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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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I don't think that it is complete. How regularly you will update it? Also i'll recommend to add a custom tags to every chapter like you did with CRV.

6622465 Yeah it's not complete, I'm an editor. I'm guessing that we'll see weekly updates.

I always laugh at the triggers, it goes from sounding like a nice clop to all death and destruction, and oddly enough i like it.

"Yer hot little cock milker is lubin' itself up, lookin' forward to gettin' stretched out with some fat dick."

Oh my celestia Applejack do you french kiss your dead mother with that mouth.:ajbemused:

It occurred to Applejack that she was eating out a nine year old's cunt, and wondered if this made her as much of a pedophile as Rarity was. Maybe not yet, but she was definitely starting to understand how somepony like Rarity could develop a fetish for foal plot. It was amusing to Applejack that Rarity and her had such a thing in common now, both having eaten out their little sister.
:duck:
I'm sorry. Did I miss something involving rarity and sweetiebell

6780096 Well it wasn't explicitly said before then, but I tend to insinuate a lot of things in this just cause.
6780074 I don't know. She might just do that later.

maybe she didn’t even half to tie her down at all. Feeling her

It should be have, not half

"Ah ain’t ever seen a pony in this much pain, fuck this is hot!”

That's EXACTLY what i would say at this moment.

:raritydespair:"why would you say that?":raritydespair:

BECAUSE I CAN.

Rarity was barely recognizable as a pony by that point, but boy did she smell delicious.

I've had cooked rarity before, and let me tell you she does smell delicious

:raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:

I have no words except "What the actual FUCK did I just read with my own pair of eyes?!" :raritycry: :raritydespair: :pinkiesick:

I really hope you write a spin off short story about Pinkie and those Filly Scouts <3

“I don’t remember asking your permission, meat-cunt,”

Well someone has been following Whitekitten! :twilightsmile:

A fun read, if a bit quirky. An absolute pleasure to see you're still writing! And at least no futa this time, as you put it, serves me - though as you noted yourself, it's really more fun with a cock. Gives you more choices. This may sound rather avant garde but in order to solve this dilemma, have you ever considered employing a, you know, male protagonist after Spike? :P

Speaking of which, if my memory does not fail me you were asking around for new subjects and ideas a while ago, were you not? I have some inspiried by your work floating around in my head, I wonder if I might propose those as prompts or as commissions.

6887510 Wasn't thinking of that specifically at the time, but yeah that probably is where I heard it.
6888486 And yes I have been trying to avoid futa with this story, and it's gone better than it could have I guess.
If you want you can mail me ideas, though I'm seriously busy lately so not sure when or if I'll get around to new things.

no no no no no. Not sweet sweet Tavi! Please no! Anyone but Tavi!

Comment posted by Thunder Quill deleted Jan 31st, 2016

Lovely chapter! More cocks and cum in the mix always spices it up. As I always say, males are great in the active role! :pinkiehappy:

Why are you writing such a sterotypical, meaningless ine or mindless nonsense and writing?

seriously dude, it was old within the first few sentences. Its just.... Dumb. not even shocking, just dumb.

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Why are you writing such a sterotypical stereotypical, meaningless ine or, mindless nonsense , and nonsensical and writing story?
s Seriously, dude, it was old within the first few sentences. Its It's just.... Ddumb. It's not even shocking,; it's just dumb.


Thank you for your well thought and intelligent response. I will take your advice to heart and consider it in my future writing.

Pinkie kinda made sense as another bloodthirsty killer, but Lotus seems a bit out of left field; she's got all the sex she wants and apparently loves incest quite a lot. You'd think she wouldn't think of snuff as being something so much better than that that she'd want to become a full-time murderer.

Hmm.. Good Story. Cannot wait to see what happens next!:pinkiehappy:

6908281 You really think i am going to bother spellchecking for a story of this low bar?

6909560 Great work! I see that you were very careful to avoid errors in your new comment.

6908545 That's a good point. I could have had her overdose on something else beforehoof, like maybe something she'd never tried before, and used that to explain her suddenly brutal actions.

Heh, this chapter just goes to show Discord makes for a great protagonist! His episode in Twilight Takes Charge was already delightful, but with this in his back he's clearly proven himself main hero material.

