A new land is merged with the My Little Pony world by a different way in each chapter, while there are humans living on the surface, its true ruler is the emperor of the underworld. The emperor's personality will be different each chapter, and the other countries will react accordingly to his behavior and actions.
Note: This series has some religious and mythical references in it, please do not argue over religions or mythology in the comment section.
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The biggest problem on the initial part of this story at the least is the listings. I am not sure if the Demons of Goedia will become relevant somehow down the line but for not at the least they just seem to be there for the sake of it. Same is true for the "Why i hate these gods" monologue. It happens late too, you spend a lot of time on naming things which seem irrelevant to me at the least. Could be it would have its place in historical chronicle or some saga where deeds of people are listed for posterity but those are not really read that much for a reason nowdays.
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I'm planning to use them for future chapters.
Why did you make the chapters so long?
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Because each chapter is a different story.
How many chapters long will this story be?
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I'm not too sure myself.
What is this a crossover with?
I'm very, very sorry to say this, don't be offended or delete after this.
Because, I have to speak the truth on how I really feel about this ( Only this chapter particularly. The other chapters are okay, mediocre, or I haven't even read them. THIS "Militaristic" AU is what I'm rather furious about. )
Alright then, this chapter particularly. Is one of the most stupidest, and dumbest AU story that I have ever seen in any fanfic I have ever read.
But don't worry, I explained why. Luckily, the main reason ISN'T about Sapien's Military or their "moral" beliefs/views ( mostly ). That is the most Badass thing ever. But sadly, it's f******** ruined due to only two reasons.
One; Speaking about Volvox and his own militaristic "version" of humanity. WHY are they too compliant, tolerant??!! And worse of all, letting themselves ( Especially a OP and GIGANTIC Demi-God like Volvox himself. ) being treated like doormats to the pathetic pacifist inhabitants of Equestria as a whole???!!!
Volvox is basically MAJOR LEAGUE'S ahead of Celestia, and the other Alicorns. Not to mention he is frickin huge!
Why should he listen to this annoying pacifist brat of a lousy ruler ( Celestia ), when he and the entirety of Sapien can just one-shot her entire pathetic kingdom ( And any other kingdom that tires to f*** with them too. ) to ashes? Or just squished her, and be done with it?
Or even better, threaten to use that space station of yours to DESTROY their own capital's and cities? Or use the army of the undead/ghosts. They can't do shit against that, probably not even Discord. So, them declaring "War" is the most purely dumb ( Even retarded ) decision that the Equestrian's will ever make.
And another problem with this is, WHY reveal military secrets, recklessly explained what they are, and what they are capabilities of. And even GIVE/TRADE out your own damned OP weapons to them all? Sure, they are obviously scared shitless of our superior might and firepower. But, it's a double edged sword. There is a REASON why militaries keep secrets to themselves.
Plus, giving out your highly advanced weapons like GUNS, AMMO, ARMOR, or Military Vehicles for example. To several medieval and magical fantasy pacifists ( The same ones that always being complaining babies, and is highly AGAINST your ruling ways, or your civilization being fully military. ), is purely stupidest/idiotic. ( I was almost gonna say retarded again. But I don't want to go too far. ) Your main character ( Volvox ) and his high command should have known better!!!!!!
You could have just refused the silly trade. Plus, what does Equestria ever have that is valuable to you? And finally, WHY does the pacifist ponies and even the other non-pony creatures that also preach friendship. Want with highly advanced weapons of war in the dang first place? That is just pure OOC ( Out-Of-Character ) right there.
Secondly; These HIGHLY naive, and dumb pacifist only care about white-and-black. NOT caring about the Grey Area like Volvox's humanity kingdom is. They HAVEN'T faced truly evil people from humanity, saw/faced the brutal and tragic warlike history like humanity once does, or the real monsters back on earth like Volvox and Sapien has did.
And I hate it when they always complain for mostly stupid reasons. ( Sure, it's about morals. BUT, it doesn't help you kill really evil beings/monsters, or win a very brutal war, or multiple wars! )
Especially that one scene, where Celestia herself is complaining like a little drama queen BITCH, over how she looks?? That's very OOC, and I thought that's Rarity's kind of thing?
And these highly dumb waste of air have a gull to talk back, order, or even threatened a war ( Which will obviously be heavily one-sided ) against a obviously Overpowered and Gigantic Demi-God, and his own super militarized nation that easily massacre them all to extinction with just a few weapons of mass destruction??!!
IF another similar militarized nation like Sapien appears. But the twist is that they are the Evil versions ( Like the alternate highly advanced versions of the German Nazi's from Wolfenstien, but times a hundred billion more overpowered and broken! ). And if these highly low IQ Equestrians tries that same old dumb tactic? We all know what's gonna happened.
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Various other series’, more common in the earlier chapters.
One more thing. Why rated E? These chapters, especially the Military, Tyrant, and Dystopia AU's. All talk, and show things that AREN'T meant for kids. That's for Teen to Mature here.
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When I started this series, I thought the E rating would be okay as long as the more graphic or sensitive stuff wasn’t shown and just talked about, and as long as it’s not too violent or graphic, I have thought about changing the rating a few times.
Sorry, but I got another issue I have to say. Specifically in this Sci-Fi AU. And only this long sentence so far.
Okay, okay. The ONLY one thing I can agree with the Equestrians, is the Marker from Dead Space. A BAD FRICKIN IDEA!!!!!! Don't do it!!!!!! I mean, why the heck didn't Volvox or any of his friends destroy it in the first place???!!! Are they so dependent without Equestria interfering or something? ( I may be a similar supreme emperor of my own Galactic/Universal Empire. But at least I have more common sense, and enough brain cells NOT to use something like a Marker for example. I be no better than Chaos, or the Tyranids!!! )
So, why does Volvox wait for Celestia of all people to finally destroy that nercomorph monstrosity??? When he has literally ALL THE TIME in the universe to find those things, and immediately destroy it all?! And also go after those hideous brethren moons while he is at it.
What I DON'T agree with them. Is them badmouthing about Scarecrow's Fear Gas, the Shredder Bullets, and those bullets and arrows that can change trajectory. The last one sounds so badass! So why let these pacifist fools spoil the fun of sci-fi war superiority?
( IF we can keep hollow point bullets in the present. Then having Shredder bullets, and trajectory bullets and arrows ain't such a "bad thing". Just as long that it WON'T go to the wrong hands, and only used against the most evil people, and monsters in existence. As for the Fear Gas? Same principle, but on the enemy and criminals. And who knows, that fear gas COULD force the criminals NOT to do crimes permanently, or used as a best torture method.
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Anyway, why does Volvox let these weak stomach, spineless, crybabies ( Equestria ) disapprove his STUFF all the time? It's his OWN SHIT! He can do what the heck he wants with them. What are they gonna do?
They CAN'T make a dent onto a superior Sci-Fi Empire that is many millennia ahead of civilization fans technological advancement. Even magic has limits, and I doubt that MLP Magic can compete against over five hundreds of atomic warheads, or worse.
Hey. It's me again. The "heavy criticised" guy. 😞
So, this is another AU that I'm also disappointed with. The "Utopia" verse.
Now this is just sad and pathetic! Didn't he threatened extinction a second ago? And now, he is just letting this super tiny, weak minded, physically weak, black-and-white world view pacifist, and super weak ass, princess wannabe ( Celestia ) to arrest him, and frickin imprisoned him with dumbass chains, shackles, and crap. Like he is part of a freak show!!??
I mean, LOOK at him;
He looked like a gigantic Kaiju-like badass. BUT this amazing imagery is cruelty pissed on, and all ruined, because he is a embarrassing, doormat-personified, cowardly L-O-S-E-R!
That let's a total ANT like Celestia ( Of all ponies/people in the entire Multiverse!!!! ) scolded him, and take away his "precious over a thousand years-old 'Utopia'" to the ground up???
What a total embarrassment!!!!!!!!!
No hard feelings. Because, I'm ain't the one that ruins a potentially good OC like this ( A BUNCH of times in fact. Considering the other AU's I also criticized. ) in the first place. 😒
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Rrrrrriiiiiiiigggghhhhhttttttt.
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Did you eventually read my "criticisms"? No hard feelings, after reading them.
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Yes, and none taken, I'm just busy with life right now, I'll come back and make another chapter when I have the time.