In a letter to some students at a school, the Grim Reaper describes how a day in his life typically goes, starting at midnight, and ending at the stroke of midnight the next day.
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Vertigo22
Death smiles at us all; all a man can do is smile back.
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nuuu!!! not twilight velvet!! xD
11/10 I.G.N would read again.
Seriously though, great story.
7553904 Yeees! Her!
Also, thanks for reading!
7553922 Thank you so much! It means a lot!
I've read a few other stories that didn't have any dialogue in them, but none of them had quite the same style as this one. Unfortunately, while I think this one was fairly well written, it just wasn't my cup of tea. It was kind of funny at times but I feel like an actual scene with Death interacting with middle school foals would have been more entertaining.
Basically, I enjoy some of your other stories and I applaud you for trying something new, but this one just didn't work for me.
7554026 Many thanks for your honesty! It means a lot to me.
I do agree with you that a scene of Death interacting with the foals would've worked, but I wanted to implication to be that only a pony who's dead (or at "death's door") could see him.
Regardless, thanks again.
this gave me a great laugh thanks for the story, also to answer your question I thought it was great for having no dialogue.
7553935 lol no problem. was an interesting read. and you sly devil... acting evil in killing off twilight velvet. i think you and i know you took her in her sleep. spoiler cause i want others to put it together themselves, that or come up with something of their own.
I see what you did there.
7557660 I was hoping someone would comment on that line!
7557904
I'm just glad I was the first for once.
Seeing the title makes me recall the grim adventures of billy and Mandy
oooooooooo hehe head hate my oc he just revies after a while or fights back that be fun to read
I want to see what would happen if he encounters someone who just revives. CONSTANTLY.
*poke*
*thud* *gets back up*
Stop it
*poke*
*thud* gets back up*
Seriously, stop it.
7658315 I'll keep it in mind for a future story.
Good story, but needs editing. Shall i?
7806825 If you'd like to.
Awesome story Vertigo22 nice job.
Honestly I like dialogue in a story...though i think that this story is a strong exception from that.
Thanks for writing it I love everything about it.
8019266 You're... more than welcome! I guess. I'm not terribly accustomed to being thanked for a story.
If you'd like to see one of these stories with dialogue, there are three sequels. I think the second is easily the best.
8019284
Yeah i would love to see the sequels
8019294 Here you go.