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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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You did Gore and sex right!!! I haven't felt so turned on by Gore like this in forever!:raritystarry: And I actually came to this... way to go!!!!

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What? No reaction images and angry comments? I am undone!
Not entirely sure future chapters will live up to such high praise. :trollestia:

I feel dirty after writing this.
Don't worry; I'll get to the mane characters eventually! :applejackconfused:

Van

Best use of Pip as a character, right there.

Ok here is the question why do authors like writing gore and pain fics? :trixieshiftright: i just don't understand how it turns them on or anything? what makes it fun? why do it?:facehoof: its like you love hating every one of the characters save the one who is doing the killing, what for? it makes little sense to me so I am sincerely interested in figuring out why?

ps are you going to leave luna as the typical death loving kill feast cupcakes style madmare we typically see in these types of fics or do you have something else cooked up?

This is a bit of a short chapter with as much plot as fucked-up-ed-ness. I hope you don't mind! The next chapter will have good stuff :applejackunsure:

Van

A little short, yeah. Still great though, and better for watching the bolts get their comeuppance, even if it was more of a gift. :rainbowwild:

1038608 Almost? Guess I should have made it longer.

1032729 This is the lesson: Do not walk up to dark goddess and say "Hay! Do something scary!" It never ends well.

1032785 If you think I'm just going to have her curb stomp them for the entire thing, you might be surprised. :trollestia: WHY IS THERE NO LUNA FACE

Yay finally mane action! More mane action next update we hope :fluttercry:

Van

Laughed at the silly pony ref, nice.

Damn... what a mess for applejaack and me... way to go!!!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy: Though Nightmare Moon as a guy using he instead of shi through me off but nonetheless I came!!

I'm a monster. Also, this chapter is probably even less edited than previous ones. I'm getting in a hurry to keep up the pace. Stay tuned for next time? :pinkiesad2:

Van

Fucking twisted in the best way, as always. :rainbowlaugh:

You're making Twi out to be pretty badass, bet that'll be interesting.

Could have been better. Maybe rrevenge is so sweet?

1060950>>1063654 I feel like I'm basically writing this just for you two, ya know :derpytongue2: I will try to do better, but I'm gonna run out of ways to kill ponies eventually! :eeyup:

I got wyas of doing them but I'm not much into ponies dying.... by my hands. Don't worry... ur doing fine!

Okay, not gonna lie. I made myself sick by writing this one; the things I go through for you people!
Still, the good news is I probably won't even flinch writing the rest of it, if I manage to finish it. I have a plan, I promise! :eeyup:

It would be an interesting twist if Nightmare Moon makes Twilight her loyal toy by breaking her instead of killing her thinking death would be to good for her and could also help keep celestia in line by using her as not only a play thing but letting her live as long as Celestia obeys Nightmare

Van

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Your continuing to write this despite disgust is greatly appreciated :heart:

Yeah the foals were unnecessary and somewhat lacked something to the imagination. If the parents were draped or killed then that would have been better or the foals dying instantly or something.
I also have to agree with Nova. If at least twilight kore the others became slaves rather then killed it would be better and expand the series. For that you can end it with no hope of escape or revenge or have happy ending. All on you.

1090001>>1089914>>1089215>>1088467 Well you're all welcome to send me ideas for doing in ponies too. I mainly didn't want to spend a super long chapter killing each one individually when they weren't even mane characters :p

Van

Well, personally, I don't think the mane 6 distinction or lack of it impacts how interesting a given chapter of this is. Like the Pip/Zecora chapter, that was glorious. This last one with the Cakes was another example, had some really nice moments.

Not to say I'm not waiting with bated breath for chapters with MC focus, more that I'm waiting with bated breath for more chapters period! :yay:

I'll echo the Twi thing though, it'd be excellent if NMM forcibly took her on as a mock student to toy with Celestia, or the like. With how tough she seemed to be written in the Flutter chapter I'm sure it would be satisfying. (Not in that way!...well maybe in that way.)
:twilightblush:

1091853 i have an idea off the bat like vans idea except have nmm break Twilight then take her as both a student and a sex slave. meh as long as twi survives i'm ok with this. maybe after a few chapters have twi join in with nmm on the killing, raping and torturing. final challenge turn celestia to nmm's cause or what ever you choose to do with it.:rainbowwild:

cheers:twilightsmile:

I bet you thought this story was below plot twists!
You should have known better; consequently plot twisting sounds like an interesting way to die, maybe I should work it in just so I can use that pun.

