It's a brand new day for Sunny Starscout and her friends, the magic of Equestria restored and the tribes united, it was new chapter in the lives of the mane 5. What better way to enjoy your hard work than enjoying it with your friends?
That is what would've happened, if it weren't for a strange statue appearing out of nowhere. Now pushed to play a tempting game with a creature of chaos, Sunny and friends will have to accept just to win a prize that could be a one in lifetime chance.
Post Mlp New Generation, spoilers of course.
Chapters (3)
I'll just leave this here . . .
Can't wait to see what the Chaos game will be.
Oh, they are in for a wild ride... :D
Honestly, I feel like they'll just reference Q vs. Sisko aka the reason my vote on "Kirk or Picard" is a write-in.
Lol nice reference to Aladdin and that's probably what Discord would say when the magic disappeared
Wow this turned out pretty interesting story so far so it looks like the aftermath of the movie sunny and hitch are showing the others the city which it was pretty nice to see them hanging out until Discord showed up I guess when the magic release he showed up I guess that's another theory once the magic disappeared he probably disappear to which that's kind of sad because he's pure magic if I remember correctly but it looks like he's up to his old tricks but not in a bad way like the first time we met him in season 2 but sometimes you don't know what he's up to well let's see if sunny and the others can handle his little game
Ohhh discord he's going to have fun with the New Kids on the Block that should be fun
It's getting interesting
Ooh, this looks like it could be a very promising story. Discord's mischievous, chaotic, but not evil personality shines in this chapter alone, and all of the others feel in character based on what we've seen so far. I'm looking forward to seeing what game Discord is wanting to play...and what question Sunny will plan to ask if they win!
Could this be because animals loving Hitch reminds him of Fluttershy...?
I just have to say, be careful about grammar while writing, especially proper capitalization. Other than that, I'm looking forward to whatever shenanigans might ensue in the coming chapters!
This was a nice start and i'm very interested in reading more. Good work.
Dear new friends, remember friendship is magic... always
I forgot to mention something the way he says it about hitch there are still a theory that he could be a descendant of Fluttershy that's why he's taken a liking of him
ooooooh
Party Canon I bet.
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*cannon
So the scavenger hunt is for items owned by the Mane 6...very interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing what challenges Discord is going to set up for these five next!
Okay and it looks like the game has begun it looks like hitch is tried to find me the other item by getting distracted by discords tricks but it looks like he finally found what he was looking for and it was sprouts by and fortunately whatever the item was the seagull grabbed it and dropped it in the ocean so now he has to find it in the ocean meanwhile Zipp trying to find the riddle but Discord was playing card games with the other ponies and it took her a while to know what's going on until she was to give a shot now I don't know anything about card games but somehow Zipp figure out his tricks and finally won and she got one of the items meanwhile hitch is still having a hard time finding it and sunny found him asking about the item but it looks like he asked one of the octopus to help him which they complied to do it and they found the item and it turns out it's one of the Mane six's items and it looks like Sunny figure out the next riddle I wonder how the other guy doing I guess we'll find out next time
What a good chapter, I can't wait for the next one, he asked me what the goal of Discord will be Sorry if my English is bad haha, I speak Spanish xd
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Funny enough, I'm better in English than my native language. Can't even count to ten right.
So it's all good
really enjoying reading that... waiting for the next chapter
Ohh he made a Pinkie Promise, he better keep it or Pinkie Pie WILL break space time to punish him!
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Well Kindness is Hitch's element and he is yellow....
I think Izzy is somehow related to Rarity and Pinkie.
Humm so AJ's Hat,a Cloak that belonged to Rarity. So objects that belong to the Mane 6, though only 4 items?
Zipp's solution was totally perfect, no solution as mundane as what you'd assume was the way to "make twelve from 3 cards" as the face values equaling 12!
Discord can be really tricky to write - yet you are actually doing okay.
Five hints for things to find, yet four items to aquire, that leaves one you cannot hold, yet desire
Let the games begin
As if the secondary Pinkie wasn't confirmed
I AM A DWARF AND I'M DIGGING A HOLE...
Mane 5 meet spike would be cool
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Boy it must be really dull and boring for these ponies in this generation
Oh my gosh tank I can't believe I didn't realize the tortoise is tank wait is it the same tank or a different one
Now they need to find Twilight and Fluttershy items
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call that a Dwarf song? This is a DWARF song!
Aww this was a very nice story I really like this and it really shows how these the new main five can handle Discord riddle game and surprisingly the whole town really likes him it must be really boring for them to not see something out of an ordinarily and all the efforts that the others did they lost the game and of course those items are represent the Mane six's price processions and his greatest treasure moments meeting Fluttershy and becoming his first friend it was really sweet to see this and apparently spike is still out there maybe they should meet spike on your next story but that's up to you but anyway this was a really good story and I really like how you did with Discord keep up the good work
The end got me
Was this intended to be a nod to a certain series about the main six being 'reborn' as re-incarnations of their elements and teaching ponies who reached for / needed them life lessons?
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I'm certain there's at least one story out there already exploring that prompt
This community is mind-boogling productive
I loved the story, I would like to know if there will be a sequel where they look for spike and the reunion with discord, he asked me what will happen hahaha,
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Tempted, perhaps in the future actually. Maybe a one shot.
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there is not one,
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/503333/1/the-dragon-of-the-ruins/chapter-the-only
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499998/ruins
there's 2 so far, XDD although the 2nd link is a follow-up,
Izzy actually feels like what you get of you blend Pinkie and Rarity to me.
Yo this was good read! Maybe someday they’ll meet Spike
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I know the author of those stories online
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ohhh, that's cool, :D
I rather enjoyed this story
The premise of this story confuses me. Hasn't Discord been reformed by now?
My God, this was a fantastical read.
I hope their will be a sequel to this where the mane 5 meets Spike and reunite with Discord
wow...just wow i forgot i read this and reading it again i was blown away. The way you write to discord and the tests you did to mane 5, I'm speechless When I compare them to the comics that are coming out, a good read for sure.
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I get excited just thinking about it and I would definitely read it, I'll be waiting until then, I hope you continue to improve and write as well as you do now