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I like this
Reminds me of the pther psycho fic.
Keep going this has a lot of potential in the future
Will I need to know anything about Borderlands in order to understand this story?
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My answer? Kinda. I only plan to reference a lot of things from the game along with other things, and I would try to explain some stuff that would be added to the story, but they won't really matter much since the story will revolve around the young six and Krieg. So learning the lore of the game might be needed.
I like this to
Here, this might help you develop Krieg (I'm going to assume that his name.)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dd0IaBX8cEU&t=878s
There is going to be a lot of screaming, but it is with it for the Quotes.
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Oh trust me, no pun intended, Krieg was the first level 72 I had in Borderlands 2, I was so interested on him that I listen and read his quotes just to understand him more. I just really like his character.
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Nice. *Thumbs up*
Interesting. Might want to fix the fact that you call "Yona", "Yuna" through this whole thing. There's an instance of "Yack" instead of "Yak" and I think there's a bit where Gallus "Sad" something instead of "said". Good read otherwise.
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Thanks for telling me, I read it a few times and didn't notice the Yuna problem. Still finding that "sad" thing(never mind, found it.), thanks again for informing me.
Dude, get your tenses together. The change between past and present tense is jarring to say the least. I'll keep reading and hope you fixed this at some point, but maybe try to edit this chapter later, give it some spit and polish. Other than that, the pacing is a bit weird but I've seen, and done, worst. Nice overall, though
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Well crap, I actually didn't know the way I write is grammatically wrong, I have been writing like that since grade school and no one have told me that its wrong. Welp, thanks for informing me, I'll try to fix the chapters but be warned, I might look over most of the errors and I mean most because I have some problems myself, and I'll make sure to fix it in future chapters, I will be keeping note of this.
Thanks again.
Edit: I forgot to mention my problem, the thing is, the things I write or make always looks fine to me, and sometimes I need help finding the errors, that'd about it.
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