6915485 All those are true! Though I think the lesson I was going for was "You don't need a cock to go on a rape spree." Girl power!
But I guess what you said is close enough.

I'm surprised that you haven't made a story about Luna's time on the moon.

The only chapter where someone doesn't walk in after.

Roasted Marshmallows?
Knots?
Piles of corpses covered in cum?
What is applejack, a boyscout?

Were you inspired by "Spikey Wikey"? That "You've never had consensual sex" line is in both stories, both addressed to Flutters. Spike also gouged out Fluttershy's eyes. I wonder.

7085593 Yes, I am often inspired by other stories that I wrote :moustache:

Disregard my previous comment. Both stories are by you.

Are you my dad? He told me once "If I ever have a terminal illness, I'm krazy gluing my hands to my face and hanging myself with piano wire off a skyscraper so it looks like I tore my own head off."

Favorite cards against humanity pairing

"Necrophilia and Dead Parents, two great tastes that taste great together!"

Tavi and Vinyl next? AJ did want to kill more happy couples.

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Holy Sigmund Freud, heh?

I knew I shouldn't have read a part that say "rape" and "murder" ...
Properly disgusting. Not to mention the necrophilia part. :-(

Why is everypony walking into this barn 1 by 1 as soon as AJ's finished with her last victim?

7312514 I'd say it was pretty improperly disgusting.

7365901 Well this question doesn't really deserve an answer because of this, which any fiction of decent length ends up using to some extent, but people tend to only selectively notice. However...
At the point of the story you are in, well... we already know that Twilight shows up shortly after Rainbow Dash starts ripping things apart due to the episode itself, and it's not a stretch that Big Mac would show up just as it's getting long enough for Applejack to be late from returning, and then when he didn't return Apple Bloom would get curious and check as well.
Of course, after that, Applejack sat around and waited for a while before Rarity showed up, and Rarity had told her she'd be there at that time, so doesn't apply there. Pinkie Pie showed up before Applejack was done with Rarity, and had a legit reason to show up because in the episode she had a picnic party, which this AJ hasn't shown up to, so not there either. Since Rarity had been going to AJ's with the intention of going to the party right after, that's logical timing.
Fluttershy shows up just in time again, even if she does have a reason, but then AJ decides it's fate so we're into this this.
Then after that, nothing is on time. AJ specifically goes places to get victims. The only close one is when Octavia found her, but I didn't specify how long AJ had been laying there in afterglow and she was going to get found by someone eventually if she lay there.
So if we don't count the things that the show specifically laid out for us, that's three or maybe four victims out of over two dozen that she killed before the end, so not really that many coincidences.

"griped"
*gripped
"throws"
*throes

Also, Pinkie Pie always manages to be an exception to everything I like about horse porn. I finally thought I'd found something with Pinkie that I liked, but no. I think I've found my limit for how fucked up something has to be to kill my boner.

"puss"

(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
Fuck it, I'm too grammar Nazi for this shit.

(You know you're a grammar Nazi when the only problem you have with a story about children's TV characters being brutally raped, tortured, murdered and pissed on is a few homophone errors).

Hmm... something was missing...
Applejack looked around, but no one had suddenly found them.

HAH!

She draped Twilight over Big Mac, then positioned Rainbow’s front half so that her face was pressed into Twilight’s stiff purple pussy.

Wow, Applejack's playing with her pony toys as if...
OMC She's a brony!

It finally makes sense. My headcanon of your stories so far has Spike as 'corrupted' partly {in addition to what you state explicitly} by his dragon nature; Luna by the forces, entities, relationship difficulties &c that had already led to Nightmare Moon once; Celestia & Twilight by the massive power of magic, politics, &c. Now with this realization Lesson Applejack fits!
=^o^=

Not to mention screwing & eating them out, some more literally; she really is one of us! I've never been more proud of AJ! =TuT=

I swear, your stories are like a combination sex show & train wreck, with the engineer not only getting off on the mayhem & fear but getting out alive, it's that hard to look away! {feel free to quote that in your advertising when one gets turned into a movie, heh!}

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