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Wolokai
"The road ahead is not easy, but neither is it impossible to travel. Run, Twilight Sparkle. Run."- Wolokai KuRR
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If this seems rushed I'm sorry, I hope I didn't go to fast
wow Woloki i love your work i am just ayin
wow Woloki i love your work i am just sayin sorry for reposten i just wanted to fix my spelling
you went fine
The first chapter went fine, I listened to the song and I'm eager to read what you do with it :D
Second chapter was good, didn't seem rushed to me really. Not much plot wise, but hey it's the first real chapter of the story. I don't know what else to say other than can't wait for the next chapter :D
Have a good one.
Tracking
*bro hoof*
I was just thinking about doing something like this! Oh well, you're doing fine.
You guys sure this is ok? Something feels off as I right this, it doesn't seem...up to PAR, I don't know
Wow man, this is great, you've got a reader
Great song you chose to work with really, I'm listening to it since I"ve started reading the first chapter, and it's still on
I'm really expecting something great to come out of this, and I kind of want to see Hydro snap
I couldn't find any grammar or spelling errors but I have one complaint
"Her pink coat was doing little to keep her warm..." I think you meant white?
I...
*Bows before the concentrated win*
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No no no, 5th Gen Celestia is white, but we're dealing with the time BEFORE Nightmare Moon, like over 1,000 years ago, so we're going to be using Pre-FIM Celestia! THE PINK ONE!!!
64192 oh... sorry I hadn't read the description, I kind of forget that sometimes, especially when the cover/title get my atention instead
also, I thought this was in the future, like, WAY AHEAD of the series, after some unknown disaster that screwed everything up and everypony went crazy, but as it seems it is more like before the huge disaster
can't wait to find out how Hydro does it (if he is the one to do it)
poor hydro i'd be pissed too iand leave as well because....thats fucking wrong if the mare did not want hydro then why did she marry him for god's sakes!
Hydro's actions in this fic are actually a prelude to something. I can't spoil the surprise but I can guarantee you that the plot's about to SERIOUSLY thicken! Stay with us, it's about to get pretty interesting
Wait! Did he kill Alexi and his marefriend with that ball of light? Damn! But, as your avatar says: "Deal with it"
Hooooo
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Is that...good or bad?
Hydro just told her down and i cant blame him i would be pissed too if i had a wife for four years and she starts to have sex with my best friend i would be mad and 2% happy for them because their happy the other 98% wants me to just bright slap em both and be done with it (bright slap is a refrence to gundam)
I don't think I'm doing a very good job with this one to be honest...
Okie-Dokie...throwing this on Hiatus. I'll republish everything once I give it a good cleaning...
Please pay no attention to the rating, I'm afraid it's someone exploiting the system...I hope you wouldn't judge a story on its rating anyway so, read on!
man, this story deserves a higher rating than what it has. i can't wait to read more.
Brilliantly disturbing, fucked up and pinkimenad.
CUPCAKES IS LESS SCREWED UP! (As in mentally screwed up, so sick and twisted)
this post made no sense, did it?
Well, now we're back to updating this one. I had to figure out a way to get Hydro to go over the edge and I did it!!!
MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
D.R.A.M.A.
Buck YEAH! This is probably my second favorite story i have ever read. I am just yelling, "HELL YEAH," at the top of my lungs. this is sweeeeeetttt.
oh man.... i feel so bad for getting mad at angle :( your a crule person wolokai
76526 I feel fine about it, mainly because i don't trust her, i'm still on the boat that it is Alexi's child, but maybe that is because i trust no one.
Once more, BUCK YEAH. And damn, i can completely see where Hydro is coming from. Boundaries!? pfa! Cannot wait to see more.
And suddenly everything died...
Amazing, do want more.
HOLY HOURSE SHIT!!!! Shit just got more realier than realality. Bring on the HYDROGEN BOMB!!!!
FUCK YOU, AND FUCK EQUESTRIA
BUCK YEAH
lj3online *Brohoof*
Well my sanity has gone to hell....
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Then you're going to LOVE this shit.
FUCKIN PENIS! WHY WON'T YOU STAY DOWN! ARGGGGGHHHHHH! The one that came up with pony love at all made something terrible and good at the same time!
You have not seen insanity until you see me.....tho i probly would not destroy the world with it, madness is a evil power
I agree with GrimReaper. I've said it before and i'll say it again, Buck YEAH.
Dude, For some reason I feel that me and Hydro aren't that much different. I hope you continue. And for the love of luna, BRING ON THE HYDROGEN BOMB.
Amazing, plain and simple.
A maniac's plan, perfect and rage driven.
This had to be the best chapter thus far :D (and not just because of the hot sex scene at the end ;D).
I've never been scared when reading a fic, but damn Hydro down right scared me during that party. I felt a chill run down my spine every time he said something, his emotions are just conveyed so wonderfully :D
"To him, nothing said 'Fuck You' better then a good plowing to his teacher's younger sister before he savagely murdered everypony in the world"
I think that really summed everything really XD the anger that goes with that statement is powerful and wow...just awesome. Best line in the chapter/story so far :D. I'm loving this story so much. Is it weird that I really like a story that's basically about a pony's decent into madness and how he destroyed all of Equestria and (from this chapter as well as given the time this takes place) the birth of Nightmare Moon?
Have a good one. Really looking forward to the next chapter :D
P.S. Poor Angel T_T I know she was a back-stabbing bitch, but still. She was with child and they both suffered for the evil in this world T_T
Jesus Christ thats some dark shit happening
is this the last chapter? it better not.....
i... i... lj3online.exe has stopped responding.
Okay! i had to reboot from the sheer awesome that was flung at me. So uhh. i'm gonna go and recuperate from the badassery i have just witnessed.
Wow. That was really something. I like the ending. and the beginning. and the middle. but in all seriousness, good bloody job. it really ties everything together, and the little cupcakes reference was grim but... shall i say? interesting? once more good job. 5/5
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Those who've been with me since Pinkamena will um, how shall we say...
"See what I did there"
OH SHI- I see what you did there :D
Now I feel like reading the Pinkamena stories all over again just to make the full loop XD
This was an awesome story that really expanded on the song that The Living Tombstone and Mic did. It was awesome :D
The last chapter...when he pushed the button, that really sent chills down my spine. I listened to the song over and over while reading the last chapter and man, that really made it that much more intense when the song synched with the story. Really cool how you tied in the birth if Nightmare Moon as well as you made this an unofficial prequel to the Pinkamena series :D. Makes me glad that I found the Pinkamena series and read through it when I did.
Looking forward to the continuation of the Leap of Faith series! Have a good one. :D
You just tied the whole MLP universe together with a single paragraph and made sense of every plot hole.
Amazing.
That was awesome!
And now I want to study nuclear physics...
I'm confused, did Hydro regret his actions when he met Luna, or did he play innocent?
Had he already lost his memory?
Anyway, one of the greatest fanfics I've ever read.
holy shit, i jsut got that his name is hydrogen
3 chapters and i just now get it
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Um... well, I think that Hydro is waaaaay too "feel sorry for me, my life sucks, so I'll just do whatever the hell I want". He's really whiny and starting to get kind of hard to relate to. I understand that he can/should be angry, and some degree of explosion is understandable and even expected, but I think you're overdoing it.