*thanks to the editor and writer of this story* I love how you brought that knife into the story, with Twi and Shy meeting Angel, that was an upset, to say the least.
I see improvements in your use of intrigue every chapter I read. If you where to de-ponify this, and do a bit of fine tuning, you will definitely end up with a publishable work.
... 'kay.
I'll be honest, I was not finished with editing.
But whatever floats your boat!
okay, Celestia is jealous
... Thats gonna end badly
...
Tag Fluttershy and Twilight as main characters please, as they are more important than the other members of the six.
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Sorry, but I was running late in submitting it. I'll be sure to get the chapters to you earlier so you have more time. Sorry
1218827 Nah it's fine ;)
I really like the story, so please keep up your great work. (We really need more twishy out there)![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
*thanks to the editor and writer of this story*
I love how you brought that knife into the story, with Twi and Shy meeting Angel, that was an upset, to say the least.
I love you Twilight-Sparkle!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
I see improvements in your use of intrigue every chapter I read. If you where to de-ponify this, and do a bit of fine tuning, you will definitely end up with a publishable work.
Celestia is so jelly!!!!!!!!!!!!![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Okay.... Celestia? I'll say this only one time... Do something to tear them apart... and I'll tear YOU apart!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)