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"Why, as a child, I thought sharks were my friends. [In ominous voice] I know better now." -Professor Membrane

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Reminds me of the pther psycho fic.

Keep going this has a lot of potential in the future

Will I need to know anything about Borderlands in order to understand this story?

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My answer? Kinda. I only plan to reference a lot of things from the game along with other things, and I would try to explain some stuff that would be added to the story, but they won't really matter much since the story will revolve around the young six and Krieg. So learning the lore of the game might be needed.

Here, this might help you develop Krieg (I'm going to assume that his name.)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dd0IaBX8cEU&t=878s
There is going to be a lot of screaming, but it is with it for the Quotes.

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Oh trust me, no pun intended, Krieg was the first level 72 I had in Borderlands 2, I was so interested on him that I listen and read his quotes just to understand him more. I just really like his character.

SHOOT ME IN THE FACE!

Interesting. Might want to fix the fact that you call "Yona", "Yuna" through this whole thing. There's an instance of "Yack" instead of "Yak" and I think there's a bit where Gallus "Sad" something instead of "said". Good read otherwise.

Celestia should be pacing back and "Forth" not "Fort".

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Thanks for telling me, I read it a few times and didn't notice the Yuna problem. Still finding that "sad" thing(never mind, found it.), thanks again for informing me.

I POWDERED MY COCKATIEL FOR THE RIBCAGE SLAUGHTER!

Ok, wow one I don't know why but I love how personal and private appleJack's into was. I laughed my seat muscles off. I also love how krieg seems to be more picky and kind to non deserving and how he seems to understand a bit more of emotion as he showed with mint. It doesn't change who he isaid but shows he did grow a bit without his sane side helping. I also just love how this whole story is honestly only thing I can think of that I would change is inconsequential so I'll just say this.

THIS PAGE HOLDER IS BEST AT WORDS FOR PICTURES!

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THAT COMMENT HAS TOO MANY SYLLABLES, APOLOGIZE! Also thanks for the comment friend, hope you enjoyed.

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I NEVER SAY SORRY. and no problem lol

i hope the other vault hunters will show up in this story

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because I really want to see zero come out of nowhere and save Krieg

All I can think. Ghost like entity that shares pain with the one he’s following....

Jack has become Shining Armor’s Stand! [SHORT CHANGE HERO]



I’ll shut up now....

Funny thing is, with how BL3 story is going this whole scenario fits......also whats Krieg and Ember’s ship name?

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You made me sit here and think about it for awhile, so here is what I thought of.
Kriember
Embrieg
EmberKrieg
BlazingHatred
FlameBeast
PainLord
That's kinda it.

"then another monster could come back! Probably an orange shirt wearing diamond dog that eats his own kind would show up wielding two strange weapons that could tear us apart, or an evil pony who wears a hood with glowing red eyes and has a magical shield, the possibilities are endless!!!"

that got to be salvador and zero.

when are they going to show up in the story?

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Not zero, Athena. She's the one who uses a shield I believe. Still same question

Undertale? TF2? You have a good taste in games.

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Me too honestly until my second read through

it would be funny if you added zero but he stayed the same.

thing are kicking in to high gear.

this is getting good and does this mean Dr. Ned will show up in the story?

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Nope, unless I make some kind of Halloween special, which is unlikely.

Wow, 11 chapters and foing straight for the big city mayhem? i would say its too early but thats the Borderlands Pacing for ya.

So the whole world is a Vault? im guessing it got something to do with Krieg’s fragmented mind, maybe channeling memories into the actual world? uh, guess i gotta wait and see.

Quick: Krieg and Maya ship name? i vote MadMagic.

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That's actually a good one, honestly, I can't think of anything....

Edit: what about MindFreak? It kinda suit both Krieg and Maya, the siren can crush people with their mind, the psycho is mental, and both are freaks!

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And they both aren't that well in their heads.

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It's a tie between BlazingHatred and PainLord for me.

shining is jacks newest bitch.

HOLY SHIT YES! HAHA! KRIEG IS HERE, BABY! WOOHOO!!!

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That's one way to see it...
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This is his story, you can't have slaughter a bunch of bandits without Krieg having a taste!

So when will krieg let the girls no that shining is now the patsy for an evil villain. And the psychos are probably just attacking the one that made them.

Get the ponies to know that the main reason the bandigts are attacking is because of the shit jack and his cronies did to pandora.

Aw fudge, I knew I was missing something, I forgot to put in Flash Sentry in the chapter! Now I'm just too embarrassed to fix it...

Edit: got over it...

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