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Okay, not gonna lie. I made myself sick by writing this one; the things I go through for you people!
Still, the good news is I probably won't even flinch writing the rest of it, if I manage to finish it. I have a plan, I promise!
so all the elements are goanna die?
It would be an interesting twist if Nightmare Moon makes Twilight her loyal toy by breaking her instead of killing her thinking death would be to good for her and could also help keep celestia in line by using her as not only a play thing but letting her live as long as Celestia obeys Nightmare
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Your continuing to write this despite disgust is greatly appreciated
Yeah the foals were unnecessary and somewhat lacked something to the imagination. If the parents were draped or killed then that would have been better or the foals dying instantly or something.
I also have to agree with Nova. If at least twilight kore the others became slaves rather then killed it would be better and expand the series. For that you can end it with no hope of escape or revenge or have happy ending. All on you.
1090001>>1089914>>1089215>>1088467 Well you're all welcome to send me ideas for doing in ponies too. I mainly didn't want to spend a super long chapter killing each one individually when they weren't even mane characters :p
Well, personally, I don't think the mane 6 distinction or lack of it impacts how interesting a given chapter of this is. Like the Pip/Zecora chapter, that was glorious. This last one with the Cakes was another example, had some really nice moments.
Not to say I'm not waiting with bated breath for chapters with MC focus, more that I'm waiting with bated breath for more chapters period!
I'll echo the Twi thing though, it'd be excellent if NMM forcibly took her on as a mock student to toy with Celestia, or the like. With how tough she seemed to be written in the Flutter chapter I'm sure it would be satisfying. (Not in that way!...well maybe in that way.)
1091853 i have an idea off the bat like vans idea except have nmm break Twilight then take her as both a student and a sex slave. meh as long as twi survives i'm ok with this. maybe after a few chapters have twi join in with nmm on the killing, raping and torturing. final challenge turn celestia to nmm's cause or what ever you choose to do with it.
cheers
I'm loving this, and also how the people in the comments seem like freaks, like me, so it's quite fun.