Edited by James Fire.
The vast, infinite cosmos can provide escape from the horrors of reality. To Twilight Sparkle, however, they're something of a home.
And it's a home that never stops calling her name.
Death smiles at us all; all a man can do is smile back.
Edited by James Fire.
The vast, infinite cosmos can provide escape from the horrors of reality. To Twilight Sparkle, however, they're something of a home.
And it's a home that never stops calling her name.
No need for the semicolon, a comma will do. And My name, perhaps?
To a foal?
Parts of the world.
Overall, I liked it. You seem to be good at this.
I usually don’t like SOL stories like this, but somehow this one was a very enjoyable experience.
Although, shouldn’t it have a ‘Sad’ tag?
9102180 I dunno about that. It didn't quite strike me as a "sad" story. Did it really come across as that to you?
I'm also flattered you like it. Thank you.
9102732
Well, it struck me as kinda sad, yeah. But, perhaps it is just me, don’t worry about it