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Stolenalicorn


Take a minute to be kind to someone today, even if that someone is you. We all need a little more kindness, giving and receiving.

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The parallel universe is indispensable to fanfiction, even in stories where it isn’t addressed as fanfiction by it's nature takes a route that deviates from the established universe.
It allows for crossovers, mash-ups, what ifs, and all sorts of other fun stories.
My story begins in a nexus between universes, with a father who just wants to let his daughters meet their heroes, and finds himself charmed by the inhabitants once they’re no longer just characters to him.
With his knowledge he could fundamentally alter everything that happens; but his goal is for things to turn out the way they’re supposed to. But change is inevitable. Change for both him and the girls.
Things start light, but there are cracks that show the shadows cast. And secrets are not kept forever.
Relevant crossover tags that there aren't options for/I have far too many: Slayers, Dragon Ball Z, Tenchi Muyo, Monster Musume, Dungeons and Dragons, Minecraft, Undertale, Dark Souls
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A father goes to great lengths to find his daughter’s heroes. And finds himself being drawn into the world.
But even the brightest light casts a shadow. And things that could too easily be are seen. Things that demand action. Things that must be confronted. Things that must be destroyed.
But not forgotten. So life can move on.
But scars never really heal. They remind us of who we were. But with help from your friends you can confront even your past to find hope.
However hope and caring can lead you down a dark path. But your friends will fight to see you again, and find their own reward in your smile.
Fire will burn all that it touches, ever seeking more fuel for it’s own survival. But with care that fire can be tamed to bring out it’s brightest light.
There are times where you can help your friends. And times where they must help themselves.
Never forget that those closest to you may be afraid to seek your help, or are unable to ask, or may even demand that you stay away.
But no matter what you stand beside them.
Because your friends are family you invite into your life.

Chapters (69)
Comments ( 92 )

Loved it! :yay: I'm really curious to see what happens next!

I saw the Giga Drill and now you have my interest. Have a 'stache and a like. :moustache:

9619851
EXACTLY what I was hoping people would see. Inspiration for some of the background was pulled from anime including Gurren Lagann, and will at times be referenced.

9620532 I wonder how a pony would live with the Giga Drill as a cutie mark?

Wait a sec, he didn't apologize to Twilight yet!

Seeing as James is a Saiyan, I figured that this fic takes place in the distant future, after Goku and Vegeta's lifetime.

9621812
You're absolutely right.
Fortunately Twilight can be forgiving. And I'm leaning heavily on actions speak louder than words.

Pinkie on energy drinks scare me.

9621839
It goes into this later a bit, but what is actually the case is James often performs experimentation on himself. By technically he means that he's not actually a saiyan. It's the result of extensive genetic manipulation. I didn't post about that since that story has nothing to do with MLP.
I also go into why he's okay with modifying himself so much later but that's a plot point so I'm staying quiet about it for now.
Ask anything you like, I'll happily answer. I try to touch on background information but it doesn't all smoothly fit in.

9621872
That was inspired by a comic I saw once where the mythbusters tested giving her an energy drink (or something similar, I only saw it once.) She exploded.
*edited 1/24/2020*
Found it. It was coffee.
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Is it wrong that I kind of want to write a lunch conversation between Garrik and Applejack. These two polar opposites would be rather interesting. Garrik constantly lying but throwing in just enough truth to be believable and even being proud that he's lying when caught.

James has how many wives!?

9631002
This requires a lot of explanation.
Lucca: met her and married when young (comparatively). This is his wife. Married to her longest (nearly two centuries now) and they actually are a couple.
From here Jurai got political power over him and Lady Seto has used him as a tool to gain political influence in other universes. Every time I've seen her do this it's been through marriage.
Tenyo: Political Marriage. They're friends, that's it. Lady Seto's niece (removed by a bit) and her primary role in being there is to keep an eye on him for Seto.
Liara: Political Marriage. As shown in Mass Effect one she doesn't particularly care if she's with someone who's already in a relationship. But she's not involved with him, doesn't even live in the same building. Married only as a technicality. She's there because Seto wanted her skills and information web in her universe Liara is there because James's Technology and access to multiple universes provides her with resources she doesn't have access to any other way.
Tali: This time it's in a grey area, It was political at first on his part. As pointed out, women are his weakness and with all the traits Tali shares with Lucca he found himself in that part that so many jerks like him fall into. And he at first literally ran away from her. He still went out of his way to help her and Tenyo noted this. As an admiral in the Quarian fleet she was also a political figure. This served as too tempting bait for Seto to pass up and set a trap to get them together. She also worked to get Lucca on board, smoothing over the fight James and Lucca were having (that he admits to being on the wrong side of). For specifics, I don't actually know as in Tenchi Seto manages to get groups of women to go after the same guy and be okay with it in the end with no explanation.
I'm not trying to say James is a good guy, definitely not a moral guy. Also, pointed out later, none of these women are stuck with him. They're free to pursue other relationships.

TL;DR: 4

9631002
This will look much worse before it gets better. Just remember, Airi (I just realized I've been misspelling her name) planned this out with Tenyo.

9646730
The next one actually calls back to The Road Not Taken.

holy shit, this was started only may of this year to now and its over a hundred thousand words thats fucking insane

9658390
I started posting in May. I've been writing this for over a year and I spend most of my free time writing as stress relief.

9658402
ahh ok, well that tosses out my theory that you had a tardis

9658408
I like your theory better though.

9658416
lol well we'll go with that theory than XD

Just read the first chapter, it's on a good start, now I will be reading the rest of this story this week and let know my thoughts.Still I am impress by your writing output in so little time. Always a sucker human turned pony stories....




By the way if you are interested in wanting another cover art for yourself let me know, I am open for commissions and here is the ling to my DA gallery: https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku

9681310
Well the output has a few reasons, including that I started a year ago and just started posting recently.
And thanks for the offer, I would happily commission work, had I money.
I'll appreciate your comments when you do read the rest of my story. I will be losing internet this week but I'll be getting back as soon as I can, I just have no idea how long that could be.

So many references to chrono trigger. :rainbowkiss:

9682048
That is my absolute FAVORITE game. So yeah, had to have them.
You notice Lucca in my Avatar?

ahhh Lina Inverse
the most powerful black magic user on her planet

9683854
Yes. I sprinkle Slayers references throughout the story. And Xellos will make an appearance himself later.
Knowledge of Slayers will help as I approach the climax.

A story this big has only 16 Likes!? What the heck is going on? I must take a look at this immediately... tomorrow.

9687080
I'm writing this one mostly for stress relief for myself, so it's not emotionally hitting like Forgettable was nor is it Pinkie goofing off like A Simple Question.
I'm glad that anyone has liked it and I'm happy you've found it too. I hope you enjoy my story so far when you do read it.
Thank you for coming by.

9687096 It is more of not wanting such effort to go to waste. Not to be rude, but I have never heard of you or any other works you may have created. I will reserve my opinion until I have read some of it. Just in case this one is not to my taste, do you have another one you recommend?

9687715
That's perfectly understandable.
Of my other stories, I'd recommend Forgettable. It is a sad story though.
As for Chapters in this story if you'd rather skip some of the fluff (the fluff has little things that come up but nothing you have to know to get through. I'd say 1,2,3,4,6,12,16,18,19,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,32,35,36,37,38,39,40,44 (some of that cuts out small story lines that come up throughout the story but it;s not completely necessary.)
Now that's a long list for chapters and you'll probably have a good idea of what you think of the story before getting through half that. I would still recommend getting through 19. If you decide it's not worth it before then that's alright and still thanks for reading.

9688034 Long stories have never bugged me. Feel free to check out my own works for emphasis. I will say the synopsis is a heck of a thing. Now I actually want to read it for my own reasons rather than not wanting work to go to waste.

9688328
Thank you.:twilightsmile:
A Simple Question is a side story to this one and while it starts in chapter one it jumps ahead a couple times and ends about chapter 16 or 17.

Interesting. There seems to be many, many universes meshed into one here. It would be confusing as all get-out, if I did not know the references.

9688392
Yeah, this story actually starts long before what's posted here. I've been writing it for years.

A tip from an experienced writer: when switching scenes like at the end where the scene switched from Twilight to Celestia, you want some sort of indicator such as a series of asterisks or hyphens.

9688433
Thanks, I try to keep on that.

Strangest for Twilight was a short humanoid skeleton. It terrified her at first, however once it started telling bad puns she couldn't help but calm down a bit and even laugh at some of the terrible jokes. He offered them a food he called a 'dog. Twilight couldn't help but remember James saying that his people killed and ate animals as she looked at the food.

SANS!!! :pinkiehappy:

Apple Bloom smiled as she opened it up. “We're going to find out where it goes!” She announced. “We're going to get explorer cutie marks!”

Uh oh...

Multi-crossovers including dragonball usually aren't very good. I hope you don't screw up threat levels like most dragonball crossovers do.

Aren't senzu beans supposed to be ludicrously difficult to grow, along with taking a butteload of time to do said growing?

9890591
Being honest I don't remember. I just know that Yajirobe ate them all.

9888868
Yeah, and I'm not going to say I do things right. I hope you can forgive the mistakes that will inevitably happen. (Honestly even in Dragon Ball threats aren't exactly consistent.)

I'm surprised nobody decked that fucking sociopath in the face.

9923945
Lady Seto? Trust me, nobody would dare do that. Goes along with the whole "power levels are meaningless" not her personally, but her ship is certainly powerful enough. She earned the title of "The Devil Princess."
Or do you mean James? Trust me, plenty have.

9929714
Chapters 22 through 26 for the reason.
TL;DR - Different Rainbow Dash. He killed her friend. She wants revenge.

9942081
Yeah, there was an Undertale inspired chapter earlier, and it follows continuity from before this story.

Don't worry I've made it a point to never go longer than sixty four hours. Not after what happened to my dad when he went seventy, or my friend who went for seventy two. Things get a little weird when you've been awake that long.

Oh, indeed they do. >_<

9951050
Yeah, I'm not even going to try that one again.

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