogs that have taken it upon themselves to guard the city, as they revere it as some kind of holy monument, referring to the humans as 'The Great Shepherds'.

Just a thought that came to my mind as I was reading this chapter, thought I might just put it out there seemed like a very interesting altercation in my mind

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I might just keep that idea in my pocket. Or something like that?

I changed my mind, keep the cold calculating mindset but can you make him mute and the way he communicates would be with a collar that he wears that's highly advanced as well as damn near ancient technology that converts his thoughts into speech

I'm liking it so far. Interesting premise. Keep it up!!!

I'm just starting this story and Dr. Caballeron is in top form.

Cadence, I'm disappointed in you.

😁😁👍thank you so much for including my idea in your story, I love the changes you made. I can't wait to see the story's progress

Wow very nice and well written. 👏👏👏

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No problem. It was a good idea and you gave me a bunch of nice ideas.

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Thank you. Tell your friends

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unlike there weak brethren they are self disapplied and zealots by nature

It like the start of a DND session. 😀

Can the first human they encounter do the pillar man pose coming out of Cryo staces or something, with Genetic engineering they get perfect bodies without Needing to do anything

Hey I think chapter 1 is missing

...what happed to chapter 5? It was posted yesterday

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Sorry about that. Something had to be re-edited so I had to remove it. It should be back soon

All right, who's on rescue duty now ...

It was an enjoyable chapter🙂 and I have very confused thoughts and I have mixed feelings about this chapter but let's see what happens next🤔

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