Ophilia Melody is the Silencer; an Enforcer and assassin for the Melody Mafia Family. Vivian Scratch is VeeVee; a gang boss and ex-fiend. Their pasts are linked by love; their present, by violence. But have they changed too much to be together?
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Yes yes yes yes YESSSSSSS! Oh my god this chapter turned out better then expected! I'll be counting down the days till' the next one's up!
Loving it!
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Why, thank you both.
Very interesting fic, I don't often read Mafia fics but I'm enjoying it so far! It's honestly a refreshing take on the OctaSratch ship.
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Thank you very much. I hope you stick with me till the end. I've got somewhere around 18 chapters already completed and am going through the editorial and re-writing process now. That means, barring any insanity with my life, there should be little delay between updates for a while.
You have my attention.
Let's see if you can keep it.
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I will try. Thankfully, I'm good at writing. It's what I do best.
Vivian is a badass and I love it. Soon the OctaScratch ship will set sail.
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Hehe. This fic is a lot faster to start the OctaScratch than my other one; it's established right from the get-go. And yes, Vivian is a badass.
OH MY LUNA YES. Dude i love whats happing right know, cant wait for more
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And I am very pleased that the bonus chapter is almost done.
I'm glad to see I wasn't disappointed. Well, only with the fact there are too few chapters.
Seems promising... as long as the plot doesn't drudge on or speed up like a rocket. That's what I feel. The characters are a tad cliché, but not in a turn-off way. Not exactly relatable, but I feel if done correctly can be felt through a kind of... extreme. Like, this is what I could become, or show a story of recovery in a balls-to-the-wall kinda way.
Looking forward to reading more. You had my interest - now you have my attention.
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Well thank you, friend. However, I think this story might take a twist that you didn't expect; it jumps back into their pasts to develop them, revealing what happened to tear them apart and what made them who they are today. Meanwhile, in present day, the story unfolds with... well, about all you can expect from a tragic romance, and then some. Thanks for reading!
- Quillian B. Inkheart
9072663 So, a story of duality? Neat. Figure you'd elaborate on their past, but wasn't sure how. Flashbacks or an actual scene break. I'm looking forward to seeing how you show their emotional struggles and evolution.
Again, looking forward to it.
9072663 Well, can't say I'm not awaiting the next chapter.
Hey I was wondering when's the next chapter coming out, it's been a few months and I've been waiting for this to get updated
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Sorry, things have been... unfortunate lately. I've been struggling to find the motivation to write. The chapter is stuck at about 56% right now. I'll make sure to get some more of it done tonight, but things are going to be very slow for a little bit.
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Sorry man, I didn't know you were going through some stuff...
Take all the time you need, just needed a little status update on the story, and I hope you'll be able to find that motivation to write because you are very good at it.
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Thank you very much, both for the compliment and for being understanding.
And it's okay; it's small stuff, in the grand scheme. Nothing like health issues or family troubles; just a lot of little personal crap piling up.
I'll work doubly hard to get that chapter out; I don't like to disappoint my readers.
Nice. Classic noir, with a modern zest. You're style is an easy read and you've characterized the actors well.
Vinyl and Octavia are some of my favorite characters! I like seeing them like this, it’s a really cool spin on these two people!