Epilogue - A Perfect Moment
You wake up and smile when you see Fluttershy wrapped in your hooves. You lean down and kiss her gently on the cheek. She stirs, and opens her eyes groggily. Then she looks up at you and smiles as well.
“Good morning...” She says.
“Good morning, love.” You kiss her again, this time on the mouth. You both lie there for what feels like years. But then she pulls away and slides off the bed. You decide to follow suit, but, having never been a morning person, you slide too far and end up in a heap on the floor. You untangle your legs and stand up, stretching every part of your body as you do so. Your rib still hurts, but not as much as when you first woke up a week ago in the hospital. Has it only been a week? You wonder. You walk out of Fluttershy’s bedroom, as she left after she got off the bed, and walk down the stairs. You keep an eye out, in case that hairball trips you up again. But when you reach the foot of the stairs, he is just lying on the couch, a piece of celery in his mouth. You hold back a giggle at the way it reminds you of Big Macintosh. You can hear Flutters humming sweetly in the kitchen, and walk in. She is cooking pancakes again today. You take your seat at the table and stuff as many pancakes down you throat as you can --Yesterday’s little run/fly in the rain left you starving-- and when you have both finished, you take Fluttershy by tho hoof and ask her to go into town with you, to tell her friends. She happily agrees, saying that she was about to suggest the same thing. You leave the cottage --but not before you both make sure all of the animals are properly fed-- and walk, hoof in hoof, in to town. Before long, you come to Twilight’s Library, as Fluttershy said she had a feeling that they would be there. You don’t question, as she knows her friends better than you. As you walk in, you can hear Applejack’s familiar voice asking;
“Now Twi’, ya dragged us away from our chores--” You hear somepony clear their throat “-- and out of our beds, and ya aren’t even gonna tell us why?”
“If they don’t show up soon, I’ll send Spike to get them.”
“Who?” You and Fluttershy walk up to them, seated at the table in the middle of the room, and say;
“Us.” There is a moment of silence, then Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Twilight and Rarity jump up, and you jump out of the way as Fluttershy disappears in the middle of a group hug. You walk slowly over to Rainbow Dash, and she looks at you with sadness in her eyes. Not caring for her reaction, you step forward and pull her into a tight hug. She steps back in surprise, and you whisper in her ear;
“I’m sorry, ‘Dash.” Then she hugs you back, and after a few seconds, you pull back, a second after the others. The five mares look at you questioningly, and, having planned for this, you say;
“If it wasn’t for ‘Dash, I never would have found Fluttershy. Just a thank you.” As they smile and start talking excitedly, Rainbow looks at you, a grateful look on her cyan face.
“Thank you.” She says.
“No problem. You’ll find somepony someday. I know it. I’m sorry that I took Flutters from you.”
“You didn’t take her from me. She was never mine.” She shakes her head, and looks at you with her normal determined smile, even if it does look a little forced.
“But, I have to see if you are good enough for Fluttershy.”
“How?”
“A race, of course!” The other five mares, who had been listening to the last part, laugh and then your vision is obscured as they realise they haven’t given you a hug yet.
They pull away, and Pinkie starts talking madly about parties, and you hear the term ‘biggest ever!’ and have to suppress a shudder at the clean up for that one, Twilight is talking with Rarity about... What? Wedding dresses? Oh dear... Applejack is talking to Pinkie Pie about catering for the party --at least, you hope it’s for the party--. Rainbow Dash is looking at you, a small smile on her face. Fluttershy walks over next to you, and you look over to Rainbow. She nods slightly, and you nudge Flutters, and you both sneak out the door, and walk out of town. You find a small hill to sit on, and knell down next to each other. You watch the sun rise, and relish a proper perfect moment, in the perfect place, with the perfect mare.
The end.
Hope you enjoyed this little tale,
Sincerely, Pyro1101
A/N
--How was that? My first Second-Person fic. The ending took me ages, but I like the simplicity of it. Let me know how it is.--
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A fitting end to an excellent fic. Keep up the good work!
1100686 I might take a breather for a few minutes before writing the next one... Thanks for the positive feedback.
Hey, it's pretty good! My gripe is in the epilogue. "Never was a morning person"?
1101213 What do you mean? Because I meant, as in, 'you' can think straight, but 'you' can't really get 'your' legs to work right.
This... was... just... fantastic, great story
1101445 Thanks
1100450 *shakes his head and chuckles litely* no matter what school system your in it looks like noone can escape that book in one form or another
. Oh and Woot!!!
DAMN GOOD. BRAVO.
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this is my first second person fanfic ive ever read... and i loved it
1101823 Glad you enjoyed it!
Godly work may i say! now "me" and shy have some pets to look after.