Hmmm... sorry your starting to losing me. You need to create something new rather than use the same thing over and over again. Capture sex kill..... in that order. Jazz it up!!!. Like have one of her lieutenants killed or Nightmares captured and end. Else u will only be doing this for yourself.

Van

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One of her lieutenants killed? You mean like what happened to Spring Breeze in this very chapter?

Which was awesome by the way, Headless. I think you went above and beyond with what you did to Derpy here, makes Derpy's Finest Hour look merciful. Other than the whole magically preserved conciousness bit in DFH, that is. Good show.

No matter how Draco approaches future chapters, you definitely have my continued readership.

I'm not going to discredit this series like VAN proclaims... I'm just saying it wouldn't be wise to repeat the same process over. And I may have missed that step.:pinkiehappy:

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To be fair, Draco is right in that Spring Breeze is the obvious throw-away, but also rest assured that I have no intention of making this a curb-stomp battle in one side's favor. Of course, this story is written the opposite of most in that I'm writing things from the villain's perspective, so you see what the villain is doing and don't know what the heroes are planning until their plan is put into action.

At first I was planning on just having it be a curb-stomp everypony dies fic, but I realized that this would be very boring to write and read, so I decided to go with something a bit more unpredictable that deranged bronies can still clop to :rainbowwild: And it is unpredictable as even I have not yet decided who should emerge victorious, which is why I always welcome ideas!

And that is what would make this story great. If you improve then I know you'll get more viewers.:pinkiehappy:

1107695 Thanks... I am totally not sure what that refers to though :derpytongue2:

More unproofread crap for the masses (or at least for the few people reading this) :trollestia:

Dam... last of the apples.... will the killings evuh end?!? ................ guess not. Great work.

Van

Simply awesome, again. Hottest chapter yet, too, in this man's opinion.

1120177 Not the last, real Applebloom is still alive at this point. :applecry::unsuresweetie::scootangel:

True but.... I cant help feel... like I don't know.... something bad is going to happen to her.:pinkiecrazy:

"Corona Blaze" is actually another character from that muck I like to go to, the one where I borrowed "the_Shadowbolts" character from. For reference, this is the character image they use.

Since when did scat come involved?:derpyderp2: sorry that's as far as I go before I'm done.

just please keep twilight alive i really hate it when she gets killed

1133458 So slinging pony intestines around is just fine, but not okay with the contents of said gut? :trollestia: Mainly I wanted everything I could think of to be involved and it is extra special humiliating for poor Celestia, but unless I think of a totally different way of doing it I can't imagine pulling it out again.

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Yeah it is a bit unortidox but... for me... my sanity is a bit fucked up. Dont worry I still managed to get off on this chapter and all. Hell, I get turned on by alot of gross things these days but im trying to surpress that. Good job though.

well another way to keep twilight alive would be to have corona blaze and nightmare moon double team her to break her and twist her mind by having corona blaze physically rape her well nightmare moon mind rapes her since twilight trusts celestia so much having corona rape her body would basically shatter her world leaving her mind really vulnerable to nightmare moon raping and twisting her mind similar to celestia that way she could have twilight help kill the rest of the elements that would hurt them more since twilight basically brought them together and nightmare moon would have what is possible her strongest foe not counting celestia under her control and completely loyal also could capture twilight by having corona draw her out by pretending to still be celestia
I created this idea for you to possible use just because i'd rather twilight a villian than dead since she and luna/nightmare moon are my favorite characters hence why i read twiluna and moonlight fics whenever i can find them doesn't matter if there shipped as long as they are both main characters or one of them and don't die

1149799 Well at the very least there is sure to be sex between Twilight and Luna at some point, whether consensual or not :p

Nooooot sure how this came out, but at least you got another mane6 death. I have things more planned now, so there will be at least one giant twist hopefully. Next time: :raritydespair:

Van

Aww, Shining being all badass.

Who needs a OC with Twilight is already so overpowered? :twilightangry2:
Next chapter we'll take a break from plot-heavy murder for some plot-light murder :unsuresweetie::scootangel::applecry:

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