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Quillian Inkheart


I'm still here! Just not here very often.

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Thanks God somebody wrote something GOOD on the whole mafia premise! Please do continue this! Im excited to see where this goes!!

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Hah! Well, thank you. I was watching movies like "The Godfather" and I said to myself, why can't I make this into a tragic romance? So I did. I believe I've already got up to page 124 (unedited and with improper spacing) already complete. It's going to take some time to edit and convert, but there shouldn't be much waiting involved.

- Quillian Inkheart

Quality and originality. Me likey!

Honestly, this is a breath of fresh air that VinylTavia needed. And well written too!

Yes yes yes yes YESSSSSSS! Oh my god this chapter turned out better then expected! I'll be counting down the days till' the next one's up! :rainbowkiss:

Very interesting fic, I don't often read Mafia fics but I'm enjoying it so far! It's honestly a refreshing take on the OctaSratch ship.

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Thank you very much. I hope you stick with me till the end. I've got somewhere around 18 chapters already completed and am going through the editorial and re-writing process now. That means, barring any insanity with my life, there should be little delay between updates for a while.

You have my attention.

Let's see if you can keep it.

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I will try. Thankfully, I'm good at writing. It's what I do best. :pinkiehappy:

That was something else. I love it. Keep up the good work.

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Wow, did I really not reply to this? :rainbowlaugh: Sorry.

Yeah, I decided to take the two of them in a new direction entirely. I'm a fan of OctiScratch. It's pretty obvious, really. :twilightblush: But I enjoy mixing things up a bit, and Legacy is just that.

Vivian is a badass and I love it. Soon the OctaScratch ship will set sail.

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Hehe. This fic is a lot faster to start the OctaScratch than my other one; it's established right from the get-go. And yes, Vivian is a badass.

first chapter and i love it already.

I love your work man:rainbowkiss:

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Thank you! It's good to see you again, Bass. :twilightsmile:

You might be pleased to know that I've got the first Bonus Chapter for Bassdrops and Bowstrings 98% done.

OH MY LUNA YES. Dude i love whats happing right know, cant wait for more:pinkiehappy:

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And I am very pleased that the bonus chapter is almost done.:trollestia:

I'm glad to see I wasn't disappointed. Well, only with the fact there are too few chapters.

Seems promising... as long as the plot doesn't drudge on or speed up like a rocket. That's what I feel. The characters are a tad cliché, but not in a turn-off way. Not exactly relatable, but I feel if done correctly can be felt through a kind of... extreme. Like, this is what I could become, or show a story of recovery in a balls-to-the-wall kinda way.

Looking forward to reading more. You had my interest - now you have my attention.

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Well thank you, friend. However, I think this story might take a twist that you didn't expect; it jumps back into their pasts to develop them, revealing what happened to tear them apart and what made them who they are today. Meanwhile, in present day, the story unfolds with... well, about all you can expect from a tragic romance, and then some. :twilightsmile: Thanks for reading!

- Quillian B. Inkheart

9072663 So, a story of duality? Neat. Figure you'd elaborate on their past, but wasn't sure how. Flashbacks or an actual scene break. I'm looking forward to seeing how you show their emotional struggles and evolution.

Again, looking forward to it.

9072663 Well, can't say I'm not awaiting the next chapter.

Hey I was wondering when's the next chapter coming out, it's been a few months and I've been waiting for this to get updated :fluttercry:

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Sorry, things have been... unfortunate lately. I've been struggling to find the motivation to write. The chapter is stuck at about 56% right now. I'll make sure to get some more of it done tonight, but things are going to be very slow for a little bit.

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Sorry man, I didn't know you were going through some stuff... :fluttershysad:

Take all the time you need, just needed a little status update on the story, and I hope you'll be able to find that motivation to write because you are very good at it.

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Thank you very much, both for the compliment and for being understanding.

And it's okay; it's small stuff, in the grand scheme. Nothing like health issues or family troubles; just a lot of little personal crap piling up.

I'll work doubly hard to get that chapter out; I don't like to disappoint my readers.

This was amazing. :pinkiegasp:

If I'd ever actually cry at a story...

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Danke schoen! I hope you enjoy the chapters to come. :twilightsmile:

Noooo! I'm out of chapters! ;-;
I can't wait until the next update! This is an amazing read! :D

I was a bit disappointed to see the word count for this chapter, but the content has more then made up for it.

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Yes, this isn't a very long chapter, but for good reason. I didn't want to pad it with needless filler and take away from the emotional impact delivered in this scene.

Comment posted by Quillian Inkheart deleted Feb 25th, 2019

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A good point, one I struggle to follow myself :twilightsheepish:

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It's not just you, believe me. I had to rewrite it several times to trim it down; hence why it took so long. :twilightsheepish:

Ouch, now that is some detailed discription of drugs.
Enjoyable, and it gets the point across, but... wow.

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Yeah, like I said in my Author's Note, I actually spoke with ex-heroin users to make this chapter as close to reality as possible. They described some pretty... intense things and I captured them as best as I could. I want the readers to feel that drug in their veins in this chapter. I want them to understand exactly what is going through Vivian's mind. That'll make what comes later even sweeter.

If you thought my details on drugs were on point, wait till you see how I handle her withdrawal... But that's a Chapter for another time!

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Part of me dreads it, but I shall eagerly await the phantom pains you have to give. xD

Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

I'm suddenly reminded of a quote from the Anita Blake series:

"I'd known Edward for years and up until that point I'd always thought I actually KNEW him. I was wrong. Edward the Hitman was scary, but Edward the family man was beyond terrifying; those kids may not have been his, but the ones who'd taken them were going to regret doing so for the rest of their - what I was certain would extremely short - lives."

This is kinda the vibe I'm getting off Ophilia and Vivian

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Oh, you have no idea.

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The chapter "Flowing Through Your Veins" is a fair example of how sex will be displayed in this series. No graphic scenes, but there will be strong implication. It's kinda like soft-core; the sex is happening on screen, but you're not seeing any details.

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Looking forward to finding out then!

I love the high school musical flashback exposition. It provides a nice contrast to the Godfather like Mafioso theme of the previous chapters. In assuming the kidnapping marks the beginning of tavi's career with her familys mafia

This entire chapter just screams "the Godfather". While I'd never imagined either Octavia or vinyl being in a mafia style story, I find myself loving it

Drugs are an absolute bitch, especially heroin.

Absolutely LOVING this fic so far
Its been too long since I've found an underworld/mafia themed story as good as this. Keep it up please. My only question is if we will see any MLP locations or other characters though I'm assuming the gang they're going after is a reference to the diamond dogs lol

Heheheheh
I'm looking forward to seeing some more combat, even more so for VeeVee.

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Well, Neo is a reference to Neon Lights. I'm planning on a few other character showing up at some point or another, but no clues.

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