1102147 Nice to know you still like my stuff!
1102176 i do but i only put Comments ever now and then so that i do not look like an over used fanboy :3
1102209
Of course. But, I don't mind. Spam me with comments! I love them, especially if they provide feedback and advice.
1102258 ok
1101595 *Takes overdramatic bow* Thank you very much.
Nice to know you enjoyed it enough to give it a hearty 'Woot!' 
1101471 I know, I hate it. And yet, I wrote two pages, and didn't even read four pages of the book!
And to the rest of you, thank you for joining me on this little ride that is my first Second Person Fiction! I hope you enjoyed the ride, you can pick up your photos on the way out, and please join me on the next wild ride, YouDash!
You now get one (>^.^)>
1100692 I quite enjoyed the way you made the reader tie up ends with Dash (something I was hoping for) and I couldn't think of a better way to end a story. I can't believe it's your first second-person story! Have a moustache
1104110 <(^.^<) It was a great idea. Why wouldn't I use it?
1106052 Thanks. I'm actually really surprised at the amount of people who like it. I guess I'm just good at writing. Now, speaking of writing, it's time to continue on with YouDash. I got two paragraphs last night, time to expand.
1106261YAY!!!
But don't make me hurt you again. 
1106375 Don't worry. Dash won't cry. --Hopefully--
1106409 NONONO... she should cry in that one, more so because its a sequel to this one.
1106422 I actually wasn't intending to have it be a sequel... Clean slate and all... But... I like that idea! Thanks!
1106428 ( 0.0) What have I done...
1106449 What do you mean? It is a good idea. I could give 'Dash somepony to confide in: 'You'.
1106453 But this is a different Me/You we are talking about... Right?
Now I'm confused.
I'm talking about making YouDash a sequel to FlutterYou.
1106409 Just an idea, what if after doing all of the second person stories for the Mane 6. How about one final story where the Mane 6 (and their colt friends) all meet up or something? It'd be pretty awesome
1106787 That would be pretty interesting, but what would the plot be? The storyline?
I don't know what I would do with it.
Nicely Done my friend.
1107955 Thanks!
1106800 I just thought of it as being a short, and sweet story. Just to tie up all ends if ya need to... Never really thought about the plot though
1110080 I have an idea. No conflict, just a chapter where I revisit all of the 'you's. Just a chapter to explore the aftermath of each. Just short, and simple. Thanks for that!
1101471 agreed my school read it too twice i think, I just can't remember right now
1110080 Idea. One hell of an idea. Seeing as I have rearranged my 'Schedule', I am going to write a story after the 22 I have yet to do. It will have one chapter each dedicated to the aftermath of each and every story.
You are a genius. Thank you.
One question: if the next story will be a sequal 2nd person perspective with dash will I have to start thinking like a mare? because if so *puts on a fake posh english accent* you'll have to write the first few chapters in canterlot shopping distrct because I simpley have nothing to wear
1134050 hmm... Well, it is actually from the perspective of a colt. I was going to have Rainbow actually be Bi, but she doesn't know it until she meets the 'you' in YouDash.
1134055 oh thank goddess high heels are just murder to try and wear all day lol. *cheesy barry white music starts playing* awww ya I'll make her see the light
1134092 Nice. I just thought it gave way to some serious stuff.
1132960 Thank you, I will be reading all of your stories. Have an unlimited moustache
1134828
You too: 
X Sideways 8
this fic just blew my mind. keep writing. forever. as long as you live.
1140585 Don't worry, I'll try.
only a few things to change.
1. as usual grammar
2. when he found fluttershy you could've made it more dramatic by him running hugging her and whispering "im sorry..."
3. the part where he stole her from rd was just awfully sad.
otherwise amazing.
1142536 Well, he didn't steal her. 'Dash willingly gave up Fluttershy, because she saw how Flutters felt towards 'You' and knew that she would never had of had a chance anyway; They were just friends. And, what grammar mistakes? People tell me they're there, but they never tell me where. It's almost infuriating. And 'you' didn't run up and hug 'Shy because she was in obvious distress, and 'you' were afraid she would either hurt herself more, or run away. Hope this clears things up a bit.
ok!
1182135 Thank you. I think you and AlkapwnZ are the only ones who noticed it.
I just saw a chance, and had to put it in. 
Truelly i wanted to read this story two weeks ago and forgot but now i have finaly read the whole thing and i LOVED it. Ive always been a huge 2nd person fic fan so its nice to find someone new that i can depend on to always make good 2nd persons. Between your storys and kody910 i will always have something to read. Well like jay z said "im on to the next one" so now its time to read about rainbow dash. Also i think kodys new story has a new chapter out today so i have shit to read dont i? P.S. I mean shit in a good way. EX: your storys are the shit :)
1221230 Thanks. Nice to know you like it.
And I hope you enjoy YouDash! 
Overall 10/10 on the AWESOME scale.