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I bet you thought this story was below plot twists!
You should have known better; consequently plot twisting sounds like an interesting way to die, maybe I should work it in just so I can use that pun.
Hmmm... sorry your starting to losing me. You need to create something new rather than use the same thing over and over again. Capture sex kill..... in that order. Jazz it up!!!. Like have one of her lieutenants killed or Nightmares captured and end. Else u will only be doing this for yourself.
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One of her lieutenants killed? You mean like what happened to Spring Breeze in this very chapter?
Which was awesome by the way, Headless. I think you went above and beyond with what you did to Derpy here, makes Derpy's Finest Hour look merciful. Other than the whole magically preserved conciousness bit in DFH, that is. Good show.
No matter how Draco approaches future chapters, you definitely have my continued readership.
I'm not going to discredit this series like VAN proclaims... I'm just saying it wouldn't be wise to repeat the same process over. And I may have missed that step.
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To be fair, Draco is right in that Spring Breeze is the obvious throw-away, but also rest assured that I have no intention of making this a curb-stomp battle in one side's favor. Of course, this story is written the opposite of most in that I'm writing things from the villain's perspective, so you see what the villain is doing and don't know what the heroes are planning until their plan is put into action.
At first I was planning on just having it be a curb-stomp everypony dies fic, but I realized that this would be very boring to write and read, so I decided to go with something a bit more unpredictable that deranged bronies can still clop to And it is unpredictable as even I have not yet decided who should emerge victorious, which is why I always welcome ideas!
And that is what would make this story great. If you improve then I know you'll get more viewers.
1107695 Thanks... I am totally not sure what that refers to though
Nooooo why did spring breeze have to die?!?! She was the best character!