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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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Orkus #1 · Sep 19th, 2015 · · 2 ·

This story is such a fucking hoot, I've decided to never read it again! :rainbowlaugh:
Better luck next time, monkey!

Story actually seemed readable til the warning mentioned futa.

This is fucked up shit! And I don't mean the good kind of fucked up shit either.

6438826 Yes I went too far. Murder and necrophilia and rape are one thing, but futa? That's just crossing the line. :rainbowderp:

6438856

I'm probably not going to read this because of some of these tags and wont rate, but this comment just made my day.

I'll be honest, even if most people don't find the content of your fics to be particularly... palatable, I'm glad they exist. There are a lot of clopfic writers now, many really good ones too.
Writers like you show how much diversity exists in this community, even if your work seems really messed up it still goes to show the wide berth of content that is on this site and that there's something for almost everyone.
On the other hand though, this is some seriously fucked up shit. Seriously, who puts naughty language in a fic about innocent ponies raping and killing each other in a gruesome blood sport?
(Also if you're doing more "bad-ending" fics I would humbly suggest either the tatzlwurm one or the black vines one)

I think the ending was a bit too silly, with everypony having their own corpses to screw. Really makes Fluttershy being so shocked seem out of place.

Well judging from the comments this could either be a gem or a giant turd. Is it either one of those two things gang?

Hooray! Another gorey story for us to love and adore, many more to come as well :heart:

6439577 It's a gem, but it's an evil gem. A dark, sexual, evil gem. :pinkiecrazy:

6439090 Those are a bit more obvious choices, but I might end up doing one anyway because tentacles.:derpytongue2:

6439234 Fluttershy was the prude :rainbowkiss:

6440461 That doesn't make me confidence. Also dat like to dislike ratio bruh.

6441410 People only thumbs down this story because of the Fluttershy abuse.

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6441882
I don't write these stories to be upvoted or popular. I'm catering to a fairly small group of people that doesn't get written for very often. When many people come across a story like this, they just read the description and downvote it for what the content warning says is in it, and that's fine because I didn't write it for them :derpytongue2:

6438856 Like someone else said: I have to agree this is quite a legit retort xP
I'd personally be more concerned over the grossly random OOC implied in this, rather than the fact Dash is just randomly R63'd to be "allowed" to rape someone as per standard generic fandom rules :P

But like I brought up in a journal thingy: It's still bad form to just downvote something based on the content, rather than the quality of said content.
Actually first thought this had to do with Chrys, then Sombra, then finally read what part of the empire it was about x3
But yeah, even if it would be neat to for once at least see this niche done in any other way than either "include a male" or "inexplicably make one a male". But as of now, there's only a large chunk of content of this type around, art and story wise :P

I can however stand behind you fully on the "not writing to be popular part" xD
Done several works just based around pointing out blatant hypocrisy and double moral. And had people bitch and gloat about how their generic, shameless "cash grab" stories+pics are more popular than mine. Like, du'h. It's like trying to boast how a CoD clone or the next Fifa manages to outsell something like Bastion or Portal xP

Reading that ending I really want a long series where Rarity kills (and most likely rapes) all of her friends and terns them into clothes clothes. Thoughts..?

6443908 Rarity makes everyone into clothes in a popular fanfiction "Rarity's New Patterns", so I would feel like I was ripping them off. Though sadly she doesn't rape them in that version.

6444443 I see, might have to check that out

6441882 I can see some Fluttershy fans being piss about that.
6442183 Well.....that doesn't excuse you from writing a bad to mediocre story. I ain't an asshole that will just downvote because of x ,y, and z. I mean if I was a game development and cater my game towards speedrunners. would I tell someone who likes to play games that are polished," Well I'm making games not to be part but please a niche group of people that like abusing glitches to get really fast times."

6444443 LOng ago i have send you a idea for a Bad Ending to an episode. WIll just drop it here :derpytongue2:

So ther was that one scene in FiM when Rainbow Dash was helping Applejack demolish her old barn so its alternative for it. So Rainbow is going to rainboom the barn but hit a bird while going down she is blinded and crash in the barn. She got impaled in the hart by a piece of wood and dies. Applejack storm to the barn to look if she is allright and found her dead body, then she realise how much she lowed Rainbow as more then just a friend and in her grief and lose chance to have ever even kissed her she found herself touch Raibow Dash dead body/ass and gots so horny she cant stop herself form doing more naughty stuff to her body. Then after a good loooong timeof fun she hear something and found out that Twilight have seen her with Dash body and is shocked (Twi not Applejack) and Applejack have to kill her (hammer time!) she then make sure no one els can see her and she go then for Twilight (unconscious- FINISH HER! or dead swwwweat tight pussy!) body. Then its up to you, The end or go wild! Just i would love to get your style with less mutilation of corpses (its good and i loved it in Luna and spike stories but would like to see a more loving less blood hungry story). A less futa more use of toys would be also great (like use a shovel handle to let Aj use it as 2-way fucktoy for RD)! (and as we got to have a horny MARE without magic for dicks spells male corpse fucking is possible (hey Big Mack!).

6446396 I think that's very creative. :pinkiesmile:

Do it headless_rainbow, do it! :yay:

6444664 There's a SFM version on youtube too if you search there.

6445965 That's what I said, people were voting based on content and not quality. I've gotten a good number of comments saying the writing was good even though they hated the content. It's rare anyone doesn't like it for the quality of writing, I can't really remember any other times someone did.

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It is a good idea, I just have a lot of good ideas available and little time to write. I'd say maybe Rainbow doesn't die immediately so she can still be conscious when AJ starts with her. I could keep it female-female with AJ/Rainbow/Twilight for once and then do female on male if Big Mac finds her (because incestuous rape-murder is hot). Maybe AJ ties Mac down, and since she knows he has a thing for Twilight, forces his cock into Twilight's corpse before riding him herself and killing him. Could also try and think of a way to involve Applebloom too.

6448796 That sound sweet!

So i was thinking about creative way of including AB so what about this: AB for whatever reason go to the barn and spots a bronze stain-dried blood- on one of the big bags of salt that Apple family use to make salt licks for cows etc. and look inside and find dried up bodies of Big Mac :eeyup: and friends :rainbowkiss: :twilightoops: (she could -while digging- discover his dried dick sticking out of it first xD ) and AJ sees that and proceed to do her thing with poor little AB :applecry: (she could fuck her with her brother dried hard member xP ).

I got inspiration for this from my work (im skinning cows and horses and we use looooots of salt to preserve the leather) :derpytongue2:

6453210 That's an interesting idea, though I was thinking more of doing a one-after-another like it happened in one day, by the end actually going out of her way to let her friends catch her doing horrible things with the corpses so she'd have an excuse to kill all of them.

You're back!

6439577 People don't like the fetishes, they're hating on those and on those exclusively. Guy's a solid writer, and as he himself put it catering to a very specific audience of people who have that fetish. Once it gets in the area of things that would be unethical if they would be real, tons of people seem to forget both their manners and not to hate on other guy's fetishes. Ah well. My only fear is that all that stupid hate makes him quit some day.

6456692 You take the good with the bad. I have had to deal with people calling my character overpowered and mary sue boxers when they haven't box a day in their life and all their knowledge is Hajme No ippo and Fight Night.

6457199 A boxer? You should rape them WITH YOUR FIST. eeeer hoof.

Well, in my case it's the other way around. The content doesn't appeal to me (but it doesn't stop me from reading it either). But the writing isn't the best (nor is it the worst). If I had to pinpoint it, I'd have to say that the over-the-top descriptions the likes of "she peered psychotically into Fluttershy's eyes" tend to make it more unrealistic than it already is (y'know, the chatacters being OoC due to murder/rape, which is not a bad thing per se). Rainbow's verbal abuse also gets tiresome real quick. I mean, yeah, you excused that by stating that Dash's snuff-raping (or is it rape-snuffing?) of Flutters is her fetish... but still, I feel like it wouldn't work if this were to happen... I think Flutters would be more terrified if Rainbow were to do it in a very nonchalant matter, just savoring the moment and Flutters' complete terror due to her inability to grasp why RD's doing it. Y'know, mixing the gross-out with terror. All I'm saying it try to be more subtle with the psychological suffering and tormenting of your characters.

Though, these are only my opinions and you should take them with a ten-tonne container of salt.

However, overall the quality of this fic is pretty good. A solid 8/10. Keep at it! :rainbowdetermined2:

I am both high disturbed and intrigued.

Ooh. New material. Marked for later. :twilightsmile:

D48

Well, that was fun, although there is one little point I want to bring up because it has bugged me in a few of your fics. It seems like every time you decapitate a character, you mutilate their head first which kills half the point of the decapitation. After all, you cannot really display the head effectively if it is messed up, and it gets even worse if you want it stuffed and mounted for permanent display.

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This story made me literally :raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry:cry

I loved this story! I love all the details you made about Shy's death, and how her friends didn't mind Rainbow Dash killing her at all!
Man... I'm one sick motherfucker...

Rainbow continued to ram her cock into Fluttershy's well-used cunt, her act of rape having now become an act of necrophilia.

It's not necrophilia if they were alive when you started :pinkiecrazy:

7473497 Didn't think about it that way! But it makes sense. :rainbowdetermined2::fluttercry:

Fluttershy dropped the staff she had been holding and blushed at the feel of Rainbow's mane against her soft slit. She let out a confused "Huh?" as she was pushed forward.

straight to the point...I like it!!:rainbowlaugh:

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I can't imagine one pony pushing another like that if they didn't want to get a rub in.

Derpy... Of course. Best Pony

Not really a fan of this. Kinda read/skimmed out of curiosity, I guess. I know it's just snuff porn, but I can't see them doing this. Just not for me, I guess.

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