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When the Reapers were defeated at the battle of Earth, the galaxy believed that Shepard was killed with the activation of the Crucible super-weapon. However, known for embracing the impossible and overcoming these challenges.

Shepard found himself in the vast waste of a desert of an uncharted planet, fully healed and thoroughly equipped. Finding his way back to the Systems Alliance might prove difficult, but what would a good challenge be if it's easy to solve?

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Wow, I'm not gonna lie, I was waiting for something like that. I hope it turns out good, since the lack of good Mass Effect crossovers lately (maybe with the exception of MEEoK) is beginning to drive me crazy ;).
There are a few mistakes, but it's generally written well enough.

United fleet

I believe it should be 'United Fleet' if you treat it as a name, or 'united fleet' if it's just an expression (which from my Mass Effect lore knowledge, it is).

Also, these Celestia and Luna tags being before the rest kind of speed up my heartrate, since I'm one of those people much more liking the royal sisters than any other characters.
But it's your story and it's entirely up to you to decide what you want to do with it, and I don't want you to feel pressured (obviously).
Good luck writing!

9608244

Thanks, and totally agree! There aren't that many Mass Effect stories as it used to, and even less so that still release new chapters. It's a shame really, it's such a rich universe with awesome characters!

9609897

Probably will, when she finds out.

This is looking good.
One question you did not mention about killing all synthetics with reapers in last choice did that means you have changed it?

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