They Grow Up So Fast
written by Scarlett Haze
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Huzzah! New chapter!
Commence read.
Well their going to have to deal with that.
In the words of a mighty animator by the alias of Egoraptor "JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!"
I foresee a drunken orgy a few chapters ahead...
Well this looks promising!
Keep it up.
"Rarity and I are looking for her" is what I think you meant, lol. Really enjoying this story! Can't wait to see their reactions when they find out that that really was Twilight :D
1969159 Thanks for catching that bit of grammatical nonsense.
This is gonna be awesome.
Ok, a couple of problems that I have noticed. First, how come no pony can recognize Twilight. I mean shouldn't her voice be a slight give away? Also, if the CMC had their bodies altered and Aj And Rarity know that Twilight was hit by that stuff as well then why didn't they at least consider that blond Twilight was their Twilight? But that's minor compared to what I have to ask next. How is Twilight supposed to return to normal?! I mean, if she doesn't remember who she was then how can she choose to return to normal? That's kindof a big detail.
1975534
First off. AJ and Rarity DON'T know that Twilight was effected by the flower. They know their sisters were, and that's it.
Second. I gave Twilight a slight lisp and a blonde mane. Probably should've gave more detail than that, and I apologize for that. Next time I'll just say she has one of those annoying "OMIGOD!" Teenage girl voices. Besides, another thing to note is that other ponies have cutie marks similar to Twilight's, so who's to say this isn't somepony that may be related to Twilight or maybe not related at all?
Third, the big one. That's the interesting bit. How can her friends tell her that she is somepony entirely different? How can they get her to go back to how she was? This, my friend, was intentional. But, we've only hit surface on what craziness I have in mind for the other holders of the Midnight Flower as the moon's phases continue.
as soon as I started the story I noticed a mistake you spelled doof instead of hoof
1977469 Like a BIDOOF! HAHAHA, no seriously, thanks for catching that.
1977533 your welcome