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My first foray into clop *gulp*. Don't restrain yourself with criticism or comments, I won't yell at you or anything. Promise.
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I only have one question...
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To be honest this a good clop-fiction.Make more chapters soon.
Good work
I will not eat u
Here have the following:
a confused dashie
Six spikes
And a Big Mac
Send dangerous plant. Don't include instructions.
Celestia be trollin.
The clop scenes felt a bit rushed. But overall the pacing of your story is maintaining consistency. Grammar wise you managed to dodge the mistakes I usually home in on like a blood-crazed doberman, improperly conjugated verbs and inappropriate apostrophes!
That said, if you want to improve your clop scenes, take it slow. I know I was nervous as hell when I wrote my first clop scene. If you rush through your writing the quality will decrease.
Also, a flower that turns anypony around it into slutty blondes? Regidar is going to love this...
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Why, Near? What the bloody hell is your problem?
1818353 Thanks for the advice, also, be advised, the different phases of the moon may change the effect of the flower. Just throwing that out there.
For those not part of the wider porn community, the first fetish (besides Age Progression) here is called 'Bimboification' which involves turning the subject into an oversexed dumb blonde... though the exact specifications vary sometimes.
That said... I like where this is going. Please sir, can I have some more?
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Hmmm. Pretty good I suppose. Just keep it going.
It's an original idea and a quite interesting one so yeah, keep it up
oh mighty god or goddess oh clop fic please write more i humbly beg you...... bows head
1819906 It's not really that original. I know I've read at least three others with a so-far similar start, but anyhoof....
Nipples on the chest? On the CHEST!? Yeah, no. This is where I stop. Mark it anthro, take out the nipples entirely, or please, for the love of Celestia, get the anatomy right.
1820545 Sorry if I offended you... If I must make it anthro, then I shall.
1820645 Well, the rest of it was fine. I didn't see any hind leg standing or talk of fingers (unless it was in there and I didn't see it, of course), but inaccurate anatomy is just bad. Of course, it's your style, so what I say shouldn't really matter. It just means that I don't like it at all.
1817909 where the hell did you get that picture
1820849 Google.
More please....! X
CLOP CLOP CLOP. *favorited*
I feel bad for liking this, bad as in the good bad way
I only wish for more Scootaloo and her erotic Rainbow Dash dreams
I better post a comment just in case the world ends...
I love this story. keep up the good work.
This is actually the first time I have ever seen some one use "Bimboisim" in a clopfic before, very ingenious.
Shit...looks like the world didn't end..Guess I owe crystal that full body message now.
Needs more.... Must. Have. MOAR!!!!!
would you please if it isnt too much trouble for you write more and include
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Apart from the blond Twilight, I like it a lot :)
More please!
Huzzah! New chapter!
Commence read.
Well their going to have to deal with that.
In the words of a mighty animator by the alias of Egoraptor "JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!"
I foresee a drunken orgy a few chapters ahead...
Well this looks promising!
Keep it up.
"Rarity and I are looking for her" is what I think you meant, lol. Really enjoying this story! Can't wait to see their reactions when they find out that that really was Twilight :D
1969159 Thanks for catching that bit of grammatical nonsense.
This is gonna be awesome.
Ok, a couple of problems that I have noticed. First, how come no pony can recognize Twilight. I mean shouldn't her voice be a slight give away? Also, if the CMC had their bodies altered and Aj And Rarity know that Twilight was hit by that stuff as well then why didn't they at least consider that blond Twilight was their Twilight? But that's minor compared to what I have to ask next. How is Twilight supposed to return to normal?! I mean, if she doesn't remember who she was then how can she choose to return to normal? That's kindof a big detail.
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First off. AJ and Rarity DON'T know that Twilight was effected by the flower. They know their sisters were, and that's it.
Second. I gave Twilight a slight lisp and a blonde mane. Probably should've gave more detail than that, and I apologize for that. Next time I'll just say she has one of those annoying "OMIGOD!" Teenage girl voices. Besides, another thing to note is that other ponies have cutie marks similar to Twilight's, so who's to say this isn't somepony that may be related to Twilight or maybe not related at all?
Third, the big one. That's the interesting bit. How can her friends tell her that she is somepony entirely different? How can they get her to go back to how she was? This, my friend, was intentional. But, we've only hit surface on what craziness I have in mind for the other holders of the Midnight Flower as the moon's phases continue.
as soon as I started the story I noticed a mistake you spelled doof instead of hoof
1977469 Like a BIDOOF! HAHAHA, no seriously, thanks for catching that.
1977533 your welcome
Ok much better actually, A LOT better than I thought it was going to be. My hat goes off to you.
I think I like new Twilight.
i liked the old twilight, but this twilight could be VERY entertaining. but please, no twilight on spike stuff. that's just messed up.
Commence read.
Trying to really picture Twilight as a blonde. Plus it seems like Spike is stuck with her.
Rarity is trying to protect Sweetie's innocence. Though I see Scootaloo and Dash having some awkward experience lined up with having to fly.
2100236 We all knew it was gonna happen sooner or later. I say just sit back and enjoy it, try to picture spike as like... Hulk Hogan